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#26 2012-04-15 10:39:58

Borrego6165
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Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

chipguy wrote:

could you review rotate?

oh, for the challenge, you'll need to make the best 20, just for easiness's sake.

Yep, I know that - I'll cut down on the point values of each category!

My review of 'rotate' by chipguy:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Amazing!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Again, faultless!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - Very good! Simple scripts are used to great effect!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile  and a half - pretty addictive!
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  You're the first person to score top marks in this - I've never played a game like this before!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Super professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - an excellent game!

48.5/55 - an amazing game! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

whilst the graphics for the menu and intro were brilliant, the levels themselves were just a grey box with some red lines. I'd say 8 1/2 for graphics because of that, but still VERY high!

also, perhaps speeding up the fade in/out transitions, because with it being so slow, it slows down the pace of the game, and whilst I enjoyed the effect it had in the intro, during the game itself seemed to make it drag and add artificial length onto it. so perhaps that would affect the scores too.

Other than those minor flaws, well done!


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#27 2012-04-15 10:51:09

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

Borrego6165 wrote:

GoldRock wrote:

chipguy wrote:

could you review rotate?

oh, for the challenge, you'll need to make the best 20, just for easiness's sake.

Yep, I know that - I'll cut down on the point values of each category!

My review of 'rotate' by chipguy:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Amazing!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Again, faultless!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - Very good! Simple scripts are used to great effect!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile  and a half - pretty addictive!
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  You're the first person to score top marks in this - I've never played a game like this before!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Super professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - an excellent game!

48.5/55 - an amazing game! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

whilst the graphics for the menu and intro were brilliant, the levels themselves were just a grey box with some red lines. I'd say 8 1/2 for graphics because of that, but still VERY high!

also, perhaps speeding up the fade in/out transitions, because with it being so slow, it slows down the pace of the game, and whilst I enjoyed the effect it had in the intro, during the game itself seemed to make it drag and add artificial length onto it. so perhaps that would affect the scores too.

Other than those minor flaws, well done!

I understand that point about the graphics - however, I believe that in this case, the simplicity of the graphics is perfect, and I don't think there are any improvements for them due to this. The graphics, although simple, perfectly suit the game, and that's why I gave them a 10  smile


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#28 2012-04-15 10:55:09

coolscruff
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Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

Review this:Click this or this or this!

My review of 'Pac man' by coolscruff:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - decent graphics.
Sound:  smile   smile  and a half - to expand, try using a few more sound effects.
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Good!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile  Pretty addictive!
Originality:  smile  and a half - not too original  smile
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Fairly professional.
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   A good game!

29.5/55 - a decent game  smile 

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

Thank you I am upgrading it in a week or two!

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#29 2012-04-15 10:58:33

beyblade4
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Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

My review of 'Revenge-WWIII Revenge of the Fallen( Full Game)' by beyblade4:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - great graphics!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile  Nice use of sounds!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Exceptional!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Hard to get off!
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - very original concept!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Very professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  An excellent game with not enough views!

49/55 - an amazing game  smile  ! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

Thanks so much! Down by .5 woah!


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#30 2012-04-15 11:02:57

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

coolscruff wrote:

GoldRock wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

Review this:Click this or this or this!

My review of 'Pac man' by coolscruff:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - decent graphics.
Sound:  smile   smile  and a half - to expand, try using a few more sound effects.
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Good!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile  Pretty addictive!
Originality:  smile  and a half - not too original  smile
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Fairly professional.
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   A good game!

29.5/55 - a decent game  smile 

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

Thank you I am upgrading it in a week or two!

You're welcome - I'm looking forward to the upgrade  smile  !


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#31 2012-04-15 11:05:22

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

beyblade4 wrote:

GoldRock wrote:

My review of 'Revenge-WWIII Revenge of the Fallen( Full Game)' by beyblade4:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - great graphics!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile  Nice use of sounds!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Exceptional!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Hard to get off!
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - very original concept!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Very professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  An excellent game with not enough views!

49/55 - an amazing game  smile  ! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

Thanks so much! Down by .5 woah!

You're welcome - it is an amazing project  big_smile  !


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#32 2012-04-15 11:22:30

beyblade4
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Posts: 1000+

Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

beyblade4 wrote:

GoldRock wrote:


My review of 'Revenge-WWIII Revenge of the Fallen( Full Game)' by beyblade4:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - great graphics!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile  Nice use of sounds!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Exceptional!
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Hard to get off!
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - very original concept!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Very professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  An excellent game with not enough views!

49/55 - an amazing game  smile  ! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!

Thanks so much! Down by .5 woah!

You're welcome - it is an amazing project  big_smile  !

Well I worked my hardest on that one! I plan to make a sequel and when I do can you review that?


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#33 2012-04-15 11:22:45

RedRocker227
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Registered: 2011-10-26
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Re: Project Reviewing


Why

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#34 2012-04-15 11:24:46

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

beyblade4 wrote:

GoldRock wrote:

beyblade4 wrote:


Thanks so much! Down by .5 woah!

You're welcome - it is an amazing project  big_smile  !

Well I worked my hardest on that one! I plan to make a sequel and when I do can you review that?

Definitely - I'll keep an eye out for it (not literally)  big_smile  !


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#35 2012-04-15 11:49:00

beyblade4
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Posts: 1000+

Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

beyblade4 wrote:

GoldRock wrote:


You're welcome - it is an amazing project  big_smile  !

Well I worked my hardest on that one! I plan to make a sequel and when I do can you review that?

Definitely - I'll keep an eye out for it (not literally)  big_smile  !

lolz I made a demo of it but the full game will take a while since I have to do the good and bad side storylines


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#36 2012-04-15 11:54:42

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

RedRocker227 wrote:

Keep It Up! :3

My review of 'Keep It Up! (Remake)' by RedRocker227:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - Brilliant!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile  Great!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - Really good, most skills shown with some more advanced programming  big_smile
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  SO ADDICTIVE!!!  big_smile   big_smile   big_smile
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile  - I was actually thinking of making this - now I won't, because yours is a whole lot better than what I was planning to make!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  and a half - Very professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Simple but effective; I can't stop playing this game!

48.5/55 - an amazing game  big_smile  !!! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!


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#37 2012-04-15 11:58:13

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

beyblade4 wrote:

GoldRock wrote:

beyblade4 wrote:


Well I worked my hardest on that one! I plan to make a sequel and when I do can you review that?

Definitely - I'll keep an eye out for it (not literally)  big_smile  !

lolz I made a demo of it but the full game will take a while since I have to do the good and bad side storylines

Ah, OK  smile


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#38 2012-04-15 18:49:54

RedRocker227
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Re: Project Reviewing

Thanks for reviewing mine.  smile


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#39 2012-04-16 14:06:02

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

RedRocker227 wrote:

Thanks for reviewing mine.  smile

You're welcome - it was awesome  big_smile  !


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#40 2012-04-16 20:21:01

chipguy
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Re: Project Reviewing

okay... i'm trying for first again... i just finished laser cannon. can you review it?


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#41 2012-04-17 11:54:36

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

chipguy wrote:

okay... i'm trying for first again... i just finished laser cannon. can you review it?

Sure  smile


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#42 2012-04-17 12:43:36

okofish
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Registered: 2010-09-29
Posts: 24

Re: Project Reviewing

Hi! Could you review my new project "Collatz conjecture"? You can access it at http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/okofish/2475634
You should probably run it in Flash turbo mode. Thanks!

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#43 2012-04-17 12:52:36

GoldRock
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Registered: 2011-06-08
Posts: 100+

Re: Project Reviewing

chipguy wrote:

okay... i'm trying for first again... i just finished laser cannon. can you review it?

My review of 'laser cannon' by chipguy:

Graphics:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Nice graphics!
Sound:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Amazing use of sounds to great effect!
Programming:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - Really good, some more advanced programming  big_smile
Addictive-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   and a half - very addictive!
Originality:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - SUPER ORIGINAL!
Professional-ness:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  Very professional!
Overall:  smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile   smile  - A great game overall, with an original concept!

46.5/55 - an awesome game  big_smile  !!! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'exceptional'! If you ever need help, tell me!

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#44 2012-04-17 12:57:55

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

okofish wrote:

Hi! Could you review my new project "Collatz conjecture"? You can access it at http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/okofish/2475634
You should probably run it in Flash turbo mode. Thanks!

Very good project, but not suitable for my reviewing service, sorry  smile


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#45 2012-04-17 18:31:31

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Re: Project Reviewing

If you could give me an idea for a project, can you make my review better? Oh, the link is on the Project ideas forum. Top one.
Sorry if I am spamming, but I'll make a deal: If you can do these 2 things, I'll give you 2 love-its.  big_smile


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#46 2012-04-17 18:33:32

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

coolhogs wrote:

If you could give me an idea for a project, can you make my review better? Oh, the link is on the Project ideas forum. Top one.
Sorry if I am spamming, but I'll make a deal: If you can do these 2 things, I'll give you 2 love-its.  big_smile

Sorry, I don't take bribes lol!


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#47 2012-04-17 18:34:38

coolhogs
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Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

coolhogs wrote:

If you could give me an idea for a project, can you make my review better? Oh, the link is on the Project ideas forum. Top one.
Sorry if I am spamming, but I'll make a deal: If you can do these 2 things, I'll give you 2 love-its.  big_smile

Sorry, I don't take bribes lol!

Oh, it's not a bribe...
It's a deal. You don't have to do this.


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#48 2012-04-17 18:44:54

GoldRock
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Re: Project Reviewing

coolhogs wrote:

GoldRock wrote:

coolhogs wrote:

If you could give me an idea for a project, can you make my review better? Oh, the link is on the Project ideas forum. Top one.
Sorry if I am spamming, but I'll make a deal: If you can do these 2 things, I'll give you 2 love-its.  big_smile

Sorry, I don't take bribes lol!

Oh, it's not a bribe...
It's a deal. You don't have to do this.

Well, I can't do the 2nd thing, anyway  smile


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#49 2012-04-17 18:46:05

coolhogs
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Re: Project Reviewing

GoldRock wrote:

coolhogs wrote:

GoldRock wrote:


Sorry, I don't take bribes lol!

Oh, it's not a bribe...
It's a deal. You don't have to do this.

Well, I can't do the 2nd thing, anyway  smile

Ok, thanks.  smile


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#50 2012-04-17 21:05:40

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Re: Project Reviewing

how about the first project in my signiture?


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