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#1 2011-10-15 21:37:37

Scratchthatguys
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Shadow

Chapter 1:
Here I am again. Two people, one soul. How did this happen?

Originally, I was a human. Or, to be exact, a very smart human. She discovered the 'planes' and the 'otherworlds', and then she met me. I had never seen a human, and apparently she had never seen a 'living' shadow. She said the only shadows they had were created from light. Ridiculous, I thought! Then, Maria found out about her discovering the Planes, and killed her. I would never let that happen, so I took the blow. A dead shadow's soul and mind latch on to the closest living thing that is non-shadow, which was her. Now I am part of two bodies, but I am only one soul. And that's where my story starts. Again.

Her, or as I should say, 'Macci', had saved me twice now. As I fell into the darkness, I was reborn again into her. So now, I am not one body, but two, who are joined together by a single rope, a soul, a mind.

So, now, as I lay here in the darkness, I see a figure over me. It's Maria.
"I'm not Maria." says the voice softly. I realize it's Macci. I realize it's me.

How do you like it? And if you want to join in on the action, go to Otherworlds RPG on the TBG forums.

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#2 2011-10-15 21:39:51

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Re: Shadow

Oh god not more sonic fanfiction


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#3 2011-10-15 21:41:04

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Re: Shadow

It seems like you have some skill, I myself wouldn't write about SOnic


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#4 2011-10-16 07:18:36

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Re: Shadow

It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!

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#5 2011-10-16 07:20:40

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Re: Shadow

Scratchthatguys wrote:

It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!

The title. And the name Maria....

Both have to do with Sonic. :s


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#6 2011-10-16 07:24:22

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Re: Shadow

P-Cupcake wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!

The title. And the name Maria....

Both have to do with Sonic. :s

Check the RPG for proof that it's not sonic.


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#7 2011-10-16 07:39:01

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Re: Shadow

PlutoIsHades wrote:

P-Cupcake wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!

The title. And the name Maria....

Both have to do with Sonic. :s

Check the RPG for proof that it's not sonic.

But it could mislead some people who don't bother to look at stuff into believing it's Sonic.  hmm

(but I do get this isn't Sonic)

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#8 2011-10-17 09:29:57

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Re: Shadow

This seems like a combination of a certain anthromorphic video game and your own creation.  All it needs now is the mention of 'Gerald', 'perfect life form', or 'ARK', and it'll be a fanfict.

It's pretty surpising how close you can get to a fanfict without much mention.

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#9 2011-10-17 09:33:16

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Re: Shadow

PlutoIsHades wrote:

P-Cupcake wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

It's not sonic fanfiction! What? I didn't even mention Sonic once!

The title. And the name Maria....

Both have to do with Sonic. :s

Check the RPG for proof that it's not sonic.

cuzzaWAH?! It sounds like its about sonic

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