It is a short movie I will be working on.
I plan on finishing on Christmas.
Script:
1 (AKA Nick) = 2's big brother.
2 (AKA Jamie) = 1's little brother.
3 (AKA Kevin) = Cousin of 1.
4 (AKA Anna) = Sister of 3.
[ 1 And 2 walk into the room to find 3 and 4, and the presents ] [ 1 Yawns ] 1: Hey look, our presents! Let's open them... [ 2 Glares at 1 ] 1: So we can...uh...hide in them and pop out of them on Christmas! [ 3 And 4 wake up and yawn ] 3: Yeah! [ 1 And 3 start opening presents ] [ 4 Gives a thumbs up and then starts opening presents too ] 2: Don't! [ 2 Picks up a chair ] 2: Or I will throw this out the window! [ 3 and 4 start looking at 1 and 2 ] 1: You can't, you aren't strong enough. [ 2 Drops the chair ] 2: Oh yeah... [1 Finally opens his present ] 1: Hey, this is a hot air balloon! [ 1 Starts to fly in the hot air balloon ] [ 2 Picks up chair again ] 2: I thought we were just going to hide in the presents. 1: Can't we at least try them out before Christmas? [ 2 Tries to throw the chair out the window, but ends up throwing it on the floor ] 1: Hey, I have something to tell you 2. 2: What? [ 1 Screams loudly ] 2: Aaaah! [ 2 falls down because he got scared ] 1: Hey, are you okay? 2: No. 1: Can't we be friends? 2: Lolwut? THE END
(It is from a dream I once had)
Have any suggestions or ideas for it?
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So awesome!!! but are you going to keep the names 1,2,3, and 4?
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kimmy123 wrote:
WaterHorse wrote:
So awesome!!! but are you going to keep the name 1,2,3, and 4?
No, I will change them later.
oh ok, i could give you ideas for their names if want.
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WaterHorse wrote:
mattb777 wrote:
Uhh....
O...k...
Sort of random, maybe needs more. What if they got in trouble for opening presents?
Also, how can a hot-air balloon fit in a box?it was probably a toy hot air balloon.
It was a real one.
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kimmy123 wrote:
WaterHorse wrote:
mattb777 wrote:
Uhh....
O...k...
Sort of random, maybe needs more. What if they got in trouble for opening presents?
Also, how can a hot-air balloon fit in a box?it was probably a toy hot air balloon.
It was a real one.
oh sorry :s
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kimmy123 wrote:
Do these character sketches look good?
http://i.imgur.com/DJHjf.png
Yeah. 1 looks like a Nick and 2 looks like a Jamie.
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kimmy123 wrote:
WaterHorse wrote:
can i help you come up with some names?
Sure.
Ok 1 could be Rob,Nick,or Jake.
2: Bobby or Luke
3:is 3 a guy or a girl? if 3 is a guy: Peter,John or William,.if 3 is a girl:Jessie,Lia,or Cheyenne
4: Mia,Anna,or Emily.
Hope that Helps
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jslomba wrote:
WaterHorse wrote:
kimmy123 wrote:
Sure.2: Bobby or Luke
Hope that HelpsLuke is my real name.
cool
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WaterHorse wrote:
kimmy123 wrote:
WaterHorse wrote:
can i help you come up with some names?
Sure.
Ok 1 could be Rob,Nick,or Jake. What about Ryan?
2: Bobby or Luke
3:is 3 a guy or a girl? if 3 is a guy: Peter,John or William,.if 3 is a girl:Jessie,Lia,or Cheyenne
4: Mia,Anna,or Emily.
Hope that Helps
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i thought of an idea while ago. PLEAZ DON STEAL
so there's this new dude at a school and everyone makes fun of him, calling him a chicken and stuff like that. his parents were killed on a farm. anyway, he goes through life with people looking at him weirdly and stuff and he's really confused. then one day he's in a bar and asks for a beer. the barman says he doesn't serve his kind. he's quite confused about this and looks in the mirror.
it turns out he was actually a chicken the whole time.
there's more too it. like he goes back in time to stop hitler, but you get the gist.
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