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Firedrake969 with Pumpkin Smash "Review 2"

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10 [Very effective scripts although pumpkin gliding could be added]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10 [No glitches i can see!]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10 [The music fits in well with the theme]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Nice graphics although the pumpkins could have faces on them to make the game "spookier"]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10 [Although it can get repetitive it is a fun little game to play when you do not have a whole load of time]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10 [Although the game is repetitive so it shuold not get much on Plot, the different sized pumpkins add variety]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 8/10 [A nice easy game with good instructions but perhaps a bit bland on the pumpkin squashing difficulty level]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10 [Athough the idea of a pumkin smashing game is far from new it has been made on Scratch very well and the cool easter egg helps here]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6.5/10 [Although it is enjoyable the first time i don't see people having tons of goes at it ]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Half a point more than what you got the last time i reviewed this and i can not argue * my old review as it is very well made but aspects such as lack of exciting pumpkin movement could limit the players enjoyment of the game to only one play
Total 79.5/100

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http://www.scratch.mit.edu/projects/ianthestuntman/3053119


this is Robot OS, I update it regularly, so by the time you review it it might be a different version than it is now. Please tell me which version you reviewed. (right now the version is 0.06)

thank you.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/orze/3035470 Try this!

hi, umm, it's me again, I was wondering if you could review this game called "Slime Maze" but just to warn you, it is Kaizo difficult 
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ledgerman8/3065485

Hi Willpower! You always have good-quality reviews so I was wondering if you'd review one of my newest animations. It has the Waffle Song at the end, which you reviewed before, I just put that in because of laziness. But the rest is original!   
Animation of Randomness

I have not been on for ages because i have not had any time at all and have been unwell, i will try and do some reviews some time after lunch, sorry for not doing any for ages 

Here we are- three reviews in one, once i have got a horrible bit of geography coursework out the way i will do some more

Programmer112 with Neurono OS

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10 [You use lots of lists and variables and the OS is very well made]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 7/10 [Still in beta stage and I notice things like no button to stop the music and bounces not hiding when you have finished the neurone pong]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Much better graphics than I do!]
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10 [I like the little jingle at the start and the music app (although you can play two songs at once  )]
Simplicity 9/10 [Nice and simple to understand and use]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10 [you have a good selection of apps but perhaps add a few more to bring out the best in this category]
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10[Yes, it is very nicely laid out with clear sections for all the apps]
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10 [A good selection of apps- some I have not seen before]
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10 [I like the reminder function which I have not seen before]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10 [85 is a brilliant score for an OS, what I loved most was the clear layout and the helpful reminder feature. Just spotted two glitches which were the music playing two songs at once and the variables not hiding]
Total 85/100

Lindlisha With funwithmath

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10 [you have good scripts but I can’t help feeling their number could be cut down a lot]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10 [It is a complete game but I found it went occasionally glitch on me and sometimes the questions are not that clear]
Music (Required?) 10/10 [Lots of cool sound effects, especially for the different letters. R was my favourite]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [I love the cool swirly background graphics and the letters have cool designs]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10 [I love the idea of picking letters to choose the question you are on]
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10 [Push the number, easy]
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?) 9/10 [The combination of the letter sounds and random questions keep the player interested]
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?) 9/10 [You don’t know what question you are going to get so it teaches you a lot of things]
Detail (amount of info) 7/10 [It has got 26 questions so that is quite a lot of detail]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10 [Altogether it is a good base for people who want to learn maths although it might be really cool if you give some explanation if the player gets a question wrong so they can really improve]
Total 85/100

Ledgerman8 with Slime Maze

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7/10 [not the most complex scripts ever but the game runs well]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10 [it is a complete game]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10 [trololololololol]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [the graphics are good,yeah]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10 [Well the song is funny but as for trying to get past spikey blocks]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 4/10 [there is not much of a plot at all to this game, only that you are going to lose]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 2/10 [this is impossible as all the spikey blocks move randomly and I never made it past the first corner]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10 [if you take out some of the spikey blocks then it would make it a better idea as at the moment it just drives people mad!]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10 [Despite all the stuff I have said above I did want to teach those spikey blocks a lesson]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10 [The music is amazing but sadly creating an impossible game (although it is addictive) which is impossible not to rage at could cause health issues for your players…]
Total 66/100

This http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Friddle16/3100716

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Here we are- three reviews in one, once i have got a horrible bit of geography coursework out the way i will do some more

Programmer112 with Neurono OS

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10 [You use lots of lists and variables and the OS is very well made]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 7/10 [Still in beta stage and I notice things like no button to stop the music and bounces not hiding when you have finished the neurone pong]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Much better graphics than I do!]
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10 [I like the little jingle at the start and the music app (although you can play two songs at once  )]
Simplicity 9/10 [Nice and simple to understand and use]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10 [you have a good selection of apps but perhaps add a few more to bring out the best in this category]
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10[Yes, it is very nicely laid out with clear sections for all the apps]
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10 [A good selection of apps- some I have not seen before]
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10 [I like the reminder function which I have not seen before]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10 [85 is a brilliant score for an OS, what I loved most was the clear layout and the helpful reminder feature. Just spotted two glitches which were the music playing two songs at once and the variables not hiding]
Total 85/100

Lindlisha With funwithmath

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10 [you have good scripts but I can’t help feeling their number could be cut down a lot]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10 [It is a complete game but I found it went occasionally glitch on me and sometimes the questions are not that clear]
Music (Required?) 10/10 [Lots of cool sound effects, especially for the different letters. R was my favourite]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [I love the cool swirly background graphics and the letters have cool designs]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10 [I love the idea of picking letters to choose the question you are on]
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10 [Push the number, easy]
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?) 9/10 [The combination of the letter sounds and random questions keep the player interested]
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?) 9/10 [You don’t know what question you are going to get so it teaches you a lot of things]
Detail (amount of info) 7/10 [It has got 26 questions so that is quite a lot of detail]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10 [Altogether it is a good base for people who want to learn maths although it might be really cool if you give some explanation if the player gets a question wrong so they can really improve]
Total 85/100

Ledgerman8 with Slime Maze

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7/10 [not the most complex scripts ever but the game runs well]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10 [it is a complete game]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10 [trololololololol]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [the graphics are good,yeah]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10 [Well the song is funny but as for trying to get past spikey blocks]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 4/10 [there is not much of a plot at all to this game, only that you are going to lose]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 2/10 [this is impossible as all the spikey blocks move randomly and I never made it past the first corner]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10 [if you take out some of the spikey blocks then it would make it a better idea as at the moment it just drives people mad!]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10 [Despite all the stuff I have said above I did want to teach those spikey blocks a lesson]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10 [The music is amazing but sadly creating an impossible game (although it is addictive) which is impossible not to rage at could cause health issues for your players…]
Total 66/100

I respect your opinion    but keep this in mind, I actually updated the game, it now has an easy button, which removes all of the spiky blocks from the game, and, as a hidden feature, you can press space to shrink, which makes it easier the get around corners, and by "health issues" you mean what exactly?

We have a beta review that we would like to have reviewed Click here the character selection isn't complete nor is single player but two player works if you choose moltres and then zapdos. This is a beta or an alpha so to speak so it isn't complete yet.

Bounce!