SCENE 1-
*Main Character is in house and is playing video games on the TV. Channel switches on TV to blinking EMERGENCY ALERT*
*Background on TV shows people running on the streets, cars breaking and craziness. News Reporter is shown on the TV*
News Reporter On TV “It is 2012 and the world is ending! There are Volcano’s exploding!
*Shows video of volcano exploding and people running*
*Switches to close up on main character. He grabs the remote and switches the channel and starts playing video games again*
*TV automatically switches back to the emergency channel a few seconds later*
*News reporter continues talking*
News Reporter on TV “Water is rising 52.634310 percent!”
*Shows video of water rising and a guy on a surfboard on the high water*
Guy on surfboard “This is awesome!”
*Close up on main character again. He switches the channel to video games. Then the TV keeps messing with him and it keeps switching back and he keeps changing the channel back. Finally, the TV wins and it is stuck on the channel*
News reporter- “But worse of all, our towns most valuable item has been stolen!”
“Noooooo! This looks like a job for [insert name here]!”
END OF SCENE 1
So what do you think? Should anything be changed? What should his name be?

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jonzo wrote:
Want me to start working on it?
Yeah that would be awesome. While you do that, I'll work on the second scene. Let's drop out of the competition for the reasons said before and so that we don't have to make the series with everyone else.

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JJROCKER wrote:
jonzo wrote:
Want me to start working on it?
Yeah that would be awesome. While you do that, I'll work on the second scene. Let's drop out of the competition for the reasons said before and so that we don't have to make the series with everyone else.
Yes. Good.
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jonzo wrote:
JJROCKER wrote:
jonzo wrote:
Want me to start working on it?
Yeah that would be awesome. While you do that, I'll work on the second scene. Let's drop out of the competition for the reasons said before and so that we don't have to make the series with everyone else.
Yes. Good.
The only problem is what if the other people in our group use your character or use the idea? I am still dropping out unless the rules change which Mario100 refuses to do.

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SCENE 2-
*Main Character throws game boy and you hear the window break. Main character presses a button on the wall and a door opens and smacks main character against the wall. He comes out and looks at inside the wall where his suit is “supposed to be”. He notices it is not there.*
I am having trouble writing this part. I don't want to make it too long. Where should his suit be?

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jonzo wrote:
JJROCKER wrote:
Or should he always have his suit on and should we take that part out?
Well, I've started making it and he already has his suit on.
ok so I have an idea on how to make this work. Can you post what you have so far?

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SCENE 2-
*Main Character throws game boy and you hear the window break. Main character presses a button on the wall and a door opens and smacks main character against the wall. There is a little empty space there and there is a whole in the floor there. He jumps in and goes down into his secret lair but goes head first into the floor. SMOOTH.*
can you please help me come up with some ideas for this part?

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So you're idea for an apocalyptic movie pops up . . . soon after SpriteMaster's popped up.
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