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#1 2011-07-09 02:57:01

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I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

Ok, I just came up with this. (after thinking about lucid dreaming of coarse)


A kid (12, 13 years old) gets transported into his dreams every night (caused by some incident) He is fully aware of everything around him, and everything is as real as in reality.

He starts off having nightmares, but then learns what is happening, and creates his own world. He does whatever he wants.

But soon (for some reason) his dreams start becoming a reality, and clash with the real-world. He can then no longer control his dreams, and his dreams go crazy, and destroy everything...




Yeah, just an idea....
What do you think?


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#2 2011-07-09 03:02:16

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

Very good.  smile


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#3 2011-07-09 03:13:56

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:

Ok, I just came up with this. (after thinking about lucid dreaming of coarse)


A kid (12, 13 years old) gets transported into his dreams every night (caused by some incident) He is fully aware of everything around him, and everything is as real as in reality.

He starts off having nightmares, but then learns what is happening, and creates his own world. He does whatever he wants.

But soon (for some reason) his dreams start becoming a reality, and clash with the real-world. He can then no longer control his dreams, and his dreams go crazy, and destroy everything...




Yeah, just an idea....
What do you think?

wow,  thats an awesome idea.


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#4 2011-07-09 03:32:55

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

hdarken wrote:

Very good.  smile

Alliance wrote:

wow, thats an awesome idea

Thanks  smile


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#5 2011-07-09 13:09:26

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

That's a great idea 8D Although, the nightmares clashing with reality sounds awfully familiar...

Oh well. That shouldn't stop you from expanding your story  big_smile  Even if it's been done before, it's like how thousands of books out there copy Twilight to satisfy the Twihards  tongue

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#6 2011-07-09 13:16:16

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samurai768 wrote:

That's a great idea 8D Although, the nightmares clashing with reality sounds awfully familiar...

Oh well. That shouldn't stop you from expanding your story  big_smile  Even if it's been done before, it's like how thousands of books out there copy Twilight to satisfy the Twihards  tongue

Thanks  smile 

I want to make sure that it's unlike anything else. That there isn't anything too simular.

I kinda want it to be an anime. A movie, because I wouldn't think it would do well as a series.


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#7 2011-07-09 13:20:36

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I can use the idea.


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#8 2011-07-09 13:48:36

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Luigitailsdoll45 wrote:

I can use the idea.

sad 
please don't use my idea  sad


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#9 2011-07-09 20:33:54

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You should make it into an RPG and post it on the TBG Forums.


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#10 2011-07-09 21:01:57

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Sounds cool. How does the nightmare-clashing-with-reality part work, though? Is it like monstrous creatures, or what?


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#11 2011-07-09 21:58:55

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It sounds very similar to something


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#12 2011-07-09 23:07:27

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jackrulez wrote:

Sounds cool. How does the nightmare-clashing-with-reality part work, though? Is it like monstrous creatures, or what?

I haven't thought that part out yet. I posted this topic the moment I had the idea  hmm


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#13 2011-07-09 23:09:16

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helltank wrote:

You should make it into an RPG and post it on the TBG Forums.

wow, I haven't even thought of that. I might just do that. Thanks for the idea  big_smile


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#14 2011-07-09 23:11:13

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That (in a way) sort of sounds like a person addicted to minecraft, who ends up killing them selves from smacking themselves against a tree to get a cube of wood.


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#15 2011-07-09 23:14:47

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

That's rly good! I had a plot a little simalar: a girl (about 8)  starts going into her dreams-or, nightmares. But she stars having better dreams, and she creates her own dream world. But, she gets in big trouble, and doesn't want to leave her world. Soon, things take a turn for the worse in her world, and she can't find the way out (I wanted to mention that she can leave when she wants, but this stupid iPhone (sry apple  tongue ) won't let me. I made that up years ago

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#16 2011-07-09 23:20:33

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imnotbob wrote:

That's rly good! I had a plot a little simalar: a girl (about 8)  starts going into her dreams-or, nightmares. But she stars having better dreams, and she creates her own dream world. But, she gets in big trouble, and doesn't want to leave her world. Soon, things take a turn for the worse in her world, and she can't find the way out (I wanted to mention that she can leave when she wants, but this stupid iPhone (sry apple  tongue ) won't let me.

That sounds really good too! I encourage you to make it. It doesn't sound a lot like mine anyways, and it's a good idea.


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#17 2011-07-09 23:25:10

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

That's rly good! I had a plot a little simalar: a girl (about 8)  starts going into her dreams-or, nightmares. But she stars having better dreams, and she creates her own dream world. But, she gets in big trouble, and doesn't want to leave her world. Soon, things take a turn for the worse in her world, and she can't find the way out (I wanted to mention that she can leave when she wants, but this stupid iPhone (sry apple  tongue ) won't let me.

That sounds really good too! I encourage you to make it. It doesn't sound a lot like mine anyways, and it's a good idea.

Thnx  smile
I encourage u 2 make urs 2! I think I'm going to start my book off as an epub book. So some nook readers can read it. If it gets good feedback Im going 2 try 2 get a publisher that takes books from kids (maybe I should lie bout my age  wink


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#18 2011-07-09 23:49:10

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Sounds like that Inception movie, but it seems awesome.
Now I want to write a story about that...  sad


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#19 2011-07-09 23:49:34

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It's a lot like Inception...and a little like Tron...so it's some type of mix between those two.


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#20 2011-07-10 00:02:53

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Almost sounds like that "Bedtime Stories" movie... but still good idea.


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#21 2011-07-10 00:07:28

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Yea


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#22 2011-07-10 00:53:10

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

I think I came up with a good name: Dreamality Clash

what do you think?


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#23 2011-07-10 01:00:22

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And the character can't dream them away because they are already real. So he is now in a half-asleep state, where he can dream/imagine small things into reality (swords, armor, ect.). He isn't using his full dream power, because he is not completely asleep. At the end, he is fully asleep, but his mind is awake. He uses his amazing power to finally defeat his nightmares...

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#24 2011-07-10 01:02:28

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Re: I Just Thought of an Awesome Plot For a Story

AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:

Ok, I just came up with this. (after thinking about lucid dreaming of coarse)


A kid (12, 13 years old) gets transported into his dreams every night (caused by some incident) He is fully aware of everything around him, and everything is as real as in reality.

He starts off having nightmares, but then learns what is happening, and creates his own world. He does whatever he wants.

But soon (for some reason) his dreams start becoming a reality, and clash with the real-world. He can then no longer control his dreams, and his dreams go crazy, and destroy everything...





Yeah, just an idea....
What do you think?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lives_ … pher_Chant

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#25 2011-07-10 01:07:19

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AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:

Ok, I just came up with this. (after thinking about lucid dreaming of coarse)


A kid (12, 13 years old) gets transported into his dreams every night (caused by some incident) He is fully aware of everything around him, and everything is as real as in reality.

He starts off having nightmares, but then learns what is happening, and creates his own world. He does whatever he wants.

But soon (for some reason) his dreams start becoming a reality, and clash with the real-world. He can then no longer control his dreams, and his dreams go crazy, and destroy everything...





Yeah, just an idea....
What do you think?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lives_ … pher_Chant

Already been done.

Ok, so I admit it's simular. But this is just an idea I posted as soon as I thought about it. The final product will be very different and unique.


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