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HERE IT IS!

I woke up in the morning and stepped downstairs, the scent of waffles in the air. I ran to the kitchen and scarfed down my waffles. For some reason, my brother, Anthony, wasn't there. He must have overslept. Again. It was the first day of summer, and I would spend it at the park with my friends. I snatched up my ipod, plugged in my earphones, and turned on some dubstep. The door wasn't locked, strangely. My dog ran up and whimpered, although I had no idea why, his bowl was full. I opened up the door, and slipped out. By the time I had gotten to the garage, my friends were already at my house. So, I grabbed my bike and rode off toward the park.

"Hey, Kevin, did you hear the news?" Jacob yelled over to me.
"No, what is it?"
"Well, tons of people have dissapeared in the forest by the park."
I laughed. "Really? Jacob, I've almost been stabbed to death on a train once, I don't think a bear could kill me."
"It may not be a bear." Issac said.
"Kevin, it's not funny."
"Well, looks like we're here anyway."

After a few games of basketball, my friends had left, I head over to the forest.

I pulled out my pocket knife, and ran in. I grabbed my journal and pencil also.

4/12/12
I'm diving into Herff Forest, where tons of people have dissapeared. It's not dark at all, it's very sunny, actually. Some of the trees were tall, most were short, though. I haven't seen any wildlife. In fact, I don't think anything lives he-

I tripped over something. It was humanoid. It was a human. It was a body. My brother's body.

How is it so far?

I'll tell you if you give feedback on mine.

samid11 wrote:

Did anyone read my pasta?

I liked it.    But it could use some more explanation.

Maybe I could take a crack at a Spumco story? I'll try...but it may not be good. I haven't made my own creepy story since those Pokemon ones I posted way back in the Mass Scary Story Thread, that everyone seemed to love.

What had happened?
    This question rang through Angela’s mind as she looked frantically around the park. Everything was… deserted. The air was stagnant, and hot. The sky was cloudy and overcast, giving everything a greyish hue. Angela knew something was about to happen, it always happened like this in horror movies. She was caught in a horror movie.
    She spun around as she heard a sound…


Short buuuuut, whaddya think?

soniku3 wrote:

samid11 wrote:

*tapping foot* Hmmmmmm... I KNOW! *ding* I'LL MAKE ONE ABOUT A SUICIDAL MICKEY MOU-....Gosh darn it.

Suicidal Donald Duck

SUICIDE DOLAN!!! >   I'm a genious.

MOAR PASTAZ!

I woke up in the morning and stepped downstairs, the scent of waffles in the air. I ran to the kitchen and scarfed down my waffles. For some reason, my brother, Anthony, wasn't there. He must have overslept. Again. It was the first day of summer, and I would spend it at the park with my friends. I snatched up my ipod, plugged in my earphones, and turned on some dubstep. The door wasn't locked, strangely. My dog ran up and whimpered, although I had no idea why, his bowl was full. I opened up the door, and slipped out. By the time I had gotten to the garage, my friends were already at my house. So, I grabbed my bike and rode off toward the park.

"Hey, Kevin, did you hear the news?" Jacob yelled over to me.
"No, what is it?"
"Well, tons of people have dissapeared in the forest by the park."
I laughed. "Really? Jacob, I've almost been stabbed to death on a train once, I don't think a bear could kill me."
"It may not be a bear." Issac said.
"Kevin, it's not funny."
"Well, looks like we're here anyway."

After a few games of basketball, my friends had left, I head over to the forest.

I pulled out my pocket knife, and ran in. I grabbed my journal and pencil also.

4/12/12
I'm diving into Herff Forest, where tons of people have dissapeared. It's not dark at all, it's very sunny, actually. Some of the trees were tall, most were short, though. I haven't seen any wildlife. In fact, I don't think anything lives he-

I tripped over something. It was humanoid. It was a human. It was a body. My brother's body.

I threw my notebook down and stumbled backwards, staring at him. It had to be the end of my life today. I ran past the body, and stumbled into a circular area surrounded by trees.

"HELLO, KEVIN COTTON." A shrill voice rang out.
"LETS PLAY A GAME!" (This pasta is NOT saw, FYI)

I couldn't speak. If I tried, I couldn't. I felt every particle of my body being torn apart, my life slowly fading.

Then everything went black. And it never changed. Ever.

Feed, anyone?

samid11 wrote:

soniku3 wrote:

samid11 wrote:

*tapping foot* Hmmmmmm... I KNOW! *ding* I'LL MAKE ONE ABOUT A SUICIDAL MICKEY MOU-....Gosh darn it.

Suicidal Donald Duck

SUICIDE DOLAN!!! >   I'm a genious.

writing a creepypasta involving dolan and having it be taken seriously is no easy task.

"but who was phone?"
"iz actually dolan"

Last edited by videogame9 (2012-07-28 13:11:51)

pinkcat09 wrote:

Did anyone read my story The Flashes?

Yes, I did. It was good. Though I am immune to most creepypastas. 

Did anyone read my introduction? 

SpriteMaster wrote:

777w wrote:

hungergamesfanatic wrote:

THIS IS EPIC! Slendy?

sorry ive never commented on this but i hate it when people say "slendy"
it just doesnt fit his fancy suit and creepy demeanor and lack of face

i'd think that because calling something that is supposed to be scary a cute nickname isnt appropriate for it.

thats basically what i said

Daroach1 wrote:

Frown.gif
This is my... somewhat of a parody of Smile.jpg, I'm still working on the image.

"One day, I was walking down main street when I saw a mysterious flash drive on the ground, marked "DO NOT TOUCH" of course, being who I was, I picked it up and brought it home. Inserting it into my computer, it's name when it showed up on my hard drive was  "Rpsaed hte wrdo or else" but I was unable to decode the first three words. I looked into the drive, but all the was was a picture called "Frown.gif" I clicked it to see a horrible picture of a bloody dog that appeared to be frowning. I quickly shut off my computer, and went to sleep."

News report the next day: Famous Hugh Jackson has mysteriously disappeared.


At the same time, an innocent teen named J.J. Johnson found the flash drive and Frown.gif... but this time, spread the word, plaguing  all to see the image with nightmares telling them to spread the word or else. One day, a hacker with good intentions mapped out the sites with frown.gif running around and tried to delete it, but was plagued by nightmares, like all others and spread it all over... and the next person to spread the word... may just be you!

I'LL MAKE IT.

CakePopAnimation wrote:

banana500 wrote:

SMILES

That was so awesome! 
So they turn people into Jeff...

samid11 wrote:

SUICIDE DOLAN!!! >   I'm a genious.

XD LOL! Make a Dolan instead of a Donald.

Sorry for reposting, but it got overlooked