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??? What's with the big love it?

Okay, so down to the rating...

I Stink at Lying by flamekyle

Info: I Stink at Lying is a little animation about someone who stinks at lying 

Programming: 7/10-The animations were kind of simple, but they got the job done.
Graphics: 7/10-The graphics didn't quite fit (well the troll face at least) but you it's still typical animation graphics, so the other graphics are fine.
Storyline: 4/10-The story was extremely short. It's basically a fart and then an accusation then the end...
Sounds and Music: 8/10-Great sounds and music, especially the end, although the quality is kind of bad.

OVERALL...
★★★☆☆ 3/5 Stars! This project has received a 65%.

Additional details:
I believe you have the programming and the graphics down, but all you need to make great animations is to make it longer, unlike all other supposedly "good" animations which are also 5 seconds long... Work on making it longer and it'll be better!

Last edited by kayybee (2011-09-25 20:34:13)

It is just a trailer... Are you sure you want me to rate it?

(I don't see the point in making [and rating] a trailer when you could be making [or rating something else] the real thing...)

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/DCP/1144126

TRAILER!!!! by maxdoss

Info: TRAILER!!!! is a trailer for an upcoming game by maxdoss.

Programming: 4/10-Only the first few slides were actually animated, and the rest was just text.
Graphics: 4/10-The graphics were pretty simple. The boxes were not squares (to make squares, hold shift while using the box tool)...
Length: 4/10-The trailer was extremely short. There wasn't quite any screenshots which would have made it more interesting, or a small demo.
Sounds and Music: 6/10-Nice music, but I suggest you give credit next time 

OVERALL...
★★☆☆☆ 2/5 Stars. This project has received a 45%.

Additional details:
Instead of making a simple trailer, try making a small demo, even if it's really simple. This will give the viewers an idea of what the project will be like once it's finished. Also, next time, you shouldn't ask for ratings on a trailer. Save the asking time and put it into the programming time of the actual project. You got 3 days left 


Asteroids by DCP

Info: Asteroids is a space-themed game where you shoot asteroids in a spaceship.

Programming: 9/10-Excellent programming! I love how the spaceship turns as it moves, not just staying straight! It's a great little detail! Your programming was great, making the background change and the asteroids move. I'd like more lives to make the game easier, but I guess in life you only have one. 
Graphics: 8.5/10-The graphics you made were great, and the backgrounds you found were too. I couldn't have made a better spaceship. Good job!
Storyline/Length: 8/10-The storyline was simple, but it was nice and clear. *AVOID ASTEROIDS. DON'T DIE* That's what it said to me. The length of the
Sounds and Music: 8.5/10-Nice music, but I suggest you give credit next time. I love the sounds of the firing of lasers and stuff. Great sounds.

OVERALL...
★★★★☆ 4/5 Stars! This project has received a 85%.

Additional details:
WONDERFUL PROJECT! However, there is one thing that I might want to fix: you can only fire one small laser at a time. Maybe you should make it A) disappear on contact or B) make one more laser to make the game flow more.

Good job, I am featuring this project in my signature!


Entertainment Inc 1.2 by Borrego6165

Info: Entertainment Inc is a tycoon like game where you build a cinema.

Programming: 9/10-Excellent job getting the scrolling cinema, along with the moving windows. The programming is a little glitchy however, and some features require panther.
Graphics: 9/10-The graphics looked all original and did a good job expressing what it was.
Storyline/Length: 8/10-The game looked like it could go on forever, great job on making it "never-ending". But, the game was a little confusing and I could see how someone might want to quit because they don't know how to play the game.
Sounds and Music: 3/10-There was no music, but I know that was to save space. But, because you did give an option to add your own music, I gave you 3 more points for that.

OVERALL...
★★★★☆ 4/5 Stars. This project has received a 72.5%.
You're lucky it's over 70% so it's rounded up 

Additional details:
It's a great game, but maybe just type instructions on the side project notes next time. Also, great job implementing optional features, and excellent job on the programming.

I would feature this in my signature, but it's already curated so it's not needed.

kayybee wrote:

bump.

I'm pretty sure more people want to be reviewed and advertised.

Look at Asteroids by DCP, the project in my sig. It started it out with a few love its, and now it has 11!

bump

kayybee is right, post your projects and then you will get much more attention.

can you rate this Goob Ghosts

Okay, I am currently rating all of them.

Please, it would be better to give me projects that are not so recent, but still aren't popular. (I have a certain reason for this, and you'll see once a project fits the categories)

From now on, I do not rate projects over 100 views, or over 50 love its.

I want to advertise most of them, so I want them to be less popular.

Last edited by kayybee (2011-10-03 00:04:38)