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Nice! The head looks a bit akward though but I really love it! Definately give it an evo.

Last edited by wiimaster (2010-05-14 20:48:35)

If you want mindless complements, skip this. But if you want to get better, then prepare to have you sprite ripped apart.

The lighting is odd. Very rarely does something light up to down like that.
You should put the highlights at parts that stick out, such as it's stomach and face, instead of "Top to bottom".

I only modified your colors a little because I liked the color choice, but it could use some darker colors.


I modified the intensity and added more highlights.

Could be a bit lighter, but oh well. It's a 5 minute edit.

Edit:
I forgot, I suggest working on a gray background so your colors aren't yoo light in comparative had you made a sprite used in a game, like they were here.

Last edited by Common_Sense (2010-05-14 21:13:26)

I expect to see a revised #494 ._. And possibly the 495 and 496.

Common_Sense wrote:

I expect to see a revised #494 ._. And possibly the 495 and 496.

Here it is, based on your advice and provided color scheme.

wow    you take spriting very seriously! I think it looks great! ...course, i'm no expert, but that's just my opinion.

Last edited by Sonick (2010-05-14 22:28:05)

Nice. You should make more. Maybe a water and fire one.

Looks like a spinoff of totodile if you ask me

here are the fire and water starter, tell me what should be improved.

bump

joeisawesome wrote:

any criticism at all?

I would say the water one needs work. The rest are fantastic. 

Aidan wrote:

The fire one looks a bit like Gastly.

It's supposed to be a meteorite.

Never, ever dither on fire.
Here's a quick (Not so good) Example of what you could do. Uses same colors.

Last edited by Common_Sense (2010-05-16 20:48:01)