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#1 2011-06-29 16:31:25
Critique please?
Hey all.
You might have seen my other post about Yin-Yang, my comic series. I've been drawing a lot of them lately, but I just recently have been trying a slightly more realistic take on their faces using graphite instead of pen. I was wondering if you have any critiques for this particular piece. It's been slightly edited to bring out the highlights, and quite obviously the background is shopped in, but the rest of it's all handiwork. Constructive criticism is GREATLY appreciated! 
Sorry. I feel like I'm spamming this place with my cartoons XD This is the last thing, I promise.
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#2 2011-06-29 16:39:00
- AnimeCreatorArtist
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Re: Critique please?
Really good drawings 
Which one is Yin and which one is Yang?
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#3 2011-06-29 16:46:05
Re: Critique please?
AnimeCreatorArtist wrote:
Really good drawings
Which one is Yin and which one is Yang?
Yang is the one on the left who looks darker, Yin is on the right looking more pleasant.
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#6 2011-06-29 18:50:31
- slapperbob
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Re: Critique please?
Cool! Very detailed. One small thing: Doesn't yang have a devil's tail?
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