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#1 2011-10-16 10:18:56
- Animeboy975
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- Registered: 2010-01-09
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Creepytown,USA (My Halloween story)
CHAPTER 1:Welcome to Creepytown, ENJOY YOUR STAY *evil laugh*
I was lost in a forest for days with my cat Mew. Walking, with the trees turning darker and eviler every second. I had a tent and sleeping bag, which i stopped every day and slept. After about 5 days, i saw a raft and a river, and jumped on it because it was the only thing there. I rafted for about a day, and i saw a stone path. And, my name is Jake. I went into it, and i saw the stone gate shut behind me lock. Than a intercom came on "WELCOME TO CREEPYTOWN"
Do you like it? I'm making more chapters
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#2 2011-10-16 10:21:26
- SpriteMaster
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- Registered: 2009-01-25
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Re: Creepytown,USA (My Halloween story)
Animeboy975 wrote:
CHAPTER 1:Welcome to Creepytown, ENJOY YOUR STAY *evil laugh*
I was lost in a forest for days with my cat Mew. Walking, with the trees turning darker and eviler every second. I had a tent and sleeping bag, which i stopped every day and slept. After about 5 days, i saw a raft and a river, and jumped on it because it was the only thing there. I rafted for about a day, and i saw a stone path. And, my name is Jake. I went into it, and i saw the stone gate shut behind me lock. Than a intercom came on "WELCOME TO CREEPYTOWN"
Do you like it? I'm making more chapters
I thought it went too fast, there wasn't much build up and I feel like you rushed to get just ONE idea out.
And, my name is Jake
like that ^
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#3 2011-10-16 10:34:46
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- Registered: 2010-09-16
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Re: Creepytown,USA (My Halloween story)
Don't understand it.
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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