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Lyrics for Breaking my Heart:

[Slow build up of background music which gets more and more intense]
My mind's torn asunder
I can't think or move
My secrets you plunder
What are you trying to prove?

[sad melody]

My head's splitting open
My sorrow spilling open
My windpipe you're choking
My blood splattered all about

Chorus
Cause you're breaking my heart,
Your eating my soul
You'll tear me apart
But you won't let me go...

I'm drowning in my pain
But you'll kill me again
I don't even know why
No matter how I try...

Endless agony
This is a tragedy
Eternal sea I'm trapped in
Forever I can't win, win, win.....

Cause you're breaking my heart,
Your eating my soul
You'll tear me apart
But you won't let me go...

I'd rather you had knives
Fire and steel nails
I have a million lives
But my escapes always fail...

[softer, mourning tone]

I can't run and I can't hide
You're destroying me from inside
My torment will never end
And my wounds will never mend

Oh...
[fade out]

It sucks without the rhytm >_<

I'd love to be your bassist but I'm probably a few years and miles younger and away from you. 
I'm still working on music with my band that consists of my brothers on guitar and drums, me on bass, and today we found a neighborhood through a path in the woods and found a second guitarist. 
I started writing a song, and the chorus of that song is the verse of the new song.
The chorus of the new song was when we were looking through our old computer and found some of my older brother's recordings from when he was in fourth grade. He wrote stupid songs with no instrumentals. We found one called "Fruit Roll-Up," and the lyrics were terrible but the melody was incredibly catchy. Here are the original lyrics which we WILL change:

midnightleopard wrote:

CHORUS:
Oh my gawwwwwdd
Now my tounge tastes
just like a fruit roll-up
and the fruit roll-up tastes good.
And the fruit roll-up tastes good.

We have some work to do...

sanddude wrote:

EmperorEvil wrote:

I'd love to be your bassist but I'm probably a few years and miles younger and away from you. 
I'm still working on music with my band that consists of my brothers on guitar and drums, me on bass, and today we found a neighborhood through a path in the woods and found a second guitarist. 
I started writing a song, and the chorus of that song is the verse of the new song.
The chorus of the new song was when we were looking through our old computer and found some of my older brother's recordings from when he was in fourth grade. He wrote stupid songs with no instrumentals. We found one called "Fruit Roll-Up," and the lyrics were terrible but the melody was incredibly catchy. Here are the original lyrics which we WILL change:

midnightleopard wrote:

CHORUS:
Oh my gawwwwwdd
Now my tounge tastes
just like a fruit roll-up
and the fruit roll-up tastes good.
And the fruit roll-up tastes good.

We have some work to do...

I actually thought I'd be younger then you. See, I'm almost 11.

And yes, you do have some work to do.

What about my songs?

By the way, I'm turning 12 this year.

The 'mature' songs don't really seem all that mature

sanddude wrote:

Andres-Vander wrote:

The 'mature' songs don't really seem all that mature

Their not that mature, but they aren't necessarily specifically mature.

My bad I was looking at helltank's song and thought it was one of yours

sanddude wrote:

If I wrote those lyrics, my mom would rush me to a mental hospital. =P So, helltank has lived up to his claim that he has very dark lyrics.

Sounds sort of like an insult here...are you saying that helltank should seek treatment of some kind?

sanddude wrote:

I actually thought I'd be younger then you. See, I'm almost 11.

And yes, you do have some work to do.

Nice man!    I'm almost twelve (a few months, maybe.) 5th or sixth grade?

Paddle2See wrote:

Sounds sort of like an insult here...are you saying that helltank should seek treatment of some kind?

Not intended, I see that what he means is that his parents aren't used to him being cold or dark in his writing.

sanddude wrote:

EmperorEvil wrote:

sanddude wrote:

I actually thought I'd be younger then you. See, I'm almost 11.

And yes, you do have some work to do.

Nice man!    I'm almost twelve (a few months, maybe.) 5th or sixth grade?

Paddle2See wrote:

Sounds sort of like an insult here...are you saying that helltank should seek treatment of some kind?

Not intended, I see that what he means is that his parents aren't used to him being cold or dark in his writing.

5th.

And yes, to a certain extent.

I'm sixth but I sort of assumed that you were 15, idk why I just assumed that.

what kind of name is Diatomaceous

rufflebee wrote:

what kind of name is Diatomaceous

Definition is here.  Along with pretty much any other word you might want to know.

rufflebee wrote:

Paddle2See wrote:

rufflebee wrote:

what kind of name is Diatomaceous

Definition is here.  Along with pretty much any other word you might want to know.

i know what it means (i looked it up in my dictionary)
i was asking what kind of name it is, not what kind of word it is

i don't see how "consisting of, or relating to fossils" is relevant to his band and i am curious to know why they chose that name

It was originally Diatomaecous Earth, which is a scientific chemical, but that name was already taken, so we dropped the "earth".