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#1 2011-06-18 13:17:10
I write storylines and stuff...
I have started to write stuff, Idk why, but I like to write. I have posted this elsewhere.
Darkness, I'm bleeding horribly, my team is being shot down. Things are exploding everywhere. I can barely breathe. I need help. Somebody help me!
Wait; let me start at the beginning. I am C-124, or, that's my code name at least. I am captain of the 124 team of Earth's Space Defense System (ESDS). We basically save Earth from other worlds plotting to destroy it. We go to war; sometimes they last for years, other times, seconds. Well, I guess you can't call something that lasts for 3 seconds a war, but you know what I mean. Right now it's year 5021, hour 15(3 o'clock PM), minute 23. I am getting my armor on. I have a jetpack, an airlock helmet, and a bio-metal suit.
Bio-metal is a material found on Planet X in year 3496. They were mining out Planet X (a.k.a, second earth), and broke the drill on some shiny, gray rock. They then mined it out (by picking the pieces up with a space crane) and then made armor out of it, after they figured out how to melt it and mold it. It is stronger than diamond, a long-lost material that was fully mined out of Earth by year 2597. It cannot be melted or pierced by plasma, or anything weaker. The only known way to hurt someone in Bio-metal armor, it to find on opening or imperfection, and shoot it. That will cause the metal to explode, like a droid ship after being shot with a high-power plasma cannon.
Okay, enough about this bio-metal, its history is very dull, don't you think? The only reason you can read this, is because I am using a time machine. We have perfected it with items, but not people. The last person we sent through it, we still have no clue where he is. He started yelling, and then exploded. We sent him to the year 1945, so if you see him, say hi! Just kidding, no way he could have survived that! They thing totally ripped him apart!
There you go, that's it. I will type more time to time. I have updated it. I checked it for grammer.
Last edited by owetre18 (2011-06-24 15:26:30)
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#3 2011-06-18 13:31:56
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Re: I write storylines and stuff...
owetre18 wrote:
I have started to write stuff, Idk why, but I like to write. I have posted this elsewhere.
Darkness, I'm bleeding horribly, my team is being shot down. Things are exploding everywhere. I can barely breathe. I need help. Sombody help me!
Wait, let me start from the beginning. I am C-124, or, that's my code name at least. I am captain of the 124 team of Earth's Space Defence System (ESDS). We basicly save Earth from other worlds plotting to destroy it. We go to war, somtimes they last for years, other times, seconds. Well, I guess you can't call somthing that lasts for 3 seconds a war, but you know what I mean. Right now it's the year 5021, hour 15(3 o'clock PM), minute 23. I am getting my armor on. I have a jetpack, an airlock helmet, and a bio-metal suit.
Bio-metal is a material found on Planet X in year 3496. They were mining out Planet X (a.k.a, second earth), and broke the drill on some shiny, gray rock. They then mined it out (by picking the pieces up with a space crane) and then made armor out of it, after they figured out how to melt it and mold it. It is stronger than diamond, a long-lost material that was fully mined out of Earth by year 2597. It cannot be melted or pierced by plasma, or anything weaker. The only known way to hurt somone in Bio-metal armor, it to find on opening or imperfecton, and shoot it. That will cause the metal to explode, like a droid ship after being shot with a high-power plasma cannon.
Okay, enough about this bio-metal, its history is very dull, don't you think? The only reason you can read this, is because I am using a time machine. We have perfected it with items, but not people. The last person we sent through it, we still have no clue where he is. He started yelling, then exploded. We sent him to the year 1945, so if you see him, say hi! Just kidding, no way he could have survived that! They thing totally ripped him apart!There you go, that's it. I will type more time to time.
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#5 2011-06-18 13:34:13
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Re: I write storylines and stuff...
Vurb wrote:
You missed like ten million other grammar mistakes, but yeah, yeah.
Honestly, I disregard most grammatical mistakes if it's First-Person due to the more human nature of making a few. More believable in the long run.
I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos
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#6 2011-06-18 13:35:54
Re: I write storylines and stuff...
soupoftomato wrote:
Vurb wrote:
You missed like ten million other grammar mistakes, but yeah, yeah.
Honestly, I disregard most grammatical mistakes if it's First-Person due to the more human nature of making a few. More believable in the long run.
I wrote it in 12 minutes, it's not like I checked for grammer mistakes. I will put in in word and use an auto-check, than post the new one.
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#7 2011-06-21 21:36:59
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#8 2011-06-21 22:29:54
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You didn't even edit it? Hmm.
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#9 2011-06-23 18:41:01
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#11 2011-06-23 20:44:48
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Its cool
Yeah, I'm mostly inactive. I check in once in a while though. If you want to contact me, I have a contact form at my website, http://escratch.org
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#12 2011-06-24 15:26:08
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