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#1 2011-06-05 23:34:11
- Scratchthatguys
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- Registered: 2010-07-16
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Falling Stars Book 1: The Descent
Chapter 1
I'm falling towards the Earth at the speed of light, burning hot, I'm like a shooting star. I burst through the atmosphere and see a flash of bright light.
I wake up in bed as lightning illuminates the sky. I flip on the weather and, like usual, there is a meteor shower today.
I was born around 3:00 PM 13 years ago when 3 bright meteors streaked across the sky. Before the meteors flew above the hospital, the doctors said I wouldn't make it.
A window was open at the time, and a trickle of light from the meteors came into my room, landing right on me. I stopped crying, my hair turned red, and I opened eyes.
Today is my 13th birthday, and it's May Day, the same day my mother and father got married. They were married 3 years before I was born. Every year, one more meteor is in the sky. This time, it's the 16th meteor that is strange- it doesn't go straight. It falls.
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#2 2011-06-05 23:53:32
- scratch_yoshi
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- Registered: 2009-06-12
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Re: Falling Stars Book 1: The Descent
Wow- this has some potential! I wonder about this 16th meteor 
Retired from Scratch, but just the language itself. Not the forums.
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#3 2011-06-05 23:54:54
Re: Falling Stars Book 1: The Descent
Scratchthatguys wrote:
Chapter 1
I'm falling towards the Earth at the speed of light, burning hot, I'm like a shooting star. I burst through the atmosphere and see a flash of bright light.
I wake up in bed as lightning illuminates the sky. I flip on the weather and, like usual, there is a meteor shower today.
I was born around 3:00 PM 13 years ago when 3 bright meteors streaked across the sky. Before the meteors flew above the hospital, the doctors said I wouldn't make it.
A window was open at the time, and a trickle of light from the meteors came into my room, landing right on me. I stopped crying, my hair turned red, and I opened eyes.
Today is my 13th birthday, and it's May Day, the same day my mother and father got married. They were married 3 years before I was born. Every year, one more meteor is in the sky. This time, it's the 16th meteor that is strange- it doesn't go straight. It falls.
This is really good writing. Nice Job!
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#4 2011-06-05 23:56:25
#6 2011-06-06 00:25:31
- Ace-Of-Hearts
- Scratcher
- Registered: 2010-05-03
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Falling Stars Book 1: The Descent
I'll go tell the older members to come back to storynetwork to see it.
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