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#1 2011-10-08 09:57:06

alldaykade28471
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Critic Reviewer here!

Hi. I'm Alldaykade28471 and I'm a Critic Reviewer. If you think one of your projects is really awesome I will review it as long as you give me the link to it. (I will be honest)

I have already reviewed 9 projects.

Please give me a link. (By the way if it's good I'll advertise)

Here are some of the reviews I gave out:

Nice work! Really cool design. Needs more color though...

Amazing game! Little glitchy though. Could be a little faster too...

It needs a to be a little longer. Or you could make it a series...

Last edited by alldaykade28471 (2011-10-20 16:36:14)

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#2 2011-10-08 10:13:45

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

No one wants to get a free view? Maybe even a love-it. Or even advertisement. Hmmmm... I'm going to delete this topic if no one enters.

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#3 2011-10-08 10:27:12

Ro_bert
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!


[url=http://[please don't put commercial ads on Scratch]/3XJPA]THIS GAME HAS http://blocks.scratchr.org/API.php?user=Ro_bert&action=projects&type=newest&return=loves&num=4 love its don't believe? THEN CHECK IT OUT[/url]

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#4 2011-10-08 11:18:02

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Ro_bert wrote:

hey, please rate this : scratch.mit.edu/projects/Ro_bert/2010282

I really liked it, but I already reviewed it.

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#5 2011-10-08 11:46:57

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

No one wants a free view? Maybe even a love-it. Or even advertisement. Just give me a link and I will check it out.

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#6 2011-10-08 12:37:45

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Bump  big_smile  That's so weird that no one wants a free view.

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#7 2011-10-08 13:19:25

ScareCrowCritic
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

here is my animation

*You need to download or else it won't work!


http://i.imgur.com/Sy57w.gif

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#8 2011-10-08 13:25:14

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

ScareCrowCritic wrote:

here is my animation

*You need to download or else it won't work!

Nice game! I reveiwed it in the comments.

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#9 2011-10-13 10:16:57

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Bump

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#10 2011-10-13 10:18:40

Hardmath123
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

You should write the reviews here so people know what they'll get. That's my advice.


Hardmaths-MacBook-Pro:~ Hardmath$ sudo make $(whoami) a sandwich

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#11 2011-10-13 11:33:18

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Hardmath123 wrote:

You should write the reviews here so people know what they'll get. That's my advice.

Ok, I will! Thanks!!

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#12 2011-10-13 12:11:15

Borrego6165
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Hi! I'm doing an InterInc Ultimate game which is a compilation of all the Inter-In games. However, I need outside opinions on them all, and I need like a summary which compares them between each other (like saying the bst one, glichiest one ect...) and it's hard to find a scratcher who's willing to do the job. Are you prepared?

It's no essay or exam style review, I'm not goanna expect "PEED" paragraphs (don't ask) but I need some tough critism and also so good points.

InternationalInc
EntertainmentInc
InterCarnyInc

They are in order of their release dates, so theoretically they should get better as my skills got better.


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#13 2011-10-13 12:24:44

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Borrego6165 wrote:

Hi! I'm doing an InterInc Ultimate game which is a compilation of all the Inter-In games. However, I need outside opinions on them all, and I need like a summary which compares them between each other (like saying the bst one, glichiest one ect...) and it's hard to find a scratcher who's willing to do the job. Are you prepared?

It's no essay or exam style review, I'm not goanna expect "PEED" paragraphs (don't ask) but I need some tough critism and also so good points.

InternationalInc
EntertainmentInc
InterCarnyInc

They are in order of their release dates, so theoretically they should get better as my skills got better.

Okay! I will check them out as soon as I can. Thanks!!  smile

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#14 2011-10-13 12:31:43

Borrego6165
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

alldaykade28471 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Hi! I'm doing an InterInc Ultimate game which is a compilation of all the Inter-In games. However, I need outside opinions on them all, and I need like a summary which compares them between each other (like saying the bst one, glichiest one ect...) and it's hard to find a scratcher who's willing to do the job. Are you prepared?

It's no essay or exam style review, I'm not goanna expect "PEED" paragraphs (don't ask) but I need some tough critism and also so good points.

InternationalInc
EntertainmentInc
InterCarnyInc

They are in order of their release dates, so theoretically they should get better as my skills got better.

Okay! I will check them out as soon as I can. Thanks!!  smile

Hope you enjoy them!


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#15 2011-10-13 12:37:51

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Borrego6165 wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Hi! I'm doing an InterInc Ultimate game which is a compilation of all the Inter-In games. However, I need outside opinions on them all, and I need like a summary which compares them between each other (like saying the bst one, glichiest one ect...) and it's hard to find a scratcher who's willing to do the job. Are you prepared?

It's no essay or exam style review, I'm not goanna expect "PEED" paragraphs (don't ask) but I need some tough critism and also so good points.

InternationalInc
EntertainmentInc
InterCarnyInc

They are in order of their release dates, so theoretically they should get better as my skills got better.

Okay! I will check them out as soon as I can. Thanks!!  smile

Hope you enjoy them!

I might not view them today... Because I have a lot of stuff today. I will tomorrow though!  smile

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#16 2011-10-13 12:47:24

Borrego6165
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

don't worry!


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#17 2011-10-13 14:42:44

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Borrego6165 wrote:

don't worry!

Reviewed them. Nice work!

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#18 2011-10-13 14:59:42

Borrego6165
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

alldaykade28471 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

don't worry!

Reviewed them. Nice work!

Nice work? but you said they all had terrible graphics and only one made a little bit of sense.


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#19 2011-10-13 16:34:06

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Borrego6165 wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

don't worry!

Reviewed them. Nice work!

Nice work? but you said they all had terrible graphics and only one made a little bit of sense.

I loved the idea though... It does not matter much about the graphics...

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#20 2011-10-13 17:09:47

rabbit1131
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Try this Island Escape!
It's a WIP


The Intergalactic Adventures of Revesilia! I hope you will partake in this gigantic undertaking, to build the sequel to the hit map The Adventures of Revesilia! The Intergalactic Adventures of Revesilia Map Builders Application thread! http://internetometer.com/image/35004.png

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#21 2011-10-13 18:22:19

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

rabbit1131 wrote:

Try this Island Escape!
It's a WIP

What's a WIP?

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#22 2011-10-13 18:57:49

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

rabbit1131 wrote:

Try this Island Escape!
It's a WIP

I reviewed it! I loved it!

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#23 2011-10-20 16:06:56

Codebreaker
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Registered: 2011-10-03
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Please review my project, BeTiled! Here is the link: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Codebreaker/2092876. Please be honest.


Latest project: Pixelation/Upcoming project(s): M.A.Z.E Runner

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#25 2011-10-20 16:32:40

alldaykade28471
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Re: Critic Reviewer here!

Codebreaker wrote:

Please review my project, BeTiled! Here is the link: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Codebreaker/2092876. Please be honest.

Reviewed in comments...  smile

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