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This story isn't really scary IMO, but it's a bit off or creepy or whatever.

The night before you took the leap, I cried. I knew that I'd never see you again, ever. It was something you needed to do, you said. I believed you, like I always had. There was no reason not to; you had been trustworthy always. And you'd been there every time I needed someone. Until you took the leap. And what a marvelous leap it was.
        On the morning you took the leap, you looked into me with your soft blue eyes. You had an understanding look on your face, as if you knew how it felt to be watching, waiting. Waiting until the moment someone you loved very much would disappear from your life forever. I didn't understand why, and I still don't, but you insisted repeatedly that you had to do it. You also told me that everything would be much better after you left and you gave me a long, sad look. I looked into you, and realised that you were the only person I had ever truly loved. At that moment, I looked away. After my revelation, I couldn't look into those kind blue eyes any longer. I gazed at the trees. There was no time for this [OOPS I CAN'T SAY THAT ON THE SCRATCH FORUMS]. You had to take the leap, before anyone else woke.
        You said goodbye, and hugged me. I watched you create a trail of footprints up to the ledge. Then I turned away and trudged off to my bedroom. When my mother entered the room, she found me uncontrollably sobbing in my closet, hiding behind my clothing.
        The next three weeks were blurry. School was pretty much the only thing I did during that entire time. I don't really know what happened, though. All I know is that I thought. I thought of what I should do next. There was only one option.
        I made preparations. I wrote a letter to James Redding, the man who gave me twenty dollars on the bus so I could buy him several milkshakes. I threw a brick at Ellie Twelliss, the girl who had mocked me since kindergarten when I outsmarted her in a playful game of Connect Four. I completed all of my unfinished business. Then I left.
        It was a cool, grey morning. The birds sang softly in an unearthy chorus, setting the mood for my final act. I trudged upward to the cliffside, looking out at the trees like I had that day you took the leap. I heard a rustling noise behind me and I turned my head around. My mother and father were running up to the hill, shouting. I couldn't understand them. It was now or never.
        Invisible hands playfully pushed at me. They felt like your hands. I realised what mattered most, and took a single step forward.

It's also scarier than many other stories in this thread. :I

Last edited by veggieman001 (2011-10-30 01:48:00)

I don't think it's really "depressing" per say. Taking the leap is not what it seems.

marble hornet
entry 19

never sleeping again

“There is a video on YouTube named Mereana Mordegard Glesgorv. If you search this, you will find nothing. The few times you find something, all you will see is a 20 second video of a man staring intently at you, expressionless, then grinning for the last 2 seconds. The background is undefined. This is only part of the actual video.

The full video lasts 2 minutes, and was removed by YouTube after 153 people who viewed the video gouged out their eyes and mailed them to YouTube’s main office in San Bruno. Said people had also committed suicide in various ways. It is not yet known how they managed to mail their eyes after gouging them out. And the cryptic inscription they carve on their forearms has not yet been deciphered.

YouTube will periodically put up the first 20 seconds of the video to quell suspicions, so that people will not go look for the real thing and upload it. The video itself was only viewed by one YouTube staff member, who started screaming after 45 seconds. This man is under constant sedatives and is apparently unable to recall what he saw. The other people who were in the same room as him while he viewed it and turned off the video for him say that all they could hear was a high pitched drilling sound. None of them dared look at the screen.

The person who uploaded the video was never found, the IP address being non-existant. And the man on the video has never been identified."

veggieman001 wrote:

This story isn't really scary IMO, but it's a bit off or creepy or whatever.

The night before you took the leap, I cried. I knew that I'd never see you again, ever. It was something you needed to do, you said. I believed you, like I always had. There was no reason not to; you had been trustworthy always. And you'd been there every time I needed someone. Until you took the leap. And what a marvelous leap it was.
        On the morning you took the leap, you looked into me with your soft blue eyes. You had an understanding look on your face, as if you knew how it felt to be watching, waiting. Waiting until the moment someone you loved very much would disappear from your life forever. I didn't understand why, and I still don't, but you insisted repeatedly that you had to do it. You also told me that everything would be much better after you left and you gave me a long, sad look. I looked into you, and realised that you were the only person I had ever truly loved. At that moment, I looked away. After my revelation, I couldn't look into those kind blue eyes any longer. I gazed at the trees. There was no time for this [OOPS I CAN'T SAY THAT ON THE SCRATCH FORUMS]. You had to take the leap, before anyone else woke.
        You said goodbye, and hugged me. I watched you create a trail of footprints up to the ledge. Then I turned away and trudged off to my bedroom. When my mother entered the room, she found me uncontrollably sobbing in my closet, hiding behind my clothing.
        The next three weeks were blurry. School was pretty much the only thing I did during that entire time. I don't really know what happened, though. All I know is that I thought. I thought of what I should do next. There was only one option.
        I made preparations. I wrote a letter to James Redding, the man who gave me twenty dollars on the bus so I could buy him several milkshakes. I threw a brick at Ellie Twelliss, the girl who had mocked me since kindergarten when I outsmarted her in a playful game of Connect Four. I completed all of my unfinished business. Then I left.
        It was a cool, grey morning. The birds sang softly in an unearthy chorus, setting the mood for my final act. I trudged upward to the cliffside, looking out at the trees like I had that day you took the leap. I heard a rustling noise behind me and I turned my head around. My mother and father were running up to the hill, shouting. I couldn't understand them. It was now or never.
        Invisible hands playfully pushed at me. They felt like your hands. I realised what mattered most, and took a single step forward.

It's also scarier than many other stories in this thread. :I

<3 that story. It ends a little like TDD's, where the guy commits suicide in the way that the girl did so he could be with her.

@TDD Ugh, I hate broken keys.

Luigitailsdoll45 wrote:

“There is a video on YouTube named Mereana Mordegard Glesgorv. If you search this, you will find nothing. The few times you find something, all you will see is a 20 second video of a man staring intently at you, expressionless, then grinning for the last 2 seconds. The background is undefined. This is only part of the actual video.

The full video lasts 2 minutes, and was removed by YouTube after 153 people who viewed the video gouged out their eyes and mailed them to YouTube’s main office in San Bruno. Said people had also committed suicide in various ways. It is not yet known how they managed to mail their eyes after gouging them out. And the cryptic inscription they carve on their forearms has not yet been deciphered.

YouTube will periodically put up the first 20 seconds of the video to quell suspicions, so that people will not go look for the real thing and upload it. The video itself was only viewed by one YouTube staff member, who started screaming after 45 seconds. This man is under constant sedatives and is apparently unable to recall what he saw. The other people who were in the same room as him while he viewed it and turned off the video for him say that all they could hear was a high pitched drilling sound. None of them dared look at the screen.

The person who uploaded the video was never found, the IP address being non-existant. And the man on the video has never been identified."

That video is REAL...  and freaky.... but no, I'm alive. 

Luigitailsdoll45 wrote:

“There is a video on YouTube named Mereana Mordegard Glesgorv. If you search this, you will find nothing. The few times you find something, all you will see is a 20 second video of a man staring intently at you, expressionless... the person who uploaded the video was never found, the IP address being non-existant. And the man on the video has never been identified."

I did some research- this video is actually a hoax and the person is some employee at this company. And this story... I saw it in another place when I was Google-searching, so I'm not sure if YOU wrote it...

-iNetMaster- wrote:

trekkie2000 wrote:

Ok, I dont get it. What is it with ppl and MLP? Its a CHILDREN'S show yet I know kids in my middle school and even a few in high school that watch it.
This is either some sort of inside joke that I dont get

Or today's children are more pathetic than I anticipated.

+1

-1

veggieman001 wrote:

This story isn't really scary IMO, but it's a bit off or creepy or whatever.

The night before you took the leap, I cried. I knew that I'd never see you again, ever. It was something you needed to do, you said. I believed you, like I always had. There was no reason not to; you had been trustworthy always. And you'd been there every time I needed someone. Until you took the leap. And what a marvelous leap it was.
        On the morning you took the leap, you looked into me with your soft blue eyes. You had an understanding look on your face, as if you knew how it felt to be watching, waiting. Waiting until the moment someone you loved very much would disappear from your life forever. I didn't understand why, and I still don't, but you insisted repeatedly that you had to do it. You also told me that everything would be much better after you left and you gave me a long, sad look. I looked into you, and realised that you were the only person I had ever truly loved. At that moment, I looked away. After my revelation, I couldn't look into those kind blue eyes any longer. I gazed at the trees. There was no time for this [OOPS I CAN'T SAY THAT ON THE SCRATCH FORUMS]. You had to take the leap, before anyone else woke.
        You said goodbye, and hugged me. I watched you create a trail of footprints up to the ledge. Then I turned away and trudged off to my bedroom. When my mother entered the room, she found me uncontrollably sobbing in my closet, hiding behind my clothing.
        The next three weeks were blurry. School was pretty much the only thing I did during that entire time. I don't really know what happened, though. All I know is that I thought. I thought of what I should do next. There was only one option.
        I made preparations. I wrote a letter to James Redding, the man who gave me twenty dollars on the bus so I could buy him several milkshakes. I threw a brick at Ellie Twelliss, the girl who had mocked me since kindergarten when I outsmarted her in a playful game of Connect Four. I completed all of my unfinished business. Then I left.
        It was a cool, grey morning. The birds sang softly in an unearthy chorus, setting the mood for my final act. I trudged upward to the cliffside, looking out at the trees like I had that day you took the leap. I heard a rustling noise behind me and I turned my head around. My mother and father were running up to the hill, shouting. I couldn't understand them. It was now or never.
        Invisible hands playfully pushed at me. They felt like your hands. I realised what mattered most, and took a single step forward.

It's also scarier than many other stories in this thread. :I

Wow.  That's amazing.  Did you write that?  It's one of my favorite stories I can remember reading on the SF in a long time.

bananaman114 wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

veggieman001 wrote:

This story isn't really scary IMO, but it's a bit off or creepy or whatever.

It's also scarier than many other stories in this thread. :I

Wow.  That's amazing.  Did you write that?  It's one of my favorite stories I can remember reading on the SF in a long time.

yeah he wrote that

Well, I hope he sees this cause it's really good.  Except maybe, you should leave out the period at the end of the last sentence.

pinkcat09 wrote:

THE LOST YOUTUBE VIDEO

I'm banned from YouTube,but before I was banned,I looked up "The Scariest Video On YouTube".Everything was the same.Scary maze games,screamers,everything.On page 30,I found a video with the same title.The description was just "Jjfygrhy3vrf."I just clicked on it.But before I saw it,I looked in the comments.Only 2 comments.One had a Z with a circle around it.On the bottem of it was a reply with a language I never saw before.The video was about 3 minutes long.It started.For 10 seconds,it showed static.I then heard an eerie laugh.The blackness faded away,showing a creature with an oval head,having red,glowing eyes.It had very sharp teeth,(with its mouth always hanging open,of course.)Then it showed an eerie smile.It started coming closer,to very creepy music.Then,all of a sudden,a blood curdling scream came.Soon it showed static for the rest of the movie.I could hear whispers saying "Turn back.You don't know whats coming up in your life."Soon the movie ended.I looked at the comments again and one was named "higfffrrrrhrh".I looked him up.Nothing.It said he doesn't exsist.The other,no username.One month after watching the vid,I caught a horrible diease that the docters didn't know of.

(this video isn't real,but i am banned from youtube.This is also before this topic closes again.)

higfffrrrrhrh.
Loving the creative genius
IT'S INSPIRED 

Wickimen wrote:

pinkcat09 wrote:

THE LOST YOUTUBE VIDEO

I'm banned from YouTube,but before I was banned,I looked up "The Scariest Video On YouTube".Everything was the same.Scary maze games,screamers,everything.On page 30,I found a video with the same title.The description was just "Jjfygrhy3vrf."I just clicked on it.But before I saw it,I looked in the comments.Only 2 comments.One had a Z with a circle around it.On the bottem of it was a reply with a language I never saw before.The video was about 3 minutes long.It started.For 10 seconds,it showed static.I then heard an eerie laugh.The blackness faded away,showing a creature with an oval head,having red,glowing eyes.It had very sharp teeth,(with its mouth always hanging open,of course.)Then it showed an eerie smile.It started coming closer,to very creepy music.Then,all of a sudden,a blood curdling scream came.Soon it showed static for the rest of the movie.I could hear whispers saying "Turn back.You don't know whats coming up in your life."Soon the movie ended.I looked at the comments again and one was named "higfffrrrrhrh".I looked him up.Nothing.It said he doesn't exsist.The other,no username.One month after watching the vid,I caught a horrible diease that the docters didn't know of.

(this video isn't real,but i am banned from youtube.This is also before this topic closes again.)

higfffrrrrhrh.
Loving the creative genius
IT'S INSPIRED 

thank you! i enjoy writing scary stories