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#1 2011-09-10 13:27:27

-iNetMaster-
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I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

I try drawing my own poekemon, but the third grass evolution just doesn't look right. Don't mind the other ones.
http://js-kit.com/blob/JyKC9sYk9__9ZZNRm8nWde.png
Could someone give me some tips?
I know I suck.

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#2 2011-09-10 13:31:22

08jackt
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

wow  yikes
nice job

looks fine to me ;D
the way it's standing does look a little awkward though. how about you make it face forwards?


http://i39.tinypic.com/jgtswi.png

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#3 2011-09-10 13:32:31

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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

08jackt wrote:

wow  yikes
nice job

looks fine to me ;D
the way it's standing does look a little awkward though. how about you make it face forwards?

That's what i thought, and thanks for the "nice job"  big_smile

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#4 2011-09-10 13:35:14

flamekyle
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

Looks good to me!  smile


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#5 2011-09-10 13:36:08

-iNetMaster-
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

thanks

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#6 2011-09-10 13:58:16

WindowsExplorer
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

-iNetMaster- wrote:

I know I don't suck.

Looks great to me too!

Last edited by WindowsExplorer (2011-09-10 13:58:39)


http://i.imgur.com/H6LLdnK.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/VYuD7BY.png

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#7 2011-09-10 14:54:37

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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

i just think it looks wrong

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#8 2011-09-11 09:05:07

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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

bump

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#9 2011-09-11 09:44:15

Stickman704
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

What's wrong with it?  hmm


Dun dun dun dun dun dun.... dun dun dun dun dun dun...  tongue

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#10 2011-09-11 10:58:06

PW132
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

I think it looks like it was drawn in MS Paint D:

Try drawing it smaller and pixel by pixel.


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#11 2011-09-11 11:14:09

maxskywalker
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Re: I need your help. (wow that came out wrong)

Wow, you're awesome!  Have you considered a career at Gamefreak?
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Try making it lean forward a little, and then make the colors slightly more intricate.  Also angle the head slightly more upward.  Very slightly.

Last edited by maxskywalker (2011-09-11 11:15:06)

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