what about one about rotting food
DANGIT a'rdy wrote that myself
maybe I'll finish it.
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HERE IT IS!
I woke up in the morning and stepped downstairs, the scent of waffles in the air. I ran to the kitchen and scarfed down my waffles. For some reason, my brother, Anthony, wasn't there. He must have overslept. Again. It was the first day of summer, and I would spend it at the park with my friends. I snatched up my ipod, plugged in my earphones, and turned on some dubstep. The door wasn't locked, strangely. My dog ran up and whimpered, although I had no idea why, his bowl was full. I opened up the door, and slipped out. By the time I had gotten to the garage, my friends were already at my house. So, I grabbed my bike and rode off toward the park.
"Hey, Kevin, did you hear the news?" Jacob yelled over to me.
"No, what is it?"
"Well, tons of people have dissapeared in the forest by the park."
I laughed. "Really? Jacob, I've almost been stabbed to death on a train once, I don't think a bear could kill me."
"It may not be a bear." Issac said.
"Kevin, it's not funny."
"Well, looks like we're here anyway."
After a few games of basketball, my friends had left, I head over to the forest.
I pulled out my pocket knife, and ran in. I grabbed my journal and pencil also.
4/12/12
I'm diving into Herff Forest, where tons of people have dissapeared. It's not dark at all, it's very sunny, actually. Some of the trees were tall, most were short, though. I haven't seen any wildlife. In fact, I don't think anything lives he-
I tripped over something. It was humanoid. It was a human. It was a body. My brother's body.
How is it so far?
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I'll tell you if you give feedback on mine.
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samid11 wrote:
Did anyone read my pasta?
I liked it. But it could use some more explanation.
Maybe I could take a crack at a Spumco story? I'll try...but it may not be good. I haven't made my own creepy story since those Pokemon ones I posted way back in the Mass Scary Story Thread, that everyone seemed to love.
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SMILES
From a distance, it seems that they are cheerfully smiling, and for whatever reason, they're happy almost all the time. But if you look at them up close, you see the truth...
I was once one of the very few people in this city that didn't have a smile on their face. I felt afraid, and exceedingly frightened by these people, though I knew that it was not their fault. I had gone into hiding for many months, but I still feared that they would find me--and turn me into one of them.
These people are not truly happy. Their smiles are faked. Their faces are hideously scarred. From either side of their cheeks are curved cuts that force a smile upon their faces. I can see the fear and the helplessness in their eyes.
But then came the day that they found me. They found me and turned me into one of them. I encountered two of the surgeons that gave people their scars, and the scent of chloroform overwhelmed me as one of the surgeons pressed a damp cloth to my mouth, and I fell into oblivion.
From then on, I was smiling.
So? What do you think?
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What had happened?
This question rang through Angela’s mind as she looked frantically around the park. Everything was… deserted. The air was stagnant, and hot. The sky was cloudy and overcast, giving everything a greyish hue. Angela knew something was about to happen, it always happened like this in horror movies. She was caught in a horror movie.
She spun around as she heard a sound…
Short buuuuut, whaddya think?
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soniku3 wrote:
samid11 wrote:
*tapping foot* Hmmmmmm... I KNOW! *ding* I'LL MAKE ONE ABOUT A SUICIDAL MICKEY MOU-....Gosh darn it.
Suicidal Donald Duck
SUICIDE DOLAN!!! > I'm a genious.
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banana500 wrote:
SMILES
That was so awesome!
So they turn people into Jeff...
samid11 wrote:
SUICIDE DOLAN!!! >
I'm a genious.
XD LOL! Make a Dolan instead of a Donald.
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MOAR PASTAZ!
I woke up in the morning and stepped downstairs, the scent of waffles in the air. I ran to the kitchen and scarfed down my waffles. For some reason, my brother, Anthony, wasn't there. He must have overslept. Again. It was the first day of summer, and I would spend it at the park with my friends. I snatched up my ipod, plugged in my earphones, and turned on some dubstep. The door wasn't locked, strangely. My dog ran up and whimpered, although I had no idea why, his bowl was full. I opened up the door, and slipped out. By the time I had gotten to the garage, my friends were already at my house. So, I grabbed my bike and rode off toward the park.
"Hey, Kevin, did you hear the news?" Jacob yelled over to me.
"No, what is it?"
"Well, tons of people have dissapeared in the forest by the park."
I laughed. "Really? Jacob, I've almost been stabbed to death on a train once, I don't think a bear could kill me."
"It may not be a bear." Issac said.
"Kevin, it's not funny."
"Well, looks like we're here anyway."
After a few games of basketball, my friends had left, I head over to the forest.
I pulled out my pocket knife, and ran in. I grabbed my journal and pencil also.
4/12/12
I'm diving into Herff Forest, where tons of people have dissapeared. It's not dark at all, it's very sunny, actually. Some of the trees were tall, most were short, though. I haven't seen any wildlife. In fact, I don't think anything lives he-
I tripped over something. It was humanoid. It was a human. It was a body. My brother's body.
I threw my notebook down and stumbled backwards, staring at him. It had to be the end of my life today. I ran past the body, and stumbled into a circular area surrounded by trees.
"HELLO, KEVIN COTTON." A shrill voice rang out.
"LETS PLAY A GAME!" (This pasta is NOT saw, FYI)
I couldn't speak. If I tried, I couldn't. I felt every particle of my body being torn apart, my life slowly fading.
Then everything went black. And it never changed. Ever.
Feed, anyone?
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weegeeissparta wrote:
I woke up in the morning and stepped downstairs, the scent of waffles in the air. I ran to the kitchen and scarfed down my waffles.
Stopped reading there, then after a brief moment of confusion, continued.
weegeeissparta wrote:
I'm diving into Herff Forest.
Stopped reading again, died laughing at the name of the forest.
It was alright.
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samid11 wrote:
soniku3 wrote:
samid11 wrote:
*tapping foot* Hmmmmmm... I KNOW! *ding* I'LL MAKE ONE ABOUT A SUICIDAL MICKEY MOU-....Gosh darn it.
Suicidal Donald Duck
SUICIDE DOLAN!!! >
I'm a genious.
writing a creepypasta involving dolan and having it be taken seriously is no easy task.
"but who was phone?"
"iz actually dolan"
Last edited by videogame9 (2012-07-28 13:11:51)
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pinkcat09 wrote:
Did anyone read my story The Flashes?
Yes, I did. It was good. Though I am immune to most creepypastas.
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mythbusteranimator wrote:
pinkcat09 wrote:
Did anyone read my story The Flashes?
Yes, I did. It was good. Though I am immune to most creepypastas.
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It is really a fabricated story. And there is no such thing as a drug called " Computer Flashes"
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Did anyone read my introduction?
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777w wrote:
hungergamesfanatic wrote:
samid11 wrote:
(creepypasta with a side of awesome sauce.)
THIS IS EPIC! Slendy?
sorry ive never commented on this but i hate it when people say "slendy"
it just doesnt fit his fancy suit and creepy demeanor and lack of face
i'd think that because calling something that is supposed to be scary a cute nickname isnt appropriate for it.
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SpriteMaster wrote:
777w wrote:
hungergamesfanatic wrote:
THIS IS EPIC! Slendy?sorry ive never commented on this but i hate it when people say "slendy"
it just doesnt fit his fancy suit and creepy demeanor and lack of facei'd think that because calling something that is supposed to be scary a cute nickname isnt appropriate for it.
thats basically what i said
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Frown.gif
This is my... somewhat of a parody of Smile.jpg, I'm still working on the image.
"One day, I was walking down main street when I saw a mysterious flash drive on the ground, marked "DO NOT TOUCH" of course, being who I was, I picked it up and brought it home. Inserting it into my computer, it's name when it showed up on my hard drive was "Rpsaed hte wrdo or else" but I was unable to decode the first three words. I looked into the drive, but all the was was a picture called "Frown.gif" I clicked it to see a horrible picture of a bloody dog that appeared to be frowning. I quickly shut off my computer, and went to sleep."
News report the next day: Famous Hugh Jackson has mysteriously disappeared.
At the same time, an innocent teen named J.J. Johnson found the flash drive and Frown.gif... but this time, spread the word, plaguing all to see the image with nightmares telling them to spread the word or else. One day, a hacker with good intentions mapped out the sites with frown.gif running around and tried to delete it, but was plagued by nightmares, like all others and spread it all over... and the next person to spread the word... may just be you!
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Daroach1 wrote:
Frown.gif
This is my... somewhat of a parody of Smile.jpg, I'm still working on the image.
"One day, I was walking down main street when I saw a mysterious flash drive on the ground, marked "DO NOT TOUCH" of course, being who I was, I picked it up and brought it home. Inserting it into my computer, it's name when it showed up on my hard drive was "Rpsaed hte wrdo or else" but I was unable to decode the first three words. I looked into the drive, but all the was was a picture called "Frown.gif" I clicked it to see a horrible picture of a bloody dog that appeared to be frowning. I quickly shut off my computer, and went to sleep."
News report the next day: Famous Hugh Jackson has mysteriously disappeared.
At the same time, an innocent teen named J.J. Johnson found the flash drive and Frown.gif... but this time, spread the word, plaguing all to see the image with nightmares telling them to spread the word or else. One day, a hacker with good intentions mapped out the sites with frown.gif running around and tried to delete it, but was plagued by nightmares, like all others and spread it all over... and the next person to spread the word... may just be you!
I'LL MAKE IT.
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samid11 wrote:
Daroach1 wrote:
Frown.gif
This is my... somewhat of a parody of Smile.jpg, I'm still working on the image.
"One day, I was walking down main street when I saw a mysterious flash drive on the ground, marked "DO NOT TOUCH" of course, being who I was, I picked it up and brought it home. Inserting it into my computer, it's name when it showed up on my hard drive was "Rpsaed hte wrdo or else" but I was unable to decode the first three words. I looked into the drive, but all the was was a picture called "Frown.gif" I clicked it to see a horrible picture of a bloody dog that appeared to be frowning. I quickly shut off my computer, and went to sleep."
News report the next day: Famous Hugh Jackson has mysteriously disappeared.
At the same time, an innocent teen named J.J. Johnson found the flash drive and Frown.gif... but this time, spread the word, plaguing all to see the image with nightmares telling them to spread the word or else. One day, a hacker with good intentions mapped out the sites with frown.gif running around and tried to delete it, but was plagued by nightmares, like all others and spread it all over... and the next person to spread the word... may just be you!I'LL MAKE IT.
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CakePopAnimation wrote:
banana500 wrote:
SMILES
That was so awesome!
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So they turn people into Jeff...samid11 wrote:
SUICIDE DOLAN!!! >
I'm a genious.
XD LOL! Make a Dolan instead of a Donald.
Sorry for reposting, but it got overlooked
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this thread inspired me to put a creepypasta forum on my website
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