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Animeboy975 · 2011-11-04 19:38:06

It's about a cat. And a lollipop. And a walking fish. And a penguin. And a pegasus.

Spark (a pegasus)
Ichigo (a orange cat)
Bubble (a walking fish)
Penguin (named Iceicle, i haven't named the other characters)
Boss (a lollipop)
Stare dude

BTW, It's called The Stare. And they maintain a park. It's wierd and supernatrual,exactly like Regular Show tongue And the generic titles in Gumball.

The Stare
Spark:*Plays video games*
Spark: OH YEAH! Level one down! (freaks out)
*Boss enters*
Boss:WHAT IS HAPPENING?
Ichigo: I'm trying to read a book, but he keeps yelling.
Boss: WE HAVE A MEETING!
Spark:What-ever. I'm turning my system off.
*goes outside the house*
Boss: So, we need someone new. Wait, where are Bubbles and Iceicle?
Iceicle: I'm here dudes. me and Walking Fish got some sodas.
Boss:STOP SLACKING OFF! We need someone new. I'm calling him.
Spark:What should i do in the meantime? Watch TV or something.
Bubble: Who is this new guy anyway.
Boss: From what i can collect, he's a ghost with sunglasses. And, Spark, go slack off for now or whatever.
Spark:YESSSSSS!
*Spark enters house*
Boss: He's coming any second now. He's covering some posters to hang up. And to buy a playground for the little kids.
Boss: Icicle and Bubble, you find him. Listen to music or drink soda or whatever.
Icicle and Bubbles: YESSSSSSSS! MORE METAL!
Iceicle: He's actually pulling up right now.
*Stare Dude pulls up.*
Stare Dude: My name is Stare. Stare Dewde to be exact.
*Stare Dude meets everyone*
Boss: And there is spark. He's playing video games.
Spark: LEVEL 10 NOW!
Stare Dude: *staring and yelling*STOP SLACKING OFF! GET TO WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spark *running up to his room barely breathing* SAKURA?
Ichigo: Yeah, what do you want?
Spark: THE NEW GUY CAME! HE HAS THE CREEPIEST STARE EVER!!!!!!!!!!!
Ichigo: Yeah, whatever. Lemme see.
*both get down*
Stare Dude: BOTH OF YOU GET BACK TO WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ichigo:Wow creepy.
Spark:Told ya. Let's get to work.
Spark:Ugh, cleaning the car is the worst!
Ichigo: I coulden't agree more.
Spark: We better clean up. It's nearly dinner. I'm making tacos.
*finish cleaning the car and go to eat with everyone*
Boss: Man, Stare you are awesome!
Stare Dude: Yeah. I'm probably the only ghost in the world that can eat. (Takes bite of taco)
Stare Dude: THESE...TACOS..ARE..TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!! *With creepy stare*
*Spark runs upstairs*
Spark: Aghh! It's that stare agian.
*Spark goes to sleep*
Spark: has creepy dream about stare dude... for like 4 min.
*Spark wakes up.*
Spark: Wha---- *sees a bunch of stares on the wall*
Spark:Ichigo?
Ichigo:Yeah, what? OOMG.
*Fight stare and stuff and stop ghost* (takes 3 min.)
Spark: Gone.
Spark:

Do you see a connection?
Spark:Rigby
Ichigo:Mordecai
Boss:Benson
Iceicle:Muscle Man
Bubbles:High Five Ghost
Making the ones for Skips and Pops in another one.

Do you guys like it so far? It also needs a title.

Last edited by Animeboy975 (2011-11-06 10:21:58)

AnimeCreatorArtist · 2011-11-04 21:50:33

walking fish?
.......TAWOG?

Animeboy975 · 2011-11-04 21:51:49

AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
walking fish?
.......TAWOG?

Yerp Derp.

Yeah I'm so unoriginal...

littletonkslover · 2011-11-04 22:26:30

love ur siggie gurlll <3

oh about the script...that's not 11 minutes man. maybe like 1,2?

mattb777 · 2011-11-04 22:28:52

Umm....

I don't know if CN will let you air this. I only saw 1 episode of RS, and this is WAY to similar. The only difference is that the characters look different and have different names.

Animeboy975 · 2011-11-05 08:05:11

mattb777 wrote:
Umm....

I don't know if CN will let you air this. I only saw 1 episode of RS, and this is WAY to similar. The only difference is that the characters look different and have different names.

No, i woulden't even make this.

I want it to be like a scratch series.

littletonkslover · 2011-11-05 09:39:19

why don't you just make a scratch version of regular show

this just makes you seem hopelessly cheap by ripping it off, even if you openly admit it

Animeboy975 · 2011-11-06 10:09:07

Finished it. I' making a RS comic in school.

UPCOMING EPISODES (W/ DISCRIPTION)

The Invasion- A bunch of people invade the park without notice.
The Spell- Spark accidentaly finds a spell that makes it night forever.

The Breath- Spark eats gum that makes his breath terrible.
The Manga- Spark and Ichigo buy a manga that everyone wants.

The Record- Spark and Ichigo find a 1st production Concord (fake rock band) and get addicted to it, but everyone else hates it.
The Tape- Spark takes Ichigo to his grandma's house and Ichigo gets traumitized by a old Leo The Lion tape on the stairs to the basement.

The Invitation- Spark finds out about a party down the street that he wants to get in, but it's invite only. He tries to crash it.
The Game- Everyone in the park goes to a hockey game, but Spark takes a nap and wakes up in the middle of the game. He tries to enter.

The Freakout- Spark eats a candy that he gets addicted to that makes him have a huge sugar freakout.
The Card- Spark and Ichigo go to a fair, but Spark gets too excited over a pink card.

The Vacation- The park goes on a vacation.
The Swarm- Nomnoms, a type of bug eats almost everything in the park.

The Stare- Spark is freaked out by the stare of the new guy at the park.
The Video- Spark gets famous on the Internet by making a viral video.

The Storm- Everyone panics when a storm comes to the park.
The Tournament- Spark and Ichigo enter a video game tournament.

I'm coming up with more ideas. What ep. do you guys want next?
BTW, The Movie is a upcoming episode. I haven't got the 2nd ep. planned.

Last edited by Animeboy975 (2011-11-07 20:00:11)

Animeboy975 · 2011-11-07 20:00:26

bump

CheckItNow12 · 2011-11-18 16:58:30

Plus, you just copied off Regular show and TAWOG.

Scratch

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#1 2011-11-04 19:38:06

Does this sound like a good 11 minute script (for a show)

#2 2011-11-04 21:50:33

Re: Does this sound like a good 11 minute script (for a show)

#3 2011-11-04 21:51:49

Re: Does this sound like a good 11 minute script (for a show)

AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:

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Re: Does this sound like a good 11 minute script (for a show)

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