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#51 2011-06-17 01:58:56

silvershine
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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

@pokemongardevoir:

Here is a revised storyline. I will eventually upload this to the website...  tongue

I just thought the story needed a little action, so I added a new scene towards the end. The form it's written in now makes it sound kinda cheesy, but the way I've pictured it, this could have some potencial.

Tell me what you think!

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Leo wakes up, lost, and meets Fi.

Fi takes him to Teller, sends him off to find berry

Leo gets close, Fi senses tree close by. They find berry, and bring it back.

Teller sends Leo off again with Fi to find rose and to bring back petals.

They find them and bring them back to teller.

Teller sends them off with a nut cracked in half (small bowl) one last time to get water from a river.

They find it and bring it back. Teller mixes the items together in the nut for Leo to drink, when suddenly a darkness comes from the forest and snatches up Fi, and flies away.

The player has to chase after the darkness and, if he/she was able to keep up, eventually arrive near a clearing.

Leo manages to push Darkness into sunny clearing and he dies.

Fi is hurt, and Leo runs her back to the tree. She is going to die, but a tear from Leo falls onto her and she wakes up.

 It is time for Leo to go, so he takes a drink from the nut. Suddenly all the butterflies begin to fly in circles around Leo so the forest isn’t visible. The butterflies start to disappear and he is back at home, now remembering his family.

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#52 2011-06-17 10:28:15

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

Looks cool! Maybe I can join!

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#53 2011-06-17 11:47:49

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

owetre18 wrote:

Looks cool! Maybe I can join!

Awesome! What position would you like?

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#54 2011-06-17 18:07:12

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

I fixed the screen shaking and improved the collision detection by adding a bit of leeway.
I should have that grass soon.

And I still don't think I should make Leo. I suck at characters.

EDIT: I made the new version work in the Flash Player.

Last edited by wmays (2011-06-17 18:47:46)


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#55 2011-06-17 19:05:54

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

Code:

Scene 3:
(teller's House)
Leo: Thank you, Teller.
Fi: Bye! See ya later!

Leo and Fi leave tellers house and head back to woods. They find large berry tree.

Fi: You've got to jump! I don't think i can get that berry down!
Leo: (After jumping 2 or 3 times) Hmm... This is hard.
-Player is shown a rock on ground-
Leo: That might just do it!
-Player must throw the rock and hit berry. berry falls and Fi catches it-
Fi: Yay! We got it!
Leo: Let's go show Teller!

Scene 3.3

(Teller's House)
teller: I see you got a berry. Good work. Now i need some rose petals.
Leo: Roses? Peice of cake!
Fi: Be back in a second!

Fi leads Leo to a spot by a brook were a large, old trellis covered with roses stood.
Leo starts to climb, but then falls.
Leo: Ow! I got a thorn stuck in my finger!
Fi: I'll get the rose petals. Go wash it out in she stream so you don't get it infected, ok?
Leo goes to the brook and washes around the wound, trying to remove the thorn.
-The Player must now guide Fi up to the roses while avoiding thorns.-
Fi tugs hard on the rose petals, and finally breaks them off the plant. 
Fi: I've got the petals!

Scene 3.6 
(Teller's House)

Fi darts in quickly, Leo is still catching up.
Fi: I;ve got the petals!
Teller: Great! But... where's leo?
leo enters
Leo: (holding his finger in pain) I'm here.
Teller: What happened? Lets clean that up.
Teller puts an ointment on Leo's cut which makes it magically heal.
Leo: Thanks!
Teller: Now there's only one more thing i need from you.
Teller: You know the brook near the rose trellis? I need a bowl of water from there.
Fi: We were just there!
Leo takes the bowl and they head to the stream. they fill up the nutshell bowl and return.

Scene 3.9
(teller's house)
Fi and leo: Here's the water!
teller starts mixing the ingredients.
Fi: So teller, When will leo- WHAH!!!!!!
A dark shadow came from the forest, snached up Fi, and flew away.

-Player must encounter minigame where they chase after the dark shadow and try to keep up.-

Scene 4
(Once player beats minigame, they arrive in a clearing.)

Leo: Let fi go!
Leo pushes the dark figure into the light of the clearing. the shadow disentagrates.
Leo notices a injured and weary Fi.
Leo: Fi!!!!
Fi: (Moaning) oww.....

Leo pics Fi up and cradles her under his arm. He runs back to the tree.

Leo places Fi down, and knows she is going to die.
Leo: (crying) Fi... please.... please don't die!
A tear falls from leo, and lands on fi. 
Fi: (Awake) Leo! It's time for you to go back to where you came from! 
Fi hands leo the bowl.
Leo: I'll miss you!
Fi: I'll miss you too!

Leo takes a drink of the potion.

Scene 5
Suddenly all the butterflies begin to fly in circles around Leo so the forest isn’t visible. The butterflies start to disappear and he is back at home, now remembering his family.



The End

Finished! What a wonderful plot!
I added some more dialog and minigames. Hope you find it interesting!


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#56 2011-06-17 22:59:49

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

I could be the animator...  smile

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#57 2011-06-17 23:03:19

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

gerbils800 wrote:

I could be the animator...  smile

big_smile  Thanks! We are just about to the point where you can start! I'll get back to you soon! Do you make your own graphics or do you need us to get those?

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#58 2011-06-17 23:07:30

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

I could be the animator...  smile

big_smile  Thanks! We are just about to the point where you can start! I'll get back to you soon! Do you make your own graphics or do you need us to get those?

Could you get the graphics?  smile

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#59 2011-06-18 01:03:38

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

I could be the animator...  smile

big_smile  Thanks! We are just about to the point where you can start! I'll get back to you soon! Do you make your own graphics or do you need us to get those?

Could you get the graphics?  smile

Yes, I will do my best.  tongue

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#60 2011-06-18 08:12:13

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

i still don't get how some people get such good graphics.


http://scratch.mit.edu/static/projects/chipguy/2919121_sm.png by yours truly  big_smile

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#61 2011-06-18 09:23:41

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

chipguy wrote:

i still don't get how some people get such good graphics.

It takes practice, practice, practice. Pretty much everything does.


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#62 2011-06-18 11:43:19

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

My sister might voice act.
Her username is Lavender8. She wants to voice for Fi.

Last edited by pokemongardevoir (2011-06-18 11:45:30)


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#63 2011-06-18 13:52:15

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

pokemongardevoir wrote:

My sister might voice act.
Her username is Lavender8. She wants to voice for Fi.

No way, my sister does to! She's sweetdog. I'll hold auditions for both of them and everyone in this collab can vote on who did best. I'll post an audition project soon.

Last edited by silvershine (2011-06-18 13:52:39)

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#64 2011-06-18 15:44:35

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:


big_smile  Thanks! We are just about to the point where you can start! I'll get back to you soon! Do you make your own graphics or do you need us to get those?

Could you get the graphics?  smile

Yes, I will do my best.  tongue

But I can do graphics if you want me too  smile

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#65 2011-06-18 15:57:43

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

Could you get the graphics?  smile

Yes, I will do my best.  tongue

But I can do graphics if you want me too  smile

I put up a post in the request area to see if anyone wants to do those, but if you think you can do the graphics you can start! I'll keep the request up just in case.

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#66 2011-06-18 15:58:48

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:

Yes, I will do my best.  tongue

But I can do graphics if you want me too  smile

I put up a post in the request area to see if anyone wants to do those, but if you think you can do the graphics you can start! I'll keep the request up just in case.

Ok I'm just trying to make it without the final graphics right now...

But I think other people should make the graphics.  tongue

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#67 2011-06-18 16:14:51

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:


But I can do graphics if you want me too  smile

I put up a post in the request area to see if anyone wants to do those, but if you think you can do the graphics you can start! I'll keep the request up just in case.

Ok I'm just trying to make it without the final graphics right now...

But I think other people should make the graphics.  tongue

OK. If you look at the stage program in the latest version, you will see framework for the animation. (The "broadcast opening animation and wait" script). All you have to do is make scripts that receive those. Make sense?

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#68 2011-06-18 16:26:35

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:


I put up a post in the request area to see if anyone wants to do those, but if you think you can do the graphics you can start! I'll keep the request up just in case.

Ok I'm just trying to make it without the final graphics right now...

But I think other people should make the graphics.  tongue

OK. If you look at the stage program in the latest version, you will see framework for the animation. (The "broadcast opening animation and wait" script). All you have to do is make scripts that receive those. Make sense?

Yeah...where's the latest version?

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#69 2011-06-18 16:48:25

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

pokemongardevoir wrote:

My sister might voice act.
Her username is Lavender8. She wants to voice for Fi.

No way, my sister does to! She's sweetdog. I'll hold auditions for both of them and everyone in this collab can vote on who did best. I'll post an audition project soon.

Ok!
And by the way, i started doing some spriting for Leo. I recolored some Pokemon Ranger NPC sprites, and i think it looks pretty good!


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#70 2011-06-18 16:51:48

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

pokemongardevoir wrote:

silvershine wrote:

pokemongardevoir wrote:

My sister might voice act.
Her username is Lavender8. She wants to voice for Fi.

No way, my sister does to! She's sweetdog. I'll hold auditions for both of them and everyone in this collab can vote on who did best. I'll post an audition project soon.

Ok!
And by the way, i started doing some spriting for Leo. I recolored some Pokemon Ranger NPC sprites, and i think it looks pretty good!

Awesome! Could you upload them?

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#71 2011-06-18 21:16:39

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

Awesome! Could you upload them?

Yep! I'll make some Fi sprites then upload them together in a project.


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#72 2011-06-18 22:57:26

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:


Ok I'm just trying to make it without the final graphics right now...

But I think other people should make the graphics.  tongue

OK. If you look at the stage program in the latest version, you will see framework for the animation. (The "broadcast opening animation and wait" script). All you have to do is make scripts that receive those. Make sense?

Yeah...where's the latest version?

Here it is!

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#73 2011-06-19 09:42:00

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

silvershine wrote:

gerbils800 wrote:

silvershine wrote:


OK. If you look at the stage program in the latest version, you will see framework for the animation. (The "broadcast opening animation and wait" script). All you have to do is make scripts that receive those. Make sense?

Yeah...where's the latest version?

Here it is!

Thanks!  smile

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#74 2011-06-19 11:30:47

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/pokemongardevoir/1870782


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#75 2011-06-20 12:58:21

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Re: Collab project: Butterfly Tree

Maybe I can program? (I'm not a new scratcher just using a new account.) I consider myself pretty good with scratch.

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