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#1 2011-08-12 04:24:02
- AnimeCreatorArtist
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- Registered: 2010-05-25
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Foreseen Enemy, A(n unfinished)Song I Wrote
The look in your eyes
its you I despise
Not ever would I compremise
Seeing through all your lies
You should know I regret
the day we met
Go and treat me as your pet
Do you honestly think i'd let (LET!) let you........you!
I didn't know you
Didn't know who (WHO!) you were..........YYOOUU WWHHEERREE!
We couldn't figure out the pain
Of our thoughts, knowing they're the same
But I could see
you are my foreseen enemy
Yeah, I'll probably end up redoing the lyrics, but I like the idea of two people who hate eachother without purpose or reason, so here's a song about it 
I'm basically honorary nasty. N-n-n-n-nasty jazz
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#2 2011-08-12 08:08:51
Re: Foreseen Enemy, A(n unfinished)Song I Wrote
That's a good song! Nice concept, lyrics need some smoothing out but really good!
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#3 2011-08-12 08:47:25
- silentslayer7
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- Registered: 2011-06-05
- Posts: 100+
Re: Foreseen Enemy, A(n unfinished)Song I Wrote
Good song! The lyrics do need a little changing, but good 
I used to write songs, but they're awful, so I started writing parodies, which are also bad but I'm going to learn to improve on them.
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