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#1 2011-10-03 16:14:17
- The_Dancing_Donut
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Songwriting - Advice & Idea Sharing Thread :'3
There's nothing left to say
You just look straight through me
Just like every other day
You saw me
Crying by myself
The butt of everyone's joke today
Cant they see I'm NOT okay?
So remember me...
Oh, remember me...
[Chorus]
Keep me in your mind when I have gone
Just carry on, 'cos I know that you're the one
I weep, I cry
I want to die
But I will try
To keep the hope
I'm sure I'll cope
But I beg, I plead, I want you to
Remember me!
I'm crying as I sing
Het up from every single thing
Hanging on to life is such a drag
Every day I pack my bag
Head off to school
I'm not a geek, yet I'm not cool
The butt of everyone's joke today
They can't see I'm NOT okay!
Forget me...
Just forget me...
[Chorus]
I'm here I'll be okay
I can cry the pain away
And this is all I have to say...
Remember me, remember me...
Forget the world, remember me.
I made a new songwriting thread 
Share your lyrical masterpieces and get advice from fellow songwriters :3
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#3 2011-10-03 16:24:57
- The_Dancing_Donut
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Re: Songwriting - Advice & Idea Sharing Thread :'3
kimmy123 wrote:
Didn't you already post this?
Nope...
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#5 2011-10-03 16:28:51
- Earthboundjeff
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Re: Songwriting - Advice & Idea Sharing Thread :'3
It's awesome.
My advice: don't ask me for advice.
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#6 2011-10-03 16:32:49
- The_Dancing_Donut
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Re: Songwriting - Advice & Idea Sharing Thread :'3
kimmy123 wrote:
The_Dancing_Donut wrote:
kimmy123 wrote:
Didn't you already post this?
Nope...
I could of sworn I saw something just like this posted by you a few minutes before this topic was posted.
I hope I didn't accidently post it twice! D;
@athboundjeff - Cheers, and lol ^^
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#7 2011-10-03 16:33:28
Re: Songwriting - Advice & Idea Sharing Thread :'3
The_Dancing_Donut wrote:
kimmy123 wrote:
The_Dancing_Donut wrote:
Nope...I could of sworn I saw something just like this posted by you a few minutes before this topic was posted.
I hope I didn't accidently post it twice! D;
@athboundjeff - Cheers, and lol ^^
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