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Animeboy975 · 2011-08-17 16:39:18

About north carolina. It's called Sweet North Carolina.

Sweet North Carolina:
Every day
I look out the balcony
In our hotel room
In New York

Playing a show.
A tear comes to my eye
Of how great my hometown is.
Everything so nice

And pretty
Life is easy
Unlike here
Where it's too complicated

Chorus:
Sweet North Carolina
Sweet,Sweet North carolina
Repeat both (3x)
Such a nice place
I can't stop dreaming

I want to go
But i don't have much time
I'm not leaving
until a week
I need my love

Right now
I am dreaming
Of the hot sun
The blue sky

Repeat chorus (2x)

Where the skies are blue
Where i can relax
with nobody caring
And talk about things
That i enjoy.

Repeat chorus

Where the skies are blue
And relax
in the hot sun
on a summer day
hotter than ever

Repeat chorus (3x)

(istrumental)
New york is too busy
Sweet North carolina
Sweet,Sweet north carolina
repeat (18x)
Where the skies are blue
(10x)
repeat agian

The_Dancing_Donut · 2011-08-17 17:13:41

That's really good big_smile

gbear605 · 2011-08-17 18:44:25

what the tune?

veggieman001 · 2011-08-17 18:48:28

It seems too generic and needs better word choice, but nice overall.

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-17 18:51:21

gbear605 wrote:
what the tune?

Wild Horses by rolling stones

geohendan · 2011-08-17 18:52:14

And I bet you live in...

DRUMROLL...

Alaska! tongue

Last edited by geohendan (2011-08-17 18:52:28)

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-17 18:53:49

No,NC.
I know it was a joke tongue

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-18 11:00:28

NEW SONG:
Kitten (This is a fast song)

I know your ways
I know your home
I want your wisdom
You are unleashed

You do the things you do best
You keep rushin'
You keep runnin'
You hang out with those boys

Chorus:
Keep on rollin',Kitten
Do your'e thing
You hang out
To find your dream

I saw you in the alley
Hangin out with your friends
Discussing Attack
and dread

You keep rockin'
You keep hangin'
You keep doing the things you do best
If you don't, my temper is gonna be high

(repeat chorus)

Where are you gonna been (3x)
Keep rockin'

You keep hangin'
With the homeboys
and rockin' out
Havin' a great time

(repeat chorus x2)

You are my dream
You keep going
Gettin' famous
Until you are the king of the world

(repeat chorus 3x)

Keep goin' (20x)

The tune: http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch/?v=CjoOdSrq-BY&feature=related

Last edited by Animeboy975 (2011-08-18 11:07:26)

designer45 · 2011-08-18 11:21:41

I like Kitten. Can Frozen Coco use it?

To find out more about Frozen Coco, click the button in my sig.

Last edited by designer45 (2011-08-18 13:41:51)

ProgrammingFreak · 2011-08-18 11:55:23

I liked it, but not very many words. tongue

veggieman001 · 2011-08-18 12:03:28

"Kitten" has an awkward scheme.

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-18 14:14:13

Thanks

designer:Yes, love FC!

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-18 15:02:55

New song: Black Dream.

(Slow part)
The world was a nirvana
the sun was shining
Flowers were blooming
Until
A force was released.
(slow instrumental)
Fast part:
(Istrumental with guitars)
I.AM.BLACK.DREAM.

You see me walk down the street
avoiding my packed punch
He controls war
Life And Death

His black outfit
With the crystal of death on top
He controls weather
Time and space

Chorus:
I AM I AM the black dream
(riff) (3x)

Nobody wants me
Because i killed this nirvana
I will get revenge
(riff)

Finding my dream
Is a nightmare
Shadows appearing all over
and thunder

Repeat chorus (2x)

(long breakdown)
Repeat chorus (5x)

I AM I AM THE BLACK DREAM (20x)

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-19 10:07:01

bump

Trekkie210 · 2011-08-19 10:11:41

At first glance I thought it would be a parody of Sweet Home Alabama. smile

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-19 10:12:54

That's where i got my idea.

designer45 · 2011-08-19 20:36:02

Animeboy975 wrote:
designer:Yes, love FC!

Why thank you. big_smile

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-20 09:23:30

You're welcome.
I'm listening to Girl From A Pawnshop by the Black Crowes.It's a amazing song.

peterkap · 2011-08-20 10:01:54

Animeboy975 wrote:
(istrumental)

instrumental*

Animeboy975 · 2011-08-22 07:32:08

NEW SONG (Take it easy):
(acoustic)
Summer is almost in it's grave
i don't want fall to come
Grades are here

(chorus)
Let's take it easy
Enjoy summer till' it's dead
Tan
Lets keep it summer

I want to have ice cream
Sun
Swimming
Fall isn't like that

Repeat chorus 2x

Relax
in the hot sun
like a chili pepper
Enjoy life
instead of sitting on desks

(repeat chorus 2x)

Take it easy (5x)
Take time (5x)
Repeat above 3x

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