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fireheartocean · 2011-08-12 23:28:15

Hi. I'm Fireheartocean, but you can call me FireOcean or Fire. :] I love writing stories. I love playing Minecraft. So there you go, an explanation for why I'm here writing this epic fail Minecraft fanfiction. Uh... so, I hope you enjoy. I am also taking character suggestions, so if you want your character in this story, just fill out this form! smile

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So... uhh... let's get started with this epic fail of a story, shall we? big_smile

Stealth. Speed. Courage. A diamond sword. Those are the things a Master Enemy Hunter needs... and, as it happened to be, FireOcean had none of these things. She wanted the ability to walk right out of her pathetic dirt house in the middle of the night without looking right or left. To be able to pull out a diamond sword, laugh in the face of any creepers lurking in the shadows, and slay thousands of enemies. She had only been in Minecraft a week now, but she knew enough about Enemy Hunters to know that she wanted to be one. She smirked. As if that would ever happen! She wasn't all that brave, and almost never went exploring in caves. As she walked out her door, something bumped into her. "Creeper!" she screamed, shakily pulling out a stone sword. She slashed the sword at the dark figure, closing her eyes in case it exploded on her. "What the..." another Minecrafter's voice spoke in surprise. A sword blocked her attack forcefully, and the other Minecrafter pulled out a bow. Realizing quickly that it wasn't a creeper, FireOcean felt less fear because the Minecrafter wouldn't explode on her... hopefully. She dropped her sword and yanked the bow from the Minecrafter's hands. He pulled out a diamond sword and started fighting her. She blocked his attacks as well as she could, although she got hit a lot more than she had hoped she would. "Why are we fighting each-" she spoke, dodging a spinning diamond sword, "other if we already know-" she was breathless as she dodged the sharp blow of the diamond sword, "that we're both Minecrafters?" The other guy stopped for a moment. "I don't know," he admitted, shrugging. He equipped his sword again and spun it around to face FireOcean. Anger pierced her heart. He knew that she was a Minecrafter, but he STILL tried to kill her? She punched his face. "That's enough of that, please," she growled as he fell to the ground. "So, who are you?" she asked as he respawned. "They call me Dark. I'm not sure why we were fighting... sorry about that," he yawned. FireOcean sighed. "I guess it's okay that you TRIED TO KILL ME, but I'm not feeling particularly.... warm... to you right now." she muttered. He got down on his knees. "Please, forgive me," he begged, "My home had been destroyed, and I need a place to stay!" FireOcean grudgingly offered him a place to stay in her puny dirt home, making a new bed in the one-room-house. "I just hope he doesn't slice the furniture apart in his sleep," she muttered under her breath as she dozed off to sleep. "Because if he does... I'm going to have take away his beautiful diamond sword."

Part 2 coming soon! What do you think so far?

j4142000 · 2011-08-13 20:37:55

Cool smile I love minecraft,and this story is awesome. Do you plan on including... Pictures?

throughthefire · 2011-08-13 23:36:36

Nice! But you stole my nickname of 'Fire.' tongue

fireheartocean · 2011-09-06 11:01:43

j4142000 wrote:
Cool I love minecraft,and this story is awesome. Do you plan on including... Pictures?

Thank you! Maybe, if I can find a good place to set up a little dirt village. :]

fireheartocean · 2011-09-06 11:02:53

throughthefire wrote:
Nice! But you stole my nickname of 'Fire.'

Thanks! And... oops. I'll be... Ocean. Or FireOcean or something. xD

rabbit1131 · 2011-09-06 11:04:42

Name: Rabbit1131
Gender: Male
Looks: Blue jeans and a leather jacket.
Personality: Always keeps his cool, works hard.
Other: Redstone freak.

werdna123 · 2011-09-06 11:06:03

rabbit1131 wrote:
Name: Rabbit1131
Gender: Male
Looks: Blue jeans and a leather jacket.
Personality: Always keeps his cool, works hard.
Other: Redstone freak.

Off topic, get on CC.

fireheartocean · 2011-09-25 13:05:54

In the morning, FireOcean had to kick that diamond sword (and its owner) out of the house. The house was too small for more than one person. "Have a good day," she said flatly, waving goodbye as she rolled her eyes. Suddenly, she made up her mind. She was going to do it! She was going to explore... a cavern. She walked outside, found a little stone, and went back inside. She made her first sword. It was sharp and shiny. Not as good as diamond, but it would have to do. She walked outside boldly, feeling a little nervous. And then she saw what she hoped to see (Or so she convinced herself). A little cave entrance. She walked in silently, her knees shaking as the chill (and fear) hit her. She stepped in. "I'm not af...ff....f...raid of you!" she yelled to the monsters, her voice echoing eerily. She walked in with a determined smirk. This time, she was going to do it! She was going to explore this cave! "YEAH! I vow never to run out of a cavern screaming again!" she yelled, jumping up cheerily. "Wait," she muttered, pausing. "Don't I need torches to explore this cave?"
"OH SNAP. GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" She screamed, running out of the cave. There, behind her, was a creeper. Panting heavily, blushing, and looking somewhat like a fool, she whipped her head around and ran to her home. "That," she whispered, "Was close."

fireheartocean · 2011-09-27 11:22:32

After she had made some torches from the coal on the outside of the cavern, she went back in again. She saw a glow out of the corner of her eye. Whipping around, she saw a path marked with torches and lit up. She decided to follow it. Walking along the path of flickering torchlight, she saw a faint white blob in the background and heard the soft clink of some hard material hitting another hard material. As she walked on and on, the sound got closer and she could make out the blob to be... letters. Finally, the sound was ringing in her ears. She got a little closer and read the name. It read "Rabbit1131". FireOcean quietly walked into the room that the clinking noise came from. There, she saw Rabbit1131 mining away at some redstone with a diamond pick. He was wearing blue jeans and a leather jacket. "Um.. hi." FireOcean sighed, "I was expecting to find a shiny silver creeper with a diamond on its chest, or a golden zombie with a crown on its head. You know, like in the books 'Creeper of the Night' and 'Zombie King'. Instead, I found you. I did nothing in this cavern, got nothing, and wasted my day. So, could you at least tell me what time it is?" Rabbit1131 turned around, placing his diamond pick on the ground and looking at his watch. "About 3 minutes til' sundown," he told FireOcean, putting all the redstone he collected in his bag. "Time to find more redstone!" he said to FireOcean, walking away with his shiny pick and his bag full of redstone.

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