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I was typing in a discussion about my older posts when my mom kicked me off the computer, so here's the jist of what I typed. If anyone can link me to the original topic about first posts, please do.

I recently looked at my older posts and realized how much better a writer I have become.  I was trying to be too nice, and my writing style was just bad. Also, looking at some of my projects, I am embarrassed at how high my voice sounded. My voice has gotten a lot deeper since I have had projects with my voice in them.
My first post is bad, but not nearly as bad as my second post. Here is my first post. It was called "Ninja Cat" and was posted in Show and Tell. WORLD'S WORST SENTENCE IS HIGHLIGHTED IN RED.

I made a game a couple of weeks ago called "Ninja Cat Adventures", and it was my first scroller. The game is very fun, and I advise you to check it out. That actually isn't the reason I am typing right now! I just started making the sequel! Ninja Cat 2, will be an amazing game (when finished)! Right now, I am working on the map (Tells you where you are), The Charge Meter(When full you can use a special power), and the Sewer (First Level). The difference between this and the 1st game in the series, is this one is trickier, cooler, better, there are more attacks and powers, and the Cat is many years older and many years more trained. The plot of the game is that when the cat was a youngling (First Game), he killed three monsters. Thoses monsters's creator is trying to get revenge on the cat. Check me time to time to see if it is out!

First off, the sentences make no sense. Just look at the one in red, and all the ones around it. I was acting too nice because this was my new account, as I was embarrassed at the bad and dumb projects I had uploaded on my old account.
Also, I had promised a second game, which of course, I didn't make. My second post is another example of that, with Crocodile Odyssey 2. The post was in Show and Tell, under the name "This is Amazing!"

I recently made a game called, "Crocodile Odyssey," In which a crocodile with an axe (A cool sprite I found) Defeats monsters. I am working on Crocodile Odyssey 2 in which the crocodile goes around an awesome world of scrolling. It has the same feel as Archknight's Adventure, just with a different plot, different programming, and different sprites whatsoever. I'm not popular enough for this to be as well known as Archknight's Adventure, but it will be just as long and just as fun! I am on level 0.5, so it will be done in a little while. I am estimating 3 looooooooooooooooooooooong levels. Here they are:

                                     Crocodile Odessey #2 Level Scheme (Current)

                           #1: The Forest
                          #2: Midnight Valley
                         #3: LavaLand (Or something......)

That's it. Peace out.

Okay, so it isn't as bad as the first one, though I promised a lot. And look at this sentence.

It has the same feel as Archknight's Adventure, just with a different plot, different programming, and different sprites whatsoever

So in other words, it's a completely different game.
And this is a reply to another Scratcher's post on this topic saying that he would check out Crocodile Odyssey 1.

That would be great for you to check out crocodile oddessy 1! It is full of glitches whereas 2 will not be. So far, no glitches with it.

First sentence there.

It seemed like after those two posts, my writing got better and I used comprehensible sentences.

One thing I feel bad about was not finishing Croc. Odyssey 2. It was actually a great game, and I still have the first level on my computer.  I never started the Ninja Cat 2, but that was never gonna happen anyway. Anyway, now I post better, and that's that.