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#1 2013-03-23 05:32:18

NeilWest
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The Call - A Handdrawn Cartoon

I decided to make my own webcomic - but handdrawnl

http://i.imgur.com/pl2i9EQ.jpg
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#2 2013-03-23 06:35:11

jji7skyline
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Re: The Call - A Handdrawn Cartoon

A blue splodge is running to the door, watches some TV, hooks his teddy bear to an electrocardiogram, and i don't even get the last one. Maybe the drawings could be clearer?


I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!  big_smile

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#3 2013-03-23 09:19:47

NeilWest
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Re: The Call - A Handdrawn Cartoon

jji7skyline wrote:

A blue splodge is running to the door, watches some TV, hooks his teddy bear to an electrocardiogram, and i don't even get the last one. Maybe the drawings could be clearer?

Art style.

A blue shadow runs into his home. He watches TV - and his phone rings, and then he and another man have a conversation.

But yeah - I'll try making the shadows clearer - though I don't want to lose the shadow effect too much.

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#4 2013-03-23 11:19:08

ieu99
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Re: The Call - A Handdrawn Cartoon

quite nice but needs to be a little clearer


http://i49.tinypic.com/mwcvbd.png

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#5 2013-03-23 11:28:35

DJ-stickman
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Re: The Call - A Handdrawn Cartoon

I see!!!! I guess it does need to be slightly clearer but it's cool!


http://i1154.photobucket.com/albums/p522/lizzyhipo/cartoon_elf-1.jpg

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#6 2013-03-23 13:57:20

NeilWest
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Re: The Call - A Handdrawn Cartoon

Thanks. I might tone down the shadowing - but not to lose the effect - also, I'll draw on A4 sheets now (I used small notes for Pt. 1).

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