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Chapter 1:
"Chaos... They've taken over... But it's not done yet... We will fight... Until we die... We must win... or else our race will be gone..."

Danny woke up from a weird dream in his cold, hard bed. Military school was difficult, he knew that since the day he got there. He climbed down from his bunk and woke up his room mate, Anthony. Anthony's eyes blinked open at the second that Danny yelled "Wake up Anthony!"

"What are you doing up Danny?" He said "It's four o clock AM!"

"Sorry, I just had the weirdest dream though."

"What about?"

"It was all dark, and I heard a voice, a voice saying 'Chaos... They've taken over... But it's not done yet... We will fight... Until we die... We must win... or else our race will be gone...' "

"Okay, I'm going back to sleep. Good night."

"No, seriously! I feel like it's important," Danny said "Like I depend on it."

"Just forget it Danny. I have weird dreams like that all the time."

"Okay then, good night."

Danny climbed back into bed and lied down slowly closing his eyes. He probably hadn't slept long because the next thing he knew the general was calling "Line up!!!" in his loud, annoying voice. Night was over, time to wake up.

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"I said Line up!" the general yelled once again.
"Just a month until this is over, then it'll be summer and I can leave." Danny murmured as he quickly ran into place.
The general glared at Danny and yelled “You were late young man!  Now your whole team has to drop and give me twenty! You hear that? Drop and give me twenty!”
“Come on General Plat-“
“I said drop and give me twenty!”
“You want me to do push-ups! It’s the middle of June and we’re in the desert! You want me to do push-ups!”
“DO IT!”
“Or else what?!?!?!”
“You’ll be stuck in your cabin all week!”
“I don’t care! Do anything to make me not have to work with you!”
“2 weeks!”
“Sure, do that!”
“3 weeks!”
“Even better!  I don’t have to work with you until next September!”
“You don’t have a life, do you?!?!?”  The general shouted.
“Oh I have a life; I have more of a life than you do!” Danny brought his fists up to his face.
“Remember me? I’m General Platowski! A little kid like you couldn’t hurt me!”  Laughed the general finally not shouting. 
“Nice to meet you then!” Danny jabbed his fist into the general’s muscular stomach pushing him onto his knees wailing in pain.

“No kid… Can win against me…”

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--ImagineIt

Last edited by ImagineIt (2011-09-11 10:25:32)