Chapter 1:
Here I am again. Two people, one soul. How did this happen?
Originally, I was a human. Or, to be exact, a very smart human. She discovered the 'planes' and the 'otherworlds', and then she met me. I had never seen a human, and apparently she had never seen a 'living' shadow. She said the only shadows they had were created from light. Ridiculous, I thought! Then, Maria found out about her discovering the Planes, and killed her. I would never let that happen, so I took the blow. A dead shadow's soul and mind latch on to the closest living thing that is non-shadow, which was her. Now I am part of two bodies, but I am only one soul. And that's where my story starts. Again.
Her, or as I should say, 'Macci', had saved me twice now. As I fell into the darkness, I was reborn again into her. So now, I am not one body, but two, who are joined together by a single rope, a soul, a mind.
So, now, as I lay here in the darkness, I see a figure over me. It's Maria.
"I'm not Maria." says the voice softly. I realize it's Macci. I realize it's me.
How do you like it? And if you want to join in on the action, go to Otherworlds RPG on the TBG forums.
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It seems like you have some skill, I myself wouldn't write about SOnic
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P-Cupcake wrote:
Scratchthatguys wrote:
It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!
The title. And the name Maria....
Both have to do with Sonic. :s
Check the RPG for proof that it's not sonic.
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PlutoIsHades wrote:
P-Cupcake wrote:
Scratchthatguys wrote:
It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!
The title. And the name Maria....
Both have to do with Sonic. :sCheck the RPG for proof that it's not sonic.
But it could mislead some people who don't bother to look at stuff into believing it's Sonic.
(but I do get this isn't Sonic)
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This seems like a combination of a certain anthromorphic video game and your own creation. All it needs now is the mention of 'Gerald', 'perfect life form', or 'ARK', and it'll be a fanfict.
It's pretty surpising how close you can get to a fanfict without much mention.
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PlutoIsHades wrote:
P-Cupcake wrote:
Scratchthatguys wrote:
It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!
The title. And the name Maria....
Both have to do with Sonic. :sCheck the RPG for proof that it's not sonic.
cuzzaWAH?! It sounds like its about sonic
Last edited by Luke121 (2011-10-17 09:36:24)
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