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#1 2011-08-02 19:33:20

PandaGuy
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How do you guys like this storyline?

Well, anyways, I'm planning a Scratch series, but I don't have the voice actors yet.
If you're interested in auditioning, do so here.
I have the storyline so far and I wanna hear your opinions on it, like "Is it imaginative?".

I'm not gonna explain too much because I don't wanna spoil it,
but anyways here:

A beautiful, young girl (aka Princess Daphne) has no interest in love. The prince, whom loves her dearly, tries his best to "woo" her, but nothing works, eventually leading the temptress adrift in the woods. While trying to find her way back home, she runs across and old cabin, whom has been taken up residence by a witch. The princess steps inside and demands that the witch guide her out of the woods and back home safely. However, the witch does not like Daphne's attitude and her tone of voice. She decides to put a curse on Daphne, transforming her into a shadow. The princess gets mad and uses her new curse-abided powers to destroy the witch and she eventually goes on a killing spree, even killing the prince. Authorities have later captured her and decide to take her hostage in a prison chamber, oblivious to the fact that she's Princess Daphne. However, Daphne manages to escape after only a few days. A man later finds her and captures her in a vase, preserving the princess for several hundred years. When she finally escapes, it is the year 2011 and a teenage girl, Annie, has been chosen to defeat the evil princess, along with her new henchman, Jonathan, a technology wiz and master of video games and computers.

I know kinda random, huh?  tongue
Just share your thoughts on it.


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#2 2011-08-02 19:37:16

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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

It's good. It's imaginative. Just, how does the girl find out she's the chosen one, and why is Jonathan her henchman, should be her partner. Also, what part does Jonathan have in the adventure?


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#3 2011-08-02 19:40:29

PandaGuy
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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

frizzlepuss893 wrote:

It's good. It's imaginative. Just, how does the girl find out she's the chosen one, and why is Jonathan her henchman, should be her partner. Also, what part does Jonathan have in the adventure?

She's chosen by a talking magic crystal ball, who grants her superhero powers.  tongue
Also, Jonathan is one of the main villains. He pretty much helps Daphne (or Shadow) on each of her evil schemes.


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#4 2011-08-02 20:13:10

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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

Bump.  tongue

BTW, here's a project with the characters.


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#5 2011-08-02 20:36:22

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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

The prince leads her into the woods? The princess, as a shadow, can kill?


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#6 2011-08-02 20:38:35

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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

Sunrise-Moon wrote:

The prince leads her into the woods? The princess, as a shadow, can kill?

No, she's annoyed by the prince, so she decides to leave, but gets lost. In her shadow form, she acquires dark powers.

EDIT: I'm sick of always having to edit my posts because of a typo or something I forgot to say. Curse you, edit!

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#7 2011-08-02 21:13:15

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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

I think its creative, but there is not a whole lot of explanation. I think you should include such explanation for things such as

Why is Annie even involved with Daphne?
Where did Johnathon come from?
Why does such a curse placed on Daphne cause her to go on a killing spree?


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#8 2011-08-02 21:39:04

PandaGuy
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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

Nexstudent wrote:

I think its creative, but there is not a whole lot of explanation. I think you should include such explanation for things such as

Why is Annie even involved with Daphne?
Where did Johnathon come from?
Why does such a curse placed on Daphne cause her to go on a killing spree?

Like I said, I didn't want to reveal too much because it would be considered a spoiler. I'll be sure to answer those questions in the series.


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#9 2011-08-02 21:44:57

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Re: How do you guys like this storyline?

Very good!  smile
(sorry, I was looking at your sig  wink  )

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