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#1 2011-08-11 16:13:03
Without a Fight(Song I Wrote)
This is a song I wrote, goes to the tune of Raise Your Weapon by Deadmau5. Slow paced song, imagine it to that tune 
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Your time is over, the deed is done.
Watching you lay there, watching you lay there.
It is not over, not without a fight,
The day is not over, not un-til night.
We will not stand here, letting you take o-ver.
Taking over con-trol.
You can take all that we have,
But not without a fight, not without a fight.
You can kick us when we’re down.
If your ego allows so,
Set fire to the ground.
But it will not end here, it will never end.
Take on your actions, re-tal-i-ate.
When we stare into your eyes, we see our fate.
You can gain the upper hand,
But not without a fight, not with-out a fight.
Take out your swords now,
Raise them to the sun.
Reign down your destruction,
For you have not won.
Bring in the troops now.
Bring all that you’ve got.
We will not fallback now,
I guess you have forgot.
We are small in numbers,
Our forces are too light.
You can take us now,
But not without a fight.
Not with-out, a fight.
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All feedback is welcome!
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#2 2011-08-11 17:09:00
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Re: Without a Fight(Song I Wrote)
FRIDGIN' GOOD!!!!111
that is great! 
I'm basically honorary nasty. N-n-n-n-nasty jazz
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#4 2011-08-11 17:23:36
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Re: Without a Fight(Song I Wrote)
Yeah, this would be an awesome hardcore rock song, that is kind of slow, with the guy with a shadowy voice 
(IMO)
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#5 2011-08-11 17:28:05
Re: Without a Fight(Song I Wrote)
AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
Yeah, this would be an awesome hardcore rock song, that is kind of slow, with the guy with a shadowy voice
(IMO)
It's meant to be sung by a girl 
Like the person who sang Raise Your Weapon.
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#6 2011-08-11 17:46:44
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adriangl wrote:
AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
Yeah, this would be an awesome hardcore rock song, that is kind of slow, with the guy with a shadowy voice
(IMO)It's meant to be sung by a girl
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Well, it looks good, and i'd like to see the way it turns out if you'd make it an actual song, so good luck
(never heard 'Raise Your Weapon'. Is it good?
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#7 2011-08-11 18:01:14
Re: Without a Fight(Song I Wrote)
AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
adriangl wrote:
AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
Yeah, this would be an awesome hardcore rock song, that is kind of slow, with the guy with a shadowy voice
(IMO)It's meant to be sung by a girl
*
/_\
\__(˘~°)__/
Well, it looks good, and i'd like to see the way it turns out if you'd make it an actual song, so good luck
(never heard 'Raise Your Weapon'. Is it good?
...It's amazing. Click the link, listen to the entire song. You will be amazed.
And if it gets good reviews from people(other than you ), then yeah, I'll make it a bit longer and produce music for it.
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#8 2011-08-12 14:50:45
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That's pretty good.
"Take out your swords now,
Raise them to the sun.
Reign down your destruction,
For you have not won."
That verse is really good. I think of the song as quite slow until it gets to that verse and then it speeds up.
I really like it, better than a lot of songs I've seen.
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#9 2011-08-12 15:14:09
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Re: Without a Fight(Song I Wrote)
Great lyrics, but I find the song to work better with a faster tune.
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#10 2011-08-12 17:56:53
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werdna123 wrote:
That's pretty good.
"Take out your swords now,
Raise them to the sun.
Reign down your destruction,
For you have not won."
That verse is really good. I think of the song as quite slow until it gets to that verse and then it speeds up.
I really like it, better than a lot of songs I've seen.
Thanks! yeah, that's my favorite verse too
@DarkerWorld Thanks, and yeah, it wasn't so much of the tune from Raise Your Weapon, but more of the singing style.
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