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Alternatives · 2011-10-22 06:59:22

Left Alone in the Dark

Is this what it feels like,
to be left alone in the da-ark
Is this what it feels like,
to live with a broken hea-art

I feel like dying,
but I don't have the ener-gie
I feel like crying,
Drowning in my mis-ery

The pain, the pain, the pain is flowin'
My misery is, steadily growin'

And I know, I know
That it'll get better
But I, cannot
wait forever

So is this what it feels like,
to pick up, the knife
Is this what it feels like,
to know your about to take your own life

Is this what, it feels like,
to realize what your doin' and start to cry
Knowin' that you are about to die

Is this what it feels like,
to be left alone in the da-ark
Is this what it feels like,
to live with a broken hea-art
Is this what it, feels like,
To be on a sinking a-ark
Is this what it feels like?

I feel like dying,
but I don't have the ener-gie
I feel like crying,
Drowning in my mis-ery

...thats it so far c: thoughts?

ssss · 2011-10-22 06:59:59

Sounds like something I'd write...
Very good.

PlutoIsHades · 2011-10-22 07:10:48

Great song! If you write any more I would want to read them. smile

Alternatives · 2011-10-22 07:14:28

Thanks big_smile Its the first full length song I wrote. When me and my band recorded it it was 5 minutes long o: thats with all the instrumental parts

PlutoIsHades · 2011-10-22 07:23:23

Alternatives wrote:
Thanks Its the first full length song I wrote. When me and my band recorded it it was 5 minutes long o: thats with all the instrumental parts

Recorded? Cool.

jji7skyline · 2011-10-22 07:24:20

Can I see the instrument bits? I can strum along on my guitar then tongue

veggieman001 · 2011-10-22 10:29:11

Alternatives wrote:
Thanks Its the first full length song I wrote. When me and my band recorded it it was 5 minutes long o: thats with all the instrumental parts

could i hear it?

alldaykade28471 · 2011-10-22 10:30:36

Can I use this for my band? It's really good!!!! big_smile

Death_Wish · 2011-10-22 10:32:28

A song about suicide? tongue
Well written, but nobody can really capture the song without listening to it. I'm just thinking of another punk song going with this lyrics, and who knows, maybe it's completely different.

Alternatives · 2011-10-22 10:39:12

Death_Wish wrote:
A song about suicide?
Well written, but nobody can really capture the song without listening to it. I'm just thinking of another punk song going with this lyrics, and who knows, maybe it's completely different.

Yeah, its about suicide tongue

@alldaykade28471: Um, no, me and my band are using it.

@People who want to hear it: Its still very experimental instrumentally. We haven't decided on the guitar chords or piano notes yet, we're shifting between a few choices. But we will upload an album with it on onto bandcamp soon, so yeah.

Last edited by Alternatives (2011-10-22 10:39:42)

veggieman001 · 2011-10-22 10:41:39

Alternatives wrote:
Death_Wish wrote:
A song about suicide?
Well written, but nobody can really capture the song without listening to it. I'm just thinking of another punk song going with this lyrics, and who knows, maybe it's completely different.
Yeah, its about suicide

@alldaykade28471: Um, no, me and my band are using it.

@People who want to hear it: Its still very experimental instrumentally. We haven't decided on the guitar chords or piano notes yet, we're shifting between a few choices. But we will upload an album with it on onto bandcamp soon, so yeah.

whats your bandcamp

Alternatives · 2011-10-22 10:46:43

veggieman001 wrote:
Alternatives wrote:
Death_Wish wrote:
A song about suicide?
Well written, but nobody can really capture the song without listening to it. I'm just thinking of another punk song going with this lyrics, and who knows, maybe it's completely different.
Yeah, its about suicide

@alldaykade28471: Um, no, me and my band are using it.

@People who want to hear it: Its still very experimental instrumentally. We haven't decided on the guitar chords or piano notes yet, we're shifting between a few choices. But we will upload an album with it on onto bandcamp soon, so yeah.
whats your bandcamp

Riptide, but its still empty.

Alternatives · 2011-10-23 08:31:03

bump

imnotbob · 2011-10-23 08:32:33

Cool!

sanddude · 2011-10-23 10:19:27

To me, it basically sounds like every other song about suicide. Shows potential, though.

Last edited by sanddude (2011-10-23 10:22:38)

Earthboundjeff · 2011-10-23 10:48:29

Um
Maybe now you should start singing songs about rainbows
Or at least suicidal rainbows

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