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Pretty good    I like how you don't explain too much, but I'm not particularly fond of adding additional information with "Oh yeah, and" 

Chapter 2:
And

Chapter 3:
I

Chapter 4:
Died

Chapter 5:
.

Chapter 6:
The

Chapter 7:
End

Chapter 8:
.

Epilogue:
There you go, a 8 chapter story!     

Animeboy975 wrote:

2nd chapter (The impact):
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I woke up, just to see the plane is gone. I was in a area with lots of trees, but like every good captian,I MUST GO FORTH! I kept walking hope to find a good area to hang out in and survive. I went out of the area just to find more trees. I'm not finding everything. I see a few animals but they are harmless. I climed up some ledges, just to find the lake.

Woah, nice...

FINALLY THE NEW CHAPTER

Chapter 3:Shelter
I reached the lake, just to find a opened area great for making shelter. I unpacked my survival backpack and found my "How to build a fort" I read and ended making a pretty good fort. It had enough size for a bed and a table. It was around lunchtime, So i went to the lake and grabbed my fishing pole and net (for shellfish) I used the fishing pole and caught a big,juicy salmon. I got the meat out, cleaned it, and found a pot near my campsite. It was on wood, and i brought matches. I put a few matches there, and to cook it. The salmon (strangely) was really good. I also brought a pointy stick for land animals. I found a fluffy white thing about the size for a bed that was really comftreble. And a huge leaf for a blanket. For dinner, i had cod. I had a really good sleep. I see a mountain really far away.... I guess i'll be heading there.

Bump

Chapter 4 coming out tommorow! (Land Animals At Last!)

Chapter 4:Land Animals At Last!
I decided i would go to that huge snowy mountain later.I have more important things on my mind, like not just eating protiens. Like seeing an apple tree to eat apples near. I headed out of my base for a second. I just went out, until i saw a tiny lizard and a huge moose. I threwmy stick at both, getting some meat. I went back to get fruit, but i saw some potatoes in the ground. I dug them up and found a raspberry bush to get berries off of. I headed back to base and cooked the lizard meat. I ate it, and it was suprisingly really good. It tasted like chicken. it was good. I cooked the huge moose for dinner, and it was pretty good. but not amazing like the lizard meat. I'm heading gor the mountain now.