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#1 2010-11-28 08:37:08
- Scratchthatguys
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- Registered: 2010-07-16
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Criminal Investigatons Team
As I stared off into the immense darkness below, I showed no fear.
Death always gives you the best ideas at times.
So as I looked over my shoulder, my only thought was clear.
Jump.
My feet left the ground as quickly as I landed. It felt like forever.
Suddenly, the scene sprang to life.
I was falling.
Falling.
I couldn't think. Couldn't move. Couldn't do anything.
I was going to die.
As I fell, I looked down. The brown ground was getting closer, fast. As my body hit the ground with incredible force, my last thought was defeat.
I had lost.
How do you like it so far? I'm going to keep writing while I'm at church.
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#3 2010-11-28 12:17:45
- Blade-Edge
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- Registered: 2009-06-13
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Criminal Investigatons Team
What's this character's name?
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#4 2010-11-28 12:19:41
- Kileymeister
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- Registered: 2008-04-17
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Criminal Investigatons Team
Blade-Edge wrote:
What's this character's name?
Does s/he need one? I wrote a short story with no names at all once and thought it was fine.
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#5 2010-11-28 12:19:48
Re: Criminal Investigatons Team
Short, but cool (I couldn't do much better)!
Oh, and 600th post. 
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#6 2010-11-28 12:24:32
- Blade-Edge
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- Registered: 2009-06-13
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Re: Criminal Investigatons Team
Kileymeister wrote:
Blade-Edge wrote:
What's this character's name?
Does s/he need one? I wrote a short story with no names at all once and thought it was fine.
No, it doesn't need one
But I'm betting it's gonna be maxis again
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