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sonicgames20 wrote:

Rate this game please:http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/sonicgames20/2683458
P.S. The code is at the end of this game http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/sonicgames20/2669349

Your going to get a bad review simply for having "codes" required for the access to the game.

Wes64 wrote:

Ill do all these tomorrow -- sorry, I was busy!

Okay! No problem! (:

Trivia Quiz by sonicgames20 - 20/100

Note that this is not a game, so it got a poor review.

Scripting - 5/30
The answer sensing is WAY off. I was asked "what do you call a pumpkin carved for Halloween?". I answered "Jack-o-lantern" and got it wrong! it turns out, I forgot to write the word "a" before jack-o-lantern! A quiz should always be able to sense multiple versions of the correct answer, not just one. Some of the questions were ridiculous. I cannot divide 163 by 74 in my head.

Graphics - 5/30
The graphics are virtually nonexistant. Its just the scratch cat, some variables, and a background. It NEEDS a lot more.

Gameplay - 7/30
I suppose it WORKS, but this isn't a game. I want to play games, not take tests -- that's what I do in school.

Concept 3/10
Been there done that.

Sound - 0

Attitude - 0

I get exactly average!    Lol, thanks for the review. Could you review this one as well please? http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/calebxy/1224903

Cyber Defense by Zparx - 70/100

Scripting - 13/30
Somehow, my only turret glitched out, and would not exit from its edit menu. It would not fire at enemies either, so I was defenseless! I dont really know what score to give you... 25 for the parts that work, like the menu text and the prioritization, 0 for causing a fatal error in gameplay. Ill give you the average.

Graphics - 18/30
The graphics are nice, but a bit basic. The color of the bullets kinda blends in with the background.

Gameplay - 25/30
From what I played, this game was pretty fun. Im giving you an extra 5 points because you actually bothered to include a tutorial -- I was actually able to understand all the complicated controls!

Concept 8/10
Turret defense games have been done before, but are rare. Ive only seen 3 other ones in my time on scratch.

Sound - 2
Lacks sound effects. Also Chaoz Fantasy is so over-used, even though its a good song.

Attitude - 4

Wes64 wrote:

Cyber Defense by Zparx - 70/100

Scripting - 13/30
Somehow, my only turret glitched out, and would not exit from its edit menu. It would not fire at enemies either, so I was defenseless! I dont really know what score to give you... 25 for the parts that work, like the menu text and the prioritization, 0 for causing a fatal error in gameplay. Ill give you the average.

Graphics - 18/30
The graphics are nice, but a bit basic. The color of the bullets kinda blends in with the background.

Gameplay - 25/30
From what I played, this game was pretty fun. Im giving you an extra 5 points because you actually bothered to include a tutorial -- I was actually able to understand all the complicated controls!

Concept 8/10
Turret defense games have been done before, but are rare. Ive only seen 3 other ones in my time on scratch.

Sound - 2
Lacks sound effects. Also Chaoz Fantasy is so over-used, even though its a good song.

Attitude - 4

OMG! The one time I get my project reviewed by a great scratcher, that rare, but agreeably fatal error occurred. See, I just salvage the turrets, and buy new ones, but still that's a portion of money wasted... I don't know how to fix that glitch because I do not know why it's happening ): I'm terribly sorry. I'll try to fix it. Thanks !

Wes64 wrote:

maxdoss wrote:

How exactly could I make it better....

Add power-ups, make it get harder as gameplay continues, make detailed graphics, add score displays, but mainly add the difficulty thing 

How could I add it get harder ast he game contiues if it's a multiplayer game? And how would score work if you have to beat your opponent 5 times in order to win. It's not a never ending game.

Here is the improved game of mine:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/maxdoss/2685328

Wes! I've figured out what's causing the fatal error of disabling the turrets for firing at targets and rendering you defenseless. I'm working on the fix now! After I'm done, can you re-assess it? Not completely, just the part that I got 13 on because of the glitch?

EDIT: It's all fixed now! (:

Last edited by Zparx (2012-07-19 21:52:12)

ROSMan wrote:

are you still reviewing mine?

ROSMan wrote:

ROSMan wrote:

are you still reviewing mine?

Sorry! Ive been a bit busy with things.

Geometry Field by TecklopAlternative - 79/100

Scripting - 18/30
Decent scripting, see "Gameplay" section.

Graphics - 30/30
Amazing graphics. (This is the first 30/30 I have ever given!)

Gameplay - 15/30
The gameplay is confusing. The "ZXCVB Space" controls are incredibly awkward. The individual lasers and stuff should be on a scrolling menu where the space key activates it, not assigned their own key. For someone like me who can't even type without looking at the keyboard, it becomes impossible to use all the weapons effectively because I have to keep looking. The player seems to move and turn too fast, and the enemies also move and turn too fast. The second round is impossible for me to beat, I just get game-over right away because I don't know what to do, and I cant hit them because they go too fast.

Concept 8/10
original.

Sound - 4
Well used sound effects but lacks music.

Attitude - 4

Cyber Defense by Zparx (Review #2) - 82/100

Scripting - 23/30
(+10) Now that the game is working properly, its great!

Graphics - 18/30
Now all you need to do is make the game more prettyful 

Gameplay - 27/30
(+2) Now that I was able to get into it, this game is really awesome!

Concept 8/10

Sound - 2

Attitude - 4

Last edited by Wes64 (2012-07-20 14:26:12)