Scratch

Dracos Isle
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Chapter I - All stories have a beginning

   What is happening? Who am I? I have no recollection of a past, my memory is wiped. I have this weird feeling. It's hard to describe. It's as if, I can sense objects around me! What's this? I have this feeling on myself too. It can sense it's round, and there are two of them. I try moving them. The result is spectacular. The feeling changes, and now my vision changes to a dark grey. Apparently, I can move the round objects to change my vision. Interesting!
   I try moving other things. First, I try down below. More complex figures move, and they come in a pair, too. Very confused and frightened, I attempt to move the individual parts of these figures on myself. I wiggle them around. Amazing! I have tinier figures on the end of them! Suddenly, one of the tiny figures pierces the mass of grey. I sense a new feeling on both sides of my round vision figures. My vision moves. Okay, what is happening? I attempt to sense the figure that moved. My vision moves again due to this attempt. This time I didn't panic. Oh, I see. This figure moves my vision around.
   Very carefully and slowly, I move my vision over to the source of the feelings on the sides of my vision figure. This is all too confusing for me to understand. Once my vision moves to the source, I can see something new. A small but long figure, covered in puffy things, is by the mass of dark grey. Connected to the figure are tinier figures. I suddenly get an idea. I think I understand what I'm seeing. I move the tiny figures that created that new feeling earlier, and guess what? The tiny figures that I sense are the same figures as the ones I'm seeing! Fascinating! Each figure I sense have a look. I try sensing new figures. Middle? Nothing. I try my giant vision figure, and I sense a new feeling. It's odd - it's not like the others. It's like something filling two small craters on my vision figure.
   I move the new figure. Suddenly, I sense the sharp feeling again. My vision changes again too. The dark grey has now changed to a combination of the normal dark grey and random patterns of a bright white. Panicking, I flail all my figures. Even though I'm confused and beyond frightened, I discover so any new figures I have. My vision wont stop changing. I sense the dark grey by the craters on my vision figure, which I now know is not just for vision. Help me! Where am I? All of a sudden, the dark grey disappears. The bright white takes over, nearly blinding me. I move my pair of round vision figures and the bright white disappears. Once I'm ready, I move them back. What I see, is the beyond describable.
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Chapter II - The world in a bird's-eye view

   A land of lush green and brown figures with green puffy things on their ends. A bright blue background with fabulous white formations moving above me top off the beautiful scenery. What, is, this? I took a deep breath, my first breath. Then it struck me. What am I? I turned my vision figure over to a mass of shimmering blue matter. It really caught my pair round vision objects. I was hoping I could have a closer look, but couldn't move myself. Destined to check out this mass of blue, I came up with a plan.
   It was risky, but it was necessary. Here I go. I moved my long, back figures upwards. My whole body dropped to the ground, landing in a loud THUD. I sensed something new, but this time it was painful. I felt pain. My round vision objects, which I will name "eyes", started to drip the blue I saw over there. Now that I have the blue where I want it, I can study it. Even though my figures ached, which I will name "body parts", I looked into the blue droplets. Wow, that's amazing!
   I saw a beautiful creature. A long body, four legs, orange and brown feathers, a beak, a lion's tail, four sets of talons, and...what is that? I turned my head around and scoped the area behind me. Nothing. I glanced back over at the blue droplet, which must be, "water". I saw the creature again.
   I repeated the process, then looked down. I saw my back, which was exactly what I saw in the water droplet! Wait, so that must mean I'm a.....Griffin? The thought was very peculiar. One minute I saw nothing, but now I'm a griffin?
   This is so confusing... Now that I now I'm a griffin, who am I? One name came through my mind. It was perfect. A truly beautiful name indeed. I love it. Atlus. My name is Atlus.
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Last edited by TheBlueRocky (2011-08-27 13:01:15)