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rmnglskr wrote:

pokemongardevoir wrote:

rmnglskr wrote:

Could you rate mine? http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/rmnglskr/1900888

Graphics- 6/10
Programming-  6/10
Plot- 4/10


Overall: -16/30- -3 Stars- -52%-

Your game was actually very good. I liked the initial animation with the text. The graphics were very simple yet you managed to make them enjoyable and interesting with the shading on the other faces of the cubes. The programming was good, but it seemed like it was a beginner's level. There were many glitches, like how you are unable to jump off the elevator, and when you are moving along the ground you are always, ever so slightly changing the Y axis quickly, giving the player a shivering animation. This seemed pretty strange. The plot was ok, and I really liked how you did the lives with pictures instead of variables. Good job!

Remember, even in the best game ever, there's always room for improvement.
Thanks, and scratch on!

Thanks for rating! I will try to fix the glitches, although I have no idea how to fix ROBOcube's "shivering", and why he does that. The elevator thing I think I'll be able to fix for version 1.4, now that I've realized that it needs to get fixed, and I agree with you that the level of difficulty is pretty low. I am not the best at creating levels, but I will try to add harder levels in following versions.

Welcome! And if you need any help with that glitch I can try and figure it out.

Bump

Clank23 wrote:

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i know the ground is bad i am making tiles.

Graphics- 7/10
Programming-  6/10
Plot- 7/10

Overall: -20/30- -4 Stars- -66%-

This is quite good!  Very unique plot! i love it! The box, coin and snail sprites are cute and awesome! The background needs some work. The Ninclanko thing was funny, but maybe you should create your own logo instead of editing Nintendo's. Also, the snail needs to be able to jump higher. I can't get out of that first area. Your art has improved a lot! I find that the snail is much more enjoyable then the clanko adventures minigame. Can't wait to see the finished version!

Last edited by pokemongardevoir (2011-08-30 19:10:28)

Can you check this out: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/cygene/2004759 ? It's not really a game yet, just an engine I'm working on, hoping I could finish it fast enough to become the first true First-person shooter in Scratch. Can you also check out some of my other games, like http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/cygene/1823599 and http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/cygene/1823598 ? Those two games were made a long time ago, when I wasn't much too familiar with Scratch.

Last edited by cygene (2011-08-31 11:27:15)

You should also do some kind of ESRB-like rating system. But, since Scratch does not allow older content, the ratings would only go up to T.
Also, can I help you rate games? Pleeeese  . I really really want to. Sometimes, I just want to stop programming for a bit sometimes.

BTW: Pokegar, I went to your website and I think you should add Today's Gonna be a Great Day, by Bowling for Soup to your playlist 

Last edited by cygene (2011-08-31 11:25:24)

I know these games are very bad...but can you rate them anyway? 

1. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gerbils800/1997240
2. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gerbils800/1990648

pokemongardevoir wrote:

Clank23 wrote:

Can you rate and give ideas of my new Beta for super snail world?

Graphics- 5/10
Programming-  6/10
Plot- 7/10

Overall: -25/30- -4.2 Stars- -81%-

I really like your new one! I like the clouds floating by. I guess you're still working on the tile though. I got stuck and had to restart on the first level. Also, why do both levels start out with the same tunnel? Also, can you get music to play in the background? It also takes a few tries on the trampoline part. I just can't get it high enough! Great job anyway. 

I will add music,but I have not made it die able yet 
Anyway I plan on adding enemies,lava and the tiles in the next version.

cygene wrote:

Thanks for the ratings Pokegar    I wish more people actually helped improved projects with suggestions in comments, not just in forums. The reason why my games are 2-player is because I play with my brother and friends at school (which is just my way of saying I HATE programming AI). It's ok you haven't rated my rendering thing, it's not really much of a game yet. If you look at my signature, I am gonna release the first true first-person shooter made in Scratch on Christmas, based on the rendering engine (supposing I finish it by then). Basically, right now, it's just a world rendered in 3D. You must put it in turbo speed (shift-click green flag) and move using the controls given in project notes. 

I'm also a fan of P&F, even though I'm a little too old for it. It just has great songs and a meaningful lesson : seize the day 

Also, can I pleese pleese help rate games? I know it might not really be useful right now, since there's not that much people asking for ratings, but maybe if more ask for ratings?

BTW: G rating? ESRB (rating for games) goes from Early Childhood (EC), Everyone (E), Everyone 10+ (E10+), Teen (T), and above.

I saw your signature and it looks so cool!

I'm 12 and I watch P&F a lot.

Starting spetember 6th, on tuesdays and thursdays you can take over ratings i i'm not online.

I May include that if I feel it's necessary. I'm not too familiar with age group ratings. I think age is just a number, it's maturity that counts.

NeilWest wrote:

Could you please rate my game: Raw Sushi: Cowboy Style?

Note:

I could only include 2 out of 4 tracks intended in the game because of file limits.

Graphics- 7/10
Programming-  10/10
Plot- 9/10
Music- 8/10

Overall: -34/40- -4.4 Stars- -85%-

Amazing! The graphics are so cute, the plot is unique, the music is catchy, and the programming is excellent! I love the option to chose between arrows and wasd. I also love when people use a sprite rather than a variable for remaining health. There is only one thing I dislike and that's how the change in direction is so sharp. It's hard to change direction and move.

Your game is so far one of the best I've rated! Scratch on!

Last edited by pokemongardevoir (2011-09-01 09:47:23)

gerbils800 wrote:

I know these games are very bad...but can you rate them anyway? 

1. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gerbils800/1997240
2. http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/gerbils800/1990648

Game 1

Graphics- 2/10
Programming-  4/10

Overall: -6/20- -2 Stars- -30%-

I'm not much of a fan of 2p, but this game is ok. It has some minor glitches. I wish you would have done some shading. Try gradient shading, it's the easiest kind. You did pretty good. 

Game 2

Graphics- 1/10
Programming-  6/10
Plot- 3/10

Overall: -10/30- -2 Stars- -33.3%-

This was pretty fun. Lulz, i got 45 on the first shot! It's pretty simple. Try adding more questions and better graphics.

Sorry for not writing a lot.Kinda tired and there wasnt much to say XD
Thanks and scratch on!

pokemongardevoir wrote:

cygene wrote:

Thanks for the ratings Pokegar    I wish more people actually helped improved projects with suggestions in comments, not just in forums. The reason why my games are 2-player is because I play with my brother and friends at school (which is just my way of saying I HATE programming AI). It's ok you haven't rated my rendering thing, it's not really much of a game yet. If you look at my signature, I am gonna release the first true first-person shooter made in Scratch on Christmas, based on the rendering engine (supposing I finish it by then). Basically, right now, it's just a world rendered in 3D. You must put it in turbo speed (shift-click green flag) and move using the controls given in project notes. 

I'm also a fan of P&F, even though I'm a little too old for it. It just has great songs and a meaningful lesson : seize the day 

Also, can I pleese pleese help rate games? I know it might not really be useful right now, since there's not that much people asking for ratings, but maybe if more ask for ratings?

BTW: G rating? ESRB (rating for games) goes from Early Childhood (EC), Everyone (E), Everyone 10+ (E10+), Teen (T), and above.

I saw your signature and it looks so cool!

I'm 12 and I watch P&F a lot.

Starting spetember 6th, on tuesdays and thursdays you can take over ratings i i'm not online.

I May include that if I feel it's necessary. I'm not too familiar with age group ratings. I think age is just a number, it's maturity that counts.

Let me guess, you're also starting school at Sept 6? What grade, judging from your age, I assume Grade 7 or 8, depending if your birthday is at the start or end of the year. I'm a bit older than you, going into Grade 10. Some of my friends say I'm a bit too old for P&F, but I still like it. Speaking of ages "aren't you a bit too young to be a fan of Bowling for Soup". LOL    I like that band too, though 

I'll help you rate games, then, though sometimes, if there's a big test or something, I won't be able to, but I'll try my best 

cygene wrote:

Pokegar, just wondering, what's that "internets" in your sig? I gave you your 17th one, but I don't know what they are. Are they like love-its?

I gave him his 15th. Anyway, idk what it means. Something!