Scratch

So it's a nice computerized intro... and then what the hell? (Pardon my language.) A guy starts screaming?!?! These people are nuts.

It's also actually very funny.

Same. How can they call themselves musicians?!?

Alternatives wrote:

They can call themselves musicians, jacky. It is music, even if you don't like it.
It has a nice tune, but isn't fun to listen too, has bad voices(to be fair they are strong) and the song seems to be more rhyme than song, because it doesn't have a chorus 

Through the forest
climbing trees
swinging vines
with the breeze.
Adventuring through a mystic forest,
I'm trying hard to hold on to, these vines of life that break through you.
The bliss of natures kiss saves me from my black abyss.
I taste the salt drip onto my lips,
missing the touch of your finger tips.
Pacing back to and fro I don't know where to go.
I'm so lost.
Fragile like paper, elastic as rubber,
my heart searches for another.

Oxygen in the air breathes into my soul.

Where they fall divides us all,
shows your scares and reads disgrace,
this careless life,
everyday before this day you let the earth fade away.,
now with vines holding tight you finally see the light.
This care this care this care this careless,
life we live we live we live we live

Trying to hold on to these vines that
break through you!
Tangled
thorns piercing your heart.
The pain
has just begun to start.

Okay, first: pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't call me "Jacky", "Jackie", or any variation.
Second: Fine, it's music, and the lyrics are decent. But thanks to their indiscernible screaming, I couldn't even understand them! (The lyrics.)

echs wrote:

The drumming was excellent.
Guitars were good.
Keyboard was good.
Singing was indiscernible.
Title of this topic was No. Just no.

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Alternatives wrote:

They can call themselves musicians, jacky. It is music, even if you don't like it.
It has a nice tune, but isn't fun to listen too, has bad voices(to be fair they are strong) and the song seems to be more rhyme than song, because it doesn't have a chorus 

Through the forest
climbing trees
swinging vines
with the breeze.
Adventuring through a mystic forest,
I'm trying hard to hold on to, these vines of life that break through you.
The bliss of natures kiss saves me from my black abyss.
I taste the salt drip onto my lips,
missing the touch of your finger tips.
Pacing back to and fro I don't know where to go.
I'm so lost.
Fragile like paper, elastic as rubber,
my heart searches for another.

Oxygen in the air breathes into my soul.

Where they fall divides us all,
shows your scares and reads disgrace,
this careless life,
everyday before this day you let the earth fade away.,
now with vines holding tight you finally see the light.
This care this care this care this careless,
life we live we live we live we live

Trying to hold on to these vines that
break through you!
Tangled
thorns piercing your heart.
The pain
has just begun to start.

Well, those aren't the worst lyrics ever, but they are slightly ridicoulous.

Alternatives wrote:

sanddude wrote:

Alternatives wrote:

They can call themselves musicians, jacky. It is music, even if you don't like it.
It has a nice tune, but isn't fun to listen too, has bad voices(to be fair they are strong) and the song seems to be more rhyme than song, because it doesn't have a chorus 

Through the forest
climbing trees
swinging vines
with the breeze.
Adventuring through a mystic forest,
I'm trying hard to hold on to, these vines of life that break through you.
The bliss of natures kiss saves me from my black abyss.
I taste the salt drip onto my lips,
missing the touch of your finger tips.
Pacing back to and fro I don't know where to go.
I'm so lost.
Fragile like paper, elastic as rubber,
my heart searches for another.

Oxygen in the air breathes into my soul.

Where they fall divides us all,
shows your scares and reads disgrace,
this careless life,
everyday before this day you let the earth fade away.,
now with vines holding tight you finally see the light.
This care this care this care this careless,
life we live we live we live we live

Trying to hold on to these vines that
break through you!
Tangled
thorns piercing your heart.
The pain
has just begun to start.

Well, those aren't the worst lyrics ever, but they are slightly ridiculous.

I know, they don't seem to have a chorus... 

Yes, but that's not why they're ridiculous.

Alternatives wrote:

sanddude wrote:

Alternatives wrote:

I know, they don't seem to have a chorus... 

Yes, but that's not why they're ridiculous.

Why then?

Not having traditional song structure doesn't make a song bad. The lyrics just seem very silly, and something you'd expect from a 13 year old boy.

veggieman001 wrote:

sanddude wrote:

Alternatives wrote:

Why then?

Not having traditional song structure doesn't make a song bad. The lyrics just seem very silly, and something you'd expect from a 13 year old boy.

As a 13 year old boy that has written songs, I'm offended.

:0 I thought you were a girl

veggieman001 wrote:

echs wrote:

veggieman001 wrote:

As a 13 year old boy that has written songs, I'm offended.

:0 I thought you were a girl

ummm

he has man in his name if you couldn't already tell

The intro is simply awesome, so is the drumming. But the song seems pretty incoherent, seems like someone just took the electronic intro, the screaming part and the autotuned part and put them together. Lol, electropopcore.