somelia wrote:
Wickimen wrote:
somelia wrote:
How about Bulbasaur? And Unown? And MISSINGNO?!
And my Penname is "Chelsea Red."
Look at the last name. Then think about the original video games.Oh yeah, Bulbasaur!
Oh, and Pokemon Red. That was easy.
So can we see it please??I need something to read because I finished my library books XD
Hold on...I need to finish these chapters...OH DARN IT.
I think I'll just post the first chapter. Dx
I'll write the rest later.
Are you doing this to keep us all in suspense now? XD
But fine, fine, fine. That's okay; I'm happy with it... *sobs in the corner* juuuuust kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii[letters removed for space]dddddddddding.
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4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
Actually length can be important, such as you don't want a book to be to long as the readers will start to lose interest. But if it's too short you can't convey as much.
For example, imagine if Harry potter was like this?
There was an unusual kid with glasses named Harry. A half giant told him he was a wizard. He went to a special school. There was an evil wizard named voldemort. Harry killed him. The end.
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Necromaster wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
Actually length can be important, such as you don't want a book to be to long as the readers will start to lose interest. But if it's too short you can't convey as much.
For example, imagine if Harry potter was like this?
There was an unusual kid with glasses named Harry. A half giant told him he was a wizard. He went to a special school. There was an evil wizard named voldemort. Harry killed him. The end.
ok it's obviously important to you
I honestly dont care
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jfmlove6 wrote:
I keep forgeting I can't cuss on here...
come to the other scratch
we have cookies
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veggieman001 wrote:
jfmlove6 wrote:
I keep forgeting I can't cuss on here...
come to the other scratch
we have cookies
Tell me more
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brettman98 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
jfmlove6 wrote:
I keep forgeting I can't cuss on here...
come to the other scratch
we have cookies
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Tell me more
um i can't at the risk of being banned
formspring scratchysos
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4Infinity wrote:
jfmlove6 wrote:
You were banned? Was it for that LT stuff?
I keep forgeting I can't cuss on here...are you talking to me
he wasn't unless you're somelia
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veggieman001 wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
jfmlove6 wrote:
You were banned? Was it for that LT stuff?
I keep forgeting I can't cuss on here...are you talking to me
he wasn't unless you're somelia
just making sure
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Necromaster wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
Actually length can be important, such as you don't want a book to be to long as the readers will start to lose interest. But if it's too short you can't convey as much.
For example, imagine if Harry potter was like this?
There was an unusual kid with glasses named Harry. A half giant told him he was a wizard. He went to a special school. There was an evil wizard named voldemort. Harry killed him. The end.
Or even worse: "A wizard named Harry killed another wizard named Voldemort. Now discuss morals and ethics, kids."
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Wickimen wrote:
Necromaster wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
Actually length can be important, such as you don't want a book to be to long as the readers will start to lose interest. But if it's too short you can't convey as much.
For example, imagine if Harry potter was like this?
There was an unusual kid with glasses named Harry. A half giant told him he was a wizard. He went to a special school. There was an evil wizard named voldemort. Harry killed him. The end.Or even worse: "A wizard named Harry killed another wizard named Voldemort. Now discuss morals and ethics, kids."
O_O
I think I'd throw up.
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But I will post the introduction on a PDF file and add a chapter every day.
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somelia wrote:
Wickimen wrote:
Necromaster wrote:
Actually length can be important, such as you don't want a book to be to long as the readers will start to lose interest. But if it's too short you can't convey as much.
For example, imagine if Harry potter was like this?
There was an unusual kid with glasses named Harry. A half giant told him he was a wizard. He went to a special school. There was an evil wizard named voldemort. Harry killed him. The end.Or even worse: "A wizard named Harry killed another wizard named Voldemort. Now discuss morals and ethics, kids."
O_O
I think I'd throw up.
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But I will post the introduction on a PDF file and add a chapter every day.![]()
awesome
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Length is important, but not crucial.
There was this kid in my class, he wrote a really long story, and I wrote a 3 pager. We entered it in a local competition. I got first place and he didn't even get consolation. He whined about it and pretty much scorned me, saying things like favoritism.
It didn't end happily, but that's how it went.
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4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
You sound sort of like 12three, are you guys related?

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Andres-Vander wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
You sound sort of like 12three, are you guys related?
Wait, 12three...is he unbanned yet?
If not, I have my own suspicions...
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somelia wrote:
Andres-Vander wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
You sound sort of like 12three, are you guys related?
Wait, 12three...is he unbanned yet?
If not, I have my own suspicions...
Please keep this on-topic. Speculating about account identities is not going to give you the feedback you are looking for.
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Paddle2See wrote:
somelia wrote:
Andres-Vander wrote:
You sound sort of like 12three, are you guys related?Wait, 12three...is he unbanned yet?
If not, I have my own suspicions...Please keep this on-topic. Speculating about account identities is not going to give you the feedback you are looking for.
Thanks for the warning.
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Andres-Vander wrote:
4Infinity wrote:
the creepy pasta wasnt even creepy. but length doesnt matter or anything; a two sentence story by me would be better than a novel by my brother.
You sound sort of like 12three, are you guys related?
i know 12three from school and he filled me in and whatnot
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