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somelia · 2011-05-31 19:48:19

Well, um, starting December 2010 I'd been obsessed with Drawn to Life. It sort of faded away as my "boyfriend" led me back into the Poketrap.

But my best friend Turtleeggonstick (the one I keep fighting with, tongue ) is sort of leading me back into the Drawn to Life area. And the Scratch Community is sort of driving me away from my love of...*sniff*...Lavender Town. OK, I ADMIT IT, I DIDN'T HATE IT AFTER ALL.

Now that the internal battery on Red has finally run out, I can't play anymore (I never get too far in one day.) So I get bored too easily, and I popped a random game card into my DS, and it turned out to be Drawn to Life - a game card I haven't touched since February.

I immediately noticed something...different about my character. She was frowning, something I hadn't ever seen on her before. And there seemed to be blood at the corners of her mouth.

Frightened, I shut the game off. When I went to put Super Scribblenauts into the DS, I couldn't find it anywhere. Indeed, I couldn't find anymore games. And I was kind of banned on Scratch, so my only option was to play Drawn to Life.

When I started it up and chose to play with my character, she was even more angry. This time her nose was bleeding as well. When I went into the game, I was faced with a black screen.

In red text, it said "You neglected me. You monster."

I was scared.

The text changed. "And you will pay."

Mari appeared onscreen, and my character started advancing toward her. "DON'T TOUCH HER!" I screamed. My character looked surprised. "Okay, I'll find someone else to murder."

It is now a week later, and I still am hiding in a corner, wondering when the end would come.

---THE END---

How was THAT for a creepypasta?

TheGameMaster1231 · 2011-05-31 19:50:44

somelia wrote:
How was THAT for a creepypasta?

Better.

echs · 2011-05-31 19:52:32

Okay, I guess, but it trends in the same direction as your other ones.

somelia · 2011-05-31 19:54:07

echs wrote:
Okay, I guess, but it trends in the same direction as your other ones.

Yeah, with me being dead and all that. I think it could be the fact that almost all of my creepypastas are based on nightmares. xD

brettman98 · 2011-05-31 19:54:27

Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?
It gets pretty predictable actually smile

somelia · 2011-05-31 19:56:11

brettman98 wrote:
Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?
It gets pretty predictable actually

What's wrong with haunted video games?

I write about what I'm interested in.

Read the post above you...

kimmy123 · 2011-05-31 19:56:48

brettman98 wrote:
Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?

Maybe one about a scary event that happened in your life big_smile

somelia · 2011-05-31 19:57:29

kimmy123 wrote:
brettman98 wrote:
Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?
Maybe one about a scary event that happened in your life

I could write about that crazy near-death experience where I fell into the creek...that was...kind of creepy...

brettman98 · 2011-05-31 19:58:58

kimmy123 wrote:
brettman98 wrote:
Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?
Maybe one about a scary event that happened in your life

One time I had to sit through writing class...it was horrible.

brettman98 · 2011-05-31 20:00:55

somelia wrote:
brettman98 wrote:
Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?
It gets pretty predictable actually
What's wrong with haunted video games?

I write about what I'm interested in.

Read the post above you...

I don't find haunted videogames creepy.
You asked if that was creepy.
I just don't find it that frightening...

somelia · 2011-05-31 20:02:55

brettman98 wrote:
somelia wrote:
brettman98 wrote:
Maybe you could make a creepypasta that's not haunted videogames?
It gets pretty predictable actually
What's wrong with haunted video games?

I write about what I'm interested in.

Read the post above you...
I don't find haunted videogames creepy.
You asked if that was creepy.
I just don't find it that frightening...

Just because you don't find things creepy doesn't mean other people won't, if that makes sense. Or did I already say that?

And to answer your sig, yes. Just kidding.

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brettman98 · 2011-05-31 20:04:36

somelia wrote:
brettman98 wrote:
somelia wrote:

What's wrong with haunted video games?

I write about what I'm interested in.

Read the post above you...
I don't find haunted videogames creepy.
You asked if that was creepy.
I just don't find it that frightening...
Just because you don't find things creepy doesn't mean other people won't, if that makes sense. Or did I already say that?

And to answer your sig, yes. Just kidding.

Im not saying others won't find it creepy I am saying I don't find it creepy wink

And if you are just kidding, why say it? Are you trying to make me feel bad about myself? sad

somelia · 2011-05-31 20:28:13

brettman98 wrote:
somelia wrote:
brettman98 wrote:

I don't find haunted videogames creepy.
You asked if that was creepy.
I just don't find it that frightening...
Just because you don't find things creepy doesn't mean other people won't, if that makes sense. Or did I already say that?

And to answer your sig, yes. Just kidding.
Im not saying others won't find it creepy I am saying I don't find it creepy

And if you are just kidding, why say it? Are you trying to make me feel bad about myself?

Sorry. smile

What do you want me to write about? I have writer's block (for once.)

jfmlove6 · 2011-05-31 21:27:55

NO PLEASE! No more creepypastas!!!!

brettman98 · 2011-05-31 21:28:30

somelia wrote:
brettman98 wrote:
somelia wrote:

Just because you don't find things creepy doesn't mean other people won't, if that makes sense. Or did I already say that?

And to answer your sig, yes. Just kidding.
Im not saying others won't find it creepy I am saying I don't find it creepy

And if you are just kidding, why say it? Are you trying to make me feel bad about myself?
Sorry.

What do you want me to write about? I have writer's block (for once.)

You can honestly write about anything you want, and my votes not going to change your mind tongue

You could try, idk, hauntings? ghosts? maybe amp up the creepiness on your scary electronics? lol

veggieman001 · 2011-05-31 21:29:14

you should make longer ones and stuff

if you make any more at all

soupoftomato · 2011-05-31 21:39:05

Twist endings.

It's the only thing that really is frightening.
Like maybe, you're watching you're character say, "I'll go murder someone else." and then you look beside you and a guy with a creepy grin is controlling him on his DS. End there.

somelia · 2011-05-31 22:10:13

soupoftomato wrote:
Twist endings.

It's the only thing that really is frightening.
Like maybe, you're watching you're character say, "I'll go murder someone else." and then you look beside you and a guy with a creepy grin is controlling him on his DS. End there.

...HER. roll Did you read ANYTHING except the ending?

soupoftomato · 2011-05-31 22:14:02

I made an amazing creepypasta (farce):
All right, maybe playing Super Smash Bros. everyday of my childhood was a little creepy. But I miss that game, and one day i made the mistake of missing it enough to bring it back out. I blew the dust off the cartridge and put it in the N64. It powered on and chose to play as Samus.
As I fought with the other three computers (LInk, Yoshi, and Pikachu), I noticed I could almost see through Samus' helmet. Wait, I could see through it. And there was . . . a . . . monkey.
It stared at me with it's cold blood thirsty eyes, then it howled and I shut off the game. I have not touched the cartridge after that. I've been to scared of a virtual monkey that I dare not leave my closet since.

You know you loved it.

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veggieman001 · 2011-05-31 22:15:56

soupoftomato wrote:
do maybe

somelia · 2011-05-31 22:19:03

soupoftomato wrote:
I made an amazing creepypasta (farce):
All right, maybe playing Super Smash Bros. everyday of my childhood was a little creepy. But I miss that game, and one day i made the mistake of missing it enough to bring it back out. I blew the dust off the cartridge and put it in the N64. It powered on and chose to play as Samus.
As I fought with the other three computers (LInk, Yoshi, and Pikachu), I noticed I could almost see through Samus' helmet. Wait, I could see through it. And there was . . . a . . . monkey.
It stared at me with it's cold blood thirsty eyes, then it howled and I shut off the game. I have not touched the cartridge after that. I've been to scared of a virtual monkey that I dare not leave my closet since.

You know you loved it.

...Are you making fun of me or do you seriously think that's awesome? I can't tell. hmm

soupoftomato · 2011-05-31 22:23:08

somelia wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
I made an amazing creepypasta (farce):
All right, maybe playing Super Smash Bros. everyday of my childhood was a little creepy. But I miss that game, and one day i made the mistake of missing it enough to bring it back out. I blew the dust off the cartridge and put it in the N64. It powered on and chose to play as Samus.
As I fought with the other three computers (LInk, Yoshi, and Pikachu), I noticed I could almost see through Samus' helmet. Wait, I could see through it. And there was . . . a . . . monkey.
It stared at me with it's cold blood thirsty eyes, then it howled and I shut off the game. I have not touched the cartridge after that. I've been to scared of a virtual monkey that I dare not leave my closet since.

You know you loved it.
...Are you making fun of me or do you seriously think that's awesome? I can't tell.

It's farce.

I'm making fun of creepypasta in general. Yours can be pretty good with some improvement though.

Here's a real creepypasta for ya: The first 3 results for "monkey trollface" (to put with my beloved story) were trollfaces in a Samus helmet. COINCIDENCE? I THINK NOT! tongue

somelia · 2011-06-01 16:13:38

soupoftomato wrote:
somelia wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
I made an amazing creepypasta (farce):
All right, maybe playing Super Smash Bros. everyday of my childhood was a little creepy. But I miss that game, and one day i made the mistake of missing it enough to bring it back out. I blew the dust off the cartridge and put it in the N64. It powered on and chose to play as Samus.
As I fought with the other three computers (LInk, Yoshi, and Pikachu), I noticed I could almost see through Samus' helmet. Wait, I could see through it. And there was . . . a . . . monkey.
It stared at me with it's cold blood thirsty eyes, then it howled and I shut off the game. I have not touched the cartridge after that. I've been to scared of a virtual monkey that I dare not leave my closet since.

You know you loved it.
...Are you making fun of me or do you seriously think that's awesome? I can't tell.
It's farce.

I'm making fun of creepypasta in general. Yours can be pretty good with some improvement though.

Here's a real creepypasta for ya: The first 3 results for "monkey trollface" (to put with my beloved story) were trollfaces in a Samus helmet. COINCIDENCE? I THINK NOT!

Cool story bro.

Sorry, I just couldn't resist. xD

Here's a real-life creepypasta (don't read if you have nightmares easily.)

Last night, I was using my computer. I was sure there was someone behind me. Whenever I looked behind myself, no one was there. But once when it happened, I saw the top of their head sticking out from behind the couch. I assumed it was just my over-active imagination and went back to whatever I was doing. Then, I was SURE someone was staring at me...just watching. I caught a reflection in my shiny computer monitor. The person ducked down behind the couch. I was SURE I saw him...

When my mom sent me to bed, I couldn't sleep at all.

I was sure I heard human laughter...

bananaman114 · 2011-06-01 18:08:15

It was good, but not unique.

Maybe do something like The Ring (DONT GO WANT WATCH IT YOUNGINS) where something actually COMES OUT of the cartridge?

^^^ above one is creepy.

kimmy123 · 2011-06-01 18:10:49

bananaman114 wrote:
It was good, but not unique.

Maybe do something like The Ring (DONT GO WANT WATCH IT YOUNGINS) where something actually COMES OUT of the cartridge?

^^^ above one is creepy.

Like a big ball of black goo that drips out and then forms itself into the murderer?

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