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#1 2011-06-20 20:04:31
Steve
Okay, my last topic got closed due to offtopicness. This time we'll try not to take it off track.
(Clam down, ahahahaha.)
Anyway, yeah.
I heard this story at camp:
There was once a boy. He was asked to name all the counselors, and always added one more: "Steve." When questioned, he explained that Steve had been killed by a bear.
Several days later he was found dead on the sidewalk, of what seemed to be a bear attack. However, on his right arm, the cuts seemed to form a sentence: "I am Steve."
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#3 2011-06-20 20:13:58
- bananaman114
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Re: Steve
kimmy123 wrote:
I drew a picture of steve:
http://i.imgur.com/b8bhS.png
The light red is blood and the red is a scratch.
AAAAAHHHHHHHHh
Scary!
I like it 
the sun still shines
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#4 2011-06-20 20:14:25
#6 2011-06-20 20:20:28
- awesomestickdude
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Re: Steve
It would be scarier if his name wasn't Steve, it's such a calm name.
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#8 2011-06-20 20:21:38
Re: Steve
kimmy123 wrote:
I drew a picture of steve:
http://i.imgur.com/b8bhS.png
The light red is blood and the red is a scratch.
AWESOME!
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#10 2011-06-20 20:38:47
Re: Steve
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/somelia/1874018
Trainer Steve wants to battle!
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#12 2011-06-20 20:45:26
Re: Steve
kimmy123 wrote:
somelia wrote:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/somelia/1874018
Trainer Steve wants to battle!Go, Arceus!
Steve: Go Missingno!
*creepy glitch music*
1 Error.
*creepier music*
[trainer name] has blacked out!
*wakes up in a strange room while the Lavender Town music plays*
*game zooms out*
*reveals you are in a grave in the Pokemon Tower*
*I walk by*
*I fall over*
Somelia has died of sorrow!
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#13 2011-06-20 22:05:26
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#15 2011-06-20 22:18:51
Re: Steve
PW132 wrote:
I could write something way better than this.
hyrgtf
That was better than this, and all I did was slam my face all over my keyboard.
"You will die!" - Ganon
And besides, I didn't write it. I heard it at camp, liked it, so I shared it here. Could you please prevent your opinion for interfering with the enjoyment of others.
Last edited by somelia (2011-06-20 22:20:27)
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#16 2011-06-20 22:30:50
Re: Steve
somelia wrote:
PW132 wrote:
I could write something way better than this.
hyrgtf
That was better than this, and all I did was slam my face all over my keyboard."You will die!" - Ganon
And besides, I didn't write it. I heard it at camp, liked it, so I shared it here. Could you please prevent your opinion for interfering with the enjoyment of others.
Others are having enjoyment? Where?
SCRATCH 2.0 OHHHHH MANNNNNNN
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#18 2011-06-20 22:51:59
- soupoftomato
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Re: Steve
It's just a campfire story, give the girl scouts a break. It was pretty good, they got the twist ending thing right.
And somelia, apparently your life sucks partly due to Scratch, I suggest a break from it. Force yourself not to use it for a while.
I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos
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#19 2011-06-20 22:54:44
Re: Steve
soupoftomato wrote:
It's just a campfire story, give the girl scouts a break. It was pretty good, they got the twist ending thing right.
And somelia, apparently your life sucks partly due to Scratch, I suggest a break from it. Force yourself not to use it for a while.
I'm not a girl scout. xD
The camp was for church, if that's not too much of a religious statement.
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#20 2011-06-20 22:59:17
Re: Steve
awesomestickdude wrote:
It would be scarier if his name wasn't Steve, it's such a calm name.
You mean a clam name? xD
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#21 2011-06-20 23:02:21
Re: Steve
bananaman114 wrote:
I don't need to clam down.
Read it already.
lol typos
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#22 2011-06-21 21:58:11
Re: Steve
clam clam clam clam clam clam....
Anyway. What do you guys think of the story? Could I improve it in any areas?
(No being a troll and saying "It all sucks your writing is terrible.")
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#23 2011-06-21 22:28:14
Re: Steve
somelia wrote:
clam clam clam clam clam clam....
Anyway. What do you guys think of the story? Could I improve it in any areas?
(No being a troll and saying "It all sucks your writing is terrible.")
Maybe you could make it more detailed and more dark 
EDIT: Lol, I went on a video and the recent comments were talking about that one part of the video sounded like "STEVE" 
Last edited by kimmy123 (2011-06-21 22:32:10)
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#24 2011-06-21 22:30:06
- jji7skyline
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Re: Steve
somelia wrote:
clam clam clam clam clam clam....
Anyway. What do you guys think of the story? Could I improve it in any areas?
(No being a troll and saying "It all sucks your writing is terrible.")
At least you admit its just a story...
I reccomend darker and make him do wierd things before he dies and msterious witnesses that die or something after... 
I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!
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#25 2011-06-21 22:37:25
- GravityCatisalie
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Re: Steve
Are you talking about that minecraft character? [/actinglikehedidntreadthepost]
Last edited by GravityCatisalie (2011-06-21 22:37:35)
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