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#551 2013-01-19 23:08:47

Programmer_112
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Could you review this?


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#552 2013-01-21 15:19:15

Willpower_Reviews
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Firedrake969 with Pumpkin Smash "Review 2"

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 9/10 [Very effective scripts although pumpkin gliding could be added]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10 [No glitches i can see!]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10 [The music fits in well with the theme]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Nice graphics although the pumpkins could have faces on them to make the game "spookier"]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10 [Although it can get repetitive it is a fun little game to play when you do not have a whole load of time]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10 [Although the game is repetitive so it shuold not get much on Plot, the different sized pumpkins add variety]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 8/10 [A nice easy game with good instructions but perhaps a bit bland on the pumpkin squashing difficulty level]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10 [Athough the idea of a pumkin smashing game is far from new it has been made on Scratch very well and the cool easter egg helps here]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6.5/10 [Although it is enjoyable the first time i don't see people having tons of goes at it ]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Half a point more than what you got the last time i reviewed this and i can not argue * my old review as it is very well made but aspects such as lack of exciting pumpkin movement could limit the players enjoyment of the game to only one play
Total 79.5/100


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#553 2013-01-21 16:02:14

sonicfan12p
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Would you review this? I believe you reviewed it before, but it's gone through a serious update, and I need it checked out again.


Why are the secret organizations getting all the attention?  mad

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#554 2013-01-23 20:49:07

numberonegamers
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Bump

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#555 2013-01-23 20:56:00

BLU_Spy
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Registered: 2012-01-05
Posts: 1000+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!


I HAVE SWITCHED ACCOUNTS! My new username is NoxSpooth.

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#556 2013-01-23 21:50:17

ianthestuntman
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Registered: 2013-01-02
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

http://www.scratch.mit.edu/projects/ianthestuntman/3053119


this is Robot OS, I update it regularly, so by the time you review it it might be a different version than it is now. Please tell me which version you reviewed. (right now the version is 0.06)

thank you.

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#557 2013-01-25 02:43:03

lindalisha
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Registered: 2013-01-14
Posts: 5

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

will you ever review my game...???



lindalisha wrote:

hey review my project using the link below. all the instructions are there.

scratch.mit.edu/projects/lindalisha/3033489

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#558 2013-01-25 06:31:10

orze
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Registered: 2013-01-25
Posts: 1

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/orze/3035470 Try this!

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#559 2013-01-25 08:00:23

Tierage27
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Registered: 2012-01-11
Posts: 59

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

I have an OS called SSOS. It mainly uses lists. Can you review it please? :]

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Tierage27/3056070

Last edited by Tierage27 (2013-01-25 08:00:48)


Scratch on!
My most viewed and loved project is a farting sound board.

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#560 2013-01-28 14:37:33

ledgerman8
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Registered: 2009-09-01
Posts: 68

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

hi, umm, it's me again, I was wondering if you could review this game called "Slime Maze" but just to warn you, it is Kaizo difficult  smile
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ledgerman8/3065485


Nintendo- MAKE MARIO PARTY 10!!!!!

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#561 2013-01-28 15:55:17

coinman
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Posts: 500+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!


Click the picture below to play my best game yet, Snowball Fight!
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#562 2013-02-18 17:18:40

normal_girl
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Registered: 2012-08-13
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Hi Willpower! You always have good-quality reviews so I was wondering if you'd review one of my newest animations. It has the Waffle Song at the end, which you reviewed before, I just put that in because of laziness. But the rest is original!  tongue 
Animation of Randomness


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#563 2013-02-23 17:03:32

ErnieParke
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

I'm cleaning up the Shop Directory a bit, and seeing as you haven't been active in your shop lately, is it still open?

With regards,

ErnieParke


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#564 2013-02-24 07:55:23

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

I have not been on for ages because i have not had any time at all and have been unwell, i will try and do some reviews some time after lunch, sorry for not doing any for ages  sad


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#565 2013-02-24 08:53:23

dsaztur
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Registered: 2012-06-13
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Please review Terminator facility .


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#566 2013-02-24 10:22:57

Willpower_Reviews
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Registered: 2012-10-04
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Here we are- three reviews in one, once i have got a horrible bit of geography coursework out the way i will do some more

Programmer112 with Neurono OS

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10 [You use lots of lists and variables and the OS is very well made]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 7/10 [Still in beta stage and I notice things like no button to stop the music and bounces not hiding when you have finished the neurone pong]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Much better graphics than I do!]
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10 [I like the little jingle at the start and the music app (although you can play two songs at once  tongue )]
Simplicity 9/10 [Nice and simple to understand and use]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10 [you have a good selection of apps but perhaps add a few more to bring out the best in this category]
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10[Yes, it is very nicely laid out with clear sections for all the apps]
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10 [A good selection of apps- some I have not seen before]
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10 [I like the reminder function which I have not seen before]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10 [85 is a brilliant score for an OS, what I loved most was the clear layout and the helpful reminder feature. Just spotted two glitches which were the music playing two songs at once and the variables not hiding]
Total 85/100

Lindlisha With funwithmath

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10 [you have good scripts but I can’t help feeling their number could be cut down a lot]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10 [It is a complete game but I found it went occasionally glitch on me and sometimes the questions are not that clear]
Music (Required?) 10/10 [Lots of cool sound effects, especially for the different letters. R was my favourite]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [I love the cool swirly background graphics and the letters have cool designs]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10 [I love the idea of picking letters to choose the question you are on]
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10 [Push the number, easy]
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?) 9/10 [The combination of the letter sounds and random questions keep the player interested]
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?) 9/10 [You don’t know what question you are going to get so it teaches you a lot of things]
Detail (amount of info) 7/10 [It has got 26 questions so that is quite a lot of detail]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10 [Altogether it is a good base for people who want to learn maths although it might be really cool if you give some explanation if the player gets a question wrong so they can really improve]
Total 85/100

Ledgerman8 with Slime Maze

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7/10 [not the most complex scripts ever but the game runs well]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10 [it is a complete game]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10 [trololololololol]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [the graphics are good,yeah]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10 [Well the song is funny but as for trying to get past spikey blocks]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 4/10 [there is not much of a plot at all to this game, only that you are going to lose]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 2/10 [this is impossible as all the spikey blocks move randomly and I never made it past the first corner]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10 [if you take out some of the spikey blocks then it would make it a better idea as at the moment it just drives people mad!]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10 [Despite all the stuff I have said above I did want to teach those spikey blocks a lesson]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10 [The music is amazing but sadly creating an impossible game (although it is addictive) which is impossible not to rage at could cause health issues for your players…]
Total 66/100


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#567 2013-02-24 12:04:58

ErnieParke
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Registered: 2010-12-03
Posts: 1000+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower wrote:

I have not been on for ages because i have not had any time at all and have been unwell, i will try and do some reviews some time after lunch, sorry for not doing any for ages  sad

Well it's sad that you're sick. I hope that you'll get better soon, and I also hope that you'll enjoy this cookie:

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With regards,

ErnieParke


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#568 2013-02-25 22:35:20

Friddle16
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Registered: 2012-08-21
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

This http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Friddle16/3100716


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#569 2013-02-25 22:37:44

Friddle16
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Registered: 2012-08-21
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

And this please! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Friddle16/3131190 My bar shooter game, and the other one is my new version of the MARIO PLATFORMER!!!


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#570 2013-02-26 15:43:26

SeriesOfSeries
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Registered: 2013-01-14
Posts: 5

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Here we are- three reviews in one, once i have got a horrible bit of geography coursework out the way i will do some more

Programmer112 with Neurono OS

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10 [You use lots of lists and variables and the OS is very well made]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 7/10 [Still in beta stage and I notice things like no button to stop the music and bounces not hiding when you have finished the neurone pong]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Much better graphics than I do!]
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10 [I like the little jingle at the start and the music app (although you can play two songs at once  tongue )]
Simplicity 9/10 [Nice and simple to understand and use]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10 [you have a good selection of apps but perhaps add a few more to bring out the best in this category]
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10[Yes, it is very nicely laid out with clear sections for all the apps]
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10 [A good selection of apps- some I have not seen before]
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10 [I like the reminder function which I have not seen before]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10 [85 is a brilliant score for an OS, what I loved most was the clear layout and the helpful reminder feature. Just spotted two glitches which were the music playing two songs at once and the variables not hiding]
Total 85/100

Lindlisha With funwithmath

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10 [you have good scripts but I can’t help feeling their number could be cut down a lot]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10 [It is a complete game but I found it went occasionally glitch on me and sometimes the questions are not that clear]
Music (Required?) 10/10 [Lots of cool sound effects, especially for the different letters. R was my favourite]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [I love the cool swirly background graphics and the letters have cool designs]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10 [I love the idea of picking letters to choose the question you are on]
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10 [Push the number, easy]
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?) 9/10 [The combination of the letter sounds and random questions keep the player interested]
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?) 9/10 [You don’t know what question you are going to get so it teaches you a lot of things]
Detail (amount of info) 7/10 [It has got 26 questions so that is quite a lot of detail]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10 [Altogether it is a good base for people who want to learn maths although it might be really cool if you give some explanation if the player gets a question wrong so they can really improve]
Total 85/100

Ledgerman8 with Slime Maze

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7/10 [not the most complex scripts ever but the game runs well]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10 [it is a complete game]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10 [trololololololol]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [the graphics are good,yeah]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10 [Well the song is funny but as for trying to get past spikey blocks]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 4/10 [there is not much of a plot at all to this game, only that you are going to lose]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 2/10 [this is impossible as all the spikey blocks move randomly and I never made it past the first corner]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10 [if you take out some of the spikey blocks then it would make it a better idea as at the moment it just drives people mad!]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10 [Despite all the stuff I have said above I did want to teach those spikey blocks a lesson]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10 [The music is amazing but sadly creating an impossible game (although it is addictive) which is impossible not to rage at could cause health issues for your players…]
Total 66/100

I respect your opinion  smile  but keep this in mind, I actually updated the game, it now has an easy button, which removes all of the spiky blocks from the game, and, as a hidden feature, you can press space to shrink, which makes it easier the get around corners, and by "health issues" you mean what exactly?

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#571 2013-02-26 15:46:50

SeriesOfSeries
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Registered: 2013-01-14
Posts: 5

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

SeriesOfSeries wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Here we are- three reviews in one, once i have got a horrible bit of geography coursework out the way i will do some more

Programmer112 with Neurono OS

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10 [You use lots of lists and variables and the OS is very well made]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 7/10 [Still in beta stage and I notice things like no button to stop the music and bounces not hiding when you have finished the neurone pong]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10 [Much better graphics than I do!]
Sound (Music, Required?) 9/10 [I like the little jingle at the start and the music app (although you can play two songs at once  tongue )]
Simplicity 9/10 [Nice and simple to understand and use]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10 [you have a good selection of apps but perhaps add a few more to bring out the best in this category]
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10[Yes, it is very nicely laid out with clear sections for all the apps]
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 8/10 [A good selection of apps- some I have not seen before]
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 8/10 [I like the reminder function which I have not seen before]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10 [85 is a brilliant score for an OS, what I loved most was the clear layout and the helpful reminder feature. Just spotted two glitches which were the music playing two songs at once and the variables not hiding]
Total 85/100

Lindlisha With funwithmath

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 6/10 [you have good scripts but I can’t help feeling their number could be cut down a lot]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10 [It is a complete game but I found it went occasionally glitch on me and sometimes the questions are not that clear]
Music (Required?) 10/10 [Lots of cool sound effects, especially for the different letters. R was my favourite]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [I love the cool swirly background graphics and the letters have cool designs]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10 [I love the idea of picking letters to choose the question you are on]
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10 [Push the number, easy]
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?) 9/10 [The combination of the letter sounds and random questions keep the player interested]
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?) 9/10 [You don’t know what question you are going to get so it teaches you a lot of things]
Detail (amount of info) 7/10 [It has got 26 questions so that is quite a lot of detail]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10 [Altogether it is a good base for people who want to learn maths although it might be really cool if you give some explanation if the player gets a question wrong so they can really improve]
Total 85/100

Ledgerman8 with Slime Maze

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7/10 [not the most complex scripts ever but the game runs well]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10 [it is a complete game]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 10/10 [trololololololol]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [the graphics are good,yeah]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10 [Well the song is funny but as for trying to get past spikey blocks]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 4/10 [there is not much of a plot at all to this game, only that you are going to lose]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 2/10 [this is impossible as all the spikey blocks move randomly and I never made it past the first corner]
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10 [if you take out some of the spikey blocks then it would make it a better idea as at the moment it just drives people mad!]
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10 [Despite all the stuff I have said above I did want to teach those spikey blocks a lesson]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10 [The music is amazing but sadly creating an impossible game (although it is addictive) which is impossible not to rage at could cause health issues for your players…]
Total 66/100

I respect your opinion  smile  but keep this in mind, I actually updated the game, it now has an easy button, which removes all of the spiky blocks from the game, and, as a hidden feature, you can press space to shrink, which makes it easier the get around corners, and by "health issues" you mean what exactly?

whoa, I forgot I was using my other account  tongue  ya, I'm ledgerman8, I'm using a different account

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#572 2013-02-26 15:58:20

TestDummie
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Registered: 2013-01-31
Posts: 25

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

We have a beta review that we would like to have reviewed Click here the character selection isn't complete nor is single player but two player works if you choose moltres and then zapdos. This is a beta or an alpha so to speak so it isn't complete yet.

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#573 2013-03-04 12:20:27

firedrake969_test
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Registered: 2012-08-08
Posts: 500+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Firedrake969/3123507


Alt of Firedrake969.

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#574 2013-03-04 13:02:38

bob6
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Registered: 2010-07-01
Posts: 100+

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!


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#575 2013-03-04 14:09:08

Evil4lyfe92
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Registered: 2013-02-28
Posts: 8

Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Evil4lyfe92/3136191 - Block Breaker 2013

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