Scratch

Edited my book!

Still not done, and I lost the original draft.

Could you just leave me alone for once, and butt out of my stuff? This was for people who actually READ and care about my stuff.

Last edited by Scratchthatguys (2010-10-29 18:30:40)

It's only part of it- I lost the original draft.

Blade-Edge wrote:

I don't see the reason of posting it, then, if you don't even have the good draft of it
It's like making a sandwich and then staring at it instead of eating it

I've done that before. BTW, I've memorized the charries' names.

Maxis
James
Dylan
Angelina
Zack
Johnathan

These characters also have personalities I haven't forgot.

Maxis: Hacker, talks a lot, leader.
Cody: Very, very bad gas. Eats a lot, and I mean he can eat 20 hot dogs in 5 minutes.
Dylan: Co-leader.
Angelina: Can change age at will, 6 years old.
James: A very good chef.
Johnathan: He's very quiet and can sink into shadows. He also has a crush on a girl we met in Atlanta.

BlazeAstro wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

These characters also have personalities I haven't forgot.

Maxis: Hacker, talks a lot, leader.
Cody: Very, very bad gas. Eats a lot, and I mean he can eat 20 hot dogs in 5 minutes.
Dylan: Co-leader.
Angelina: Can change age at will, 6 years old.
James: A very good chef.
Johnathan: He's very quiet and can sink into shadows. He also has a crush on a girl we met in Atlanta.

wouldnt it be common sense when writing books to remember that?

Yes, but I haven't opened the draft in about 5 weeks. And it's on my flash drive, I just want to edit the book before I release it.

wait now you have superpowers?

Try to not use "so" as much, even if it's from the perspective of a teenager or something.  Just a suggestion, you don't need to listen to it.

Blade-Edge wrote:

Those aren't really personality types
What is a hacker? Using that as a personality makes me think of him as a greasy nerd who sits at a five screen computer station all day writing codes and being boring
Co-leader???? Of what? Shouldn't he have been above gassy then?
And a person who can change their age at will. Okay whatever, your story. Doesn't say anything about her attitude though.
Good chef. Gordon Ramsey is a good chef, and he swears all the time. That's the character I guess this guy is, right?
And the guy 'we' met in Atlanta. What. Self inclusion?

Hacker is a guy who can open a laptop and get into a website's database in 5 minutes.
Co-Leader is just a guy who helps a lot.
Changes age at will. Her attitude changes with the age.
Good chef. Well, he DOES swear a lot, but only in times of need.
And the girl 'we' met in Atlanta. 'We' as in the group of kids and teens who have been on the run for most of their lives growing up with wolves etc., etc.

Scratchthatguys wrote:

'So yeah. Another book.'
I bet that's what most people are thinking. I said MOST, and I know that some people are thinking that, but I'm not naming names because I don't exactly know anyone who is most likely thinking that.

But hey, I'm writing a book, and if your gonna start a discussion, then make a discussion thread for it.

We're discussing the book. so shouldn't we stay here?

And maybe call the book Maximum Ride, that sounds good.

You have wings, the main character is Maxis, so it's a perfect fit.

Scratchthatguys wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

Scratchthatguys wrote:

'So yeah. Another book.'
I bet that's what most people are thinking. I said MOST, and I know that some people are thinking that, but I'm not naming names because I don't exactly know anyone who is most likely thinking that.

But hey, I'm writing a book, and if your gonna start a discussion, then make a discussion thread for it.

We're discussing the book. so shouldn't we stay here?

And maybe call the book Maximum Ride, that sounds good.

You have wings I clearly stated claws, not wings., the main character is Maxis, so it's a perfect fit.

You got it wrong. As I noted in red, not wings.

It said wings the first time I read it, and I didn't bother to reread today.