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A blue splodge is running to the door, watches some TV, hooks his teddy bear to an electrocardiogram, and i don't even get the last one. Maybe the drawings could be clearer?
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jji7skyline wrote:
A blue splodge is running to the door, watches some TV, hooks his teddy bear to an electrocardiogram, and i don't even get the last one. Maybe the drawings could be clearer?
Art style.
A blue shadow runs into his home. He watches TV - and his phone rings, and then he and another man have a conversation.
But yeah - I'll try making the shadows clearer - though I don't want to lose the shadow effect too much.
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I see!!!! I guess it does need to be slightly clearer but it's cool!
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Thanks. I might tone down the shadowing - but not to lose the effect - also, I'll draw on A4 sheets now (I used small notes for Pt. 1).
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