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This is for my summer work. Discus poems and weather or not you liked it.
I  wont tell what book it is about. And do you think will get a decent grade?

A Treasure Race
Jack walks up on a silent sea shore, the water was a glistening blue… He is greeted by a gentle breeze as he enters the land of large pine trees.
The personality of the mutineers telling him to go back… but he has given his word.
A hill in the way they must climb. “Steady steady!” Shouts the captain…
Cick clack a rock falls loose. Holding on they continue forward.
On the hilltop…
                             A skeleton…
                                                     Tales of ghosts stay fresh in their minds…

Staying close like a herd of sheep, they hope they don’t encounter the ghost they don’t seek.
Onward to the place of the treasure…

Running, slipping falling…. They try to keep up.

The treasure is found…
Digging… Digging…
Hauling…
                       Hauling…
                                          Storing…
                                                                 Lifting….
                                                              For nights and nights to come.
One last pound…The treasure stored the race won…  The ship parts the dreaded island
The loot is stolen by Old Long John himself, never to be seen again.

Last edited by recycle49 (2011-08-11 14:31:38)