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#76 2013-04-14 00:08:37

zubblewu
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

soupoftomato wrote:

As he began to lower his souls

typo?

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#77 2013-04-14 00:10:45

Sellout
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

zubblewu wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

As he began to lower his souls

typo?

You just are too shallow to understand. I bet you haven't even found your natural high.

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#78 2013-04-14 00:12:02

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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

zubblewu wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

As he began to lower his souls

typo?

Nah you got to sell your soul before you can use special shoes

Where have you been?

I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos

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#79 2013-04-14 00:12:09

zubblewu
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

u broke my heart
i feel so empty
and not high
sad

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#80 2013-04-14 00:13:14

zubblewu
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

soupoftomato wrote:

zubblewu wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

As he began to lower his souls

typo?

Nah you got to sell your soul before you can use special shoes

Where have you been?

oh
i must have been banned longer than i thought

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#81 2013-04-14 00:14:18

Sellout
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

zubblewu wrote:

u broke my heart
i feel so empty
and not high
sad

You broke mine first. You deserved it.

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#82 2013-04-14 00:15:46

zubblewu
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

Sellout wrote:

zubblewu wrote:

u broke my heart
i feel so empty
and not high
sad

You broke mine first. You deserved it.

i don't believe in karma

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#83 2013-04-14 00:18:00

Sellout
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

zubblewu wrote:

Sellout wrote:

zubblewu wrote:

u broke my heart
i feel so empty
and not high
sad

You broke mine first. You deserved it.

i don't believe in karma

I don't either, but I believe in love  sad

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#84 2013-04-14 00:20:29

soupoftomato
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

Sellout wrote:

zubblewu wrote:

Sellout wrote:

You broke mine first. You deserved it.

i don't believe in karma

I don't either, but I believe in love  sad

AWWW

I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos

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#85 2013-04-14 00:21:57

zubblewu
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

Sellout wrote:

zubblewu wrote:

Sellout wrote:


You broke mine first. You deserved it.

i don't believe in karma

I don't either, but I believe in love  sad

i used to  sad

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#86 2013-04-14 00:22:22

Sellout
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

zubblewu wrote:

Sellout wrote:

zubblewu wrote:


i don't believe in karma

I don't either, but I believe in love  sad

i used to  sad

Baby I can change!!!!!!!!1

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#87 2013-04-14 00:23:43

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but how can i believe you again?!?!

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#88 2013-04-14 00:26:18

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believe them, believe them!

I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos

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#89 2013-04-14 00:26:44

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zubblewu wrote:

but how can i believe you again?!?!

I'll write you a poem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

zubblewu zubblewu
there is nothing that smells quite like you

(get it? cos i love u and you're unique)

It's a couplet

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#90 2013-04-14 00:34:11

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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

hawt
3/10

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#91 2013-04-14 00:34:51

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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

zubblewu wrote:

hawt
3/10

... Only three??

I guess you really don't love me anymore  sad

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#92 2013-04-14 00:35:27

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i'll write you a poem!!!

i saw you sitting there drinking industrial metal and listening to diet coke
and laughed when i saw you choke

do u like it

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#93 2013-04-14 00:37:20

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don't worry i still luv u

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#94 2013-04-14 00:39:21

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That's the sweetest thing anyone has ever written for me my life is so empty e_e

I would rather be alone than pretend I feel alright

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#95 2013-04-14 00:45:33

zubblewu
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

like saccharin???

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#96 2013-04-14 10:10:18

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Uhhh...

http://i1244.photobucket.com/albums/gg572/BLU_Spy/Best-Cry-Ever_zps3b2b857a.gif Goodbye, 1.4... We'll miss you...

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#97 2013-04-14 11:59:19

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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

yay it's back  smile

maybe to get some extra feedback i should repost my story from the first topic here...
is that ok?  hmm

Last edited by ROSMan (2013-04-14 11:59:30)

GENERATION 33: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment

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#98 2013-04-14 12:00:22

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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

ROSMan wrote:

yay it's back  smile

maybe to get some extra feedback i should repost my story from the first topic here...
is that ok?  hmm

Yes, do it!  big_smile

http://i1244.photobucket.com/albums/gg572/BLU_Spy/Best-Cry-Ever_zps3b2b857a.gif Goodbye, 1.4... We'll miss you...

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#99 2013-04-14 13:00:40

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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

I wrote this for school like a year ago and thought it was superb but reading back, it was written kind of badly, and the whole scene at the park at the beginning is just terrible. I used to write a lot but I don't know what I did with it all.

http://oi54.tinypic.com/t8ogle.jpg http://blocks.scratchr.org/API.php?user=veggieman001&action=onlineStatus

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#100 2013-04-14 13:18:49

Waffle27
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Re: The (New!) Writing Official Topic

EmperorEvil wrote:

I wrote this for school like a year ago and thought it was superb but reading back, it was written kind of badly, and the whole scene at the park at the beginning is just terrible. I used to write a lot but I don't know what I did with it all.

This is pretty good! The entire last page is in bold though... hmm
Otherwise, good!! If you consider that TERRIBLE I'd like to see the best you've written!  big_smile

:'( Bye 1.4... http://i50.tinypic.com/zn102h.jpg

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