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waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 16:40:21

We were driving into Boston last night, at 5:59PM, and we saw the city shrouded in dense, black fog. yikes

BTW, there were 2 earthquakes and a volcanic eruption yesterday. yikes

THE STORY:

http://kleimo.com/random/name.cfm says Marvin, so...

One day, Marvin was driving to Boston. Little did he know that his day trip was about to take a turn for the worst. As he approached Boston, he noticed something unusual. He couldn't see a single building. It took him a couple of seconds to notice the immense patch of dense, jet black fog. Just then, his car entered Boston. It was too late. He felt a choking sensation as he was going under the Ted Williams tunnel. So did his parents. Suddenly, the car stopped. Marvin looked in the front seat, and, sure enough, his parents had fallen asleep. The clock was at 5:55. Quickly, Marvin turned off the car and jumped out. All of the traffic in the tunnel had come to a standstill. Boston had become a silent, desolate wasteland. So, Marvin opened the emergency door, heart throbbing. He went up the stairs and emerged on a street. He couldn't see the name, due to the fog. Just then, a hand grabbed his shoulder.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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spongebob123 · 2011-05-22 16:41:05

creepy much?

12three · 2011-05-22 16:42:03

cool

echs · 2011-05-22 16:42:55

Coincidences. :O

Wait, you live in Massachusetts?

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 16:43:46

Yep. smile

Creepy short story coming next post. tongue

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waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 16:45:35

What name should I use for the main character... hmmm...

echs · 2011-05-22 16:46:42

waveOSBeta wrote:
What name should I use for the main character... hmmm...

echs :DDDDDDDDDDD

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 16:47:07

An actual name... lol

BTW, when I got home, I got a dense fog advisory on my iTouch... lol, wifi limitations

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Earthboundjeff · 2011-05-22 16:54:51

I used to live near Boston.
Then, I moved far, far away...
To a small town 48 minutes from Boston.
So, in effect, I still live in MA, and I always have.
What was the point of this point, again?

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 16:56:19

I live in mi**le*e* county. a MA resident would know.

echs · 2011-05-22 16:57:23

waveOSBeta wrote:
An actual name... lol

BTW, when I got home, I got a dense fog advisory on my iTouch... lol, wifi limitations

Marshall :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

12three · 2011-05-22 16:58:01

waveOSBeta wrote:
I live in mi**le*e* county. a MA resident would know.

did it seriously just bleep out middle east?

echs · 2011-05-22 17:00:30

12three wrote:
waveOSBeta wrote:
I live in mi**le*e* county. a MA resident would know.
did it seriously just bleep out middle east?

No, he bleeped out middlesex county

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 17:00:38

http://kleimo.com/random/name.cfm says Marvin, so...

One day, Marvin was driving to Boston. Little did he know that his day trip was about to take a turn for the worst. As he approached Boston, he noticed something unusual. He couldn't see a single building. It took him a couple of seconds to notice the immense patch of dense, jet black fog. Just then, his car entered Boston. It was too late. He felt a choking sensation as he was going under the Ted Williams tunnel. So did his parents. Suddenly, the car stopped. Marvin looked in the front seat, and, sure enough, his parents had fallen asleep. The clock was at 5:55. Quickly, Marvin turned off the car and jumped out. All of the traffic in the tunnel had come to a standstill. Boston had become a silent, desolate wasteland. So, Marvin opened the emergency door, heart throbbing. He went up the stairs and emerged on a street. He couldn't see the name, due to the fog. Just then, a hand grabbed his shoulder.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Marshall? Too late, lol... xD

Ah, Norfolk. lol

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Earthboundjeff · 2011-05-22 17:00:46

No.
Its a county in MA.
I live in N*rfo*k

12three · 2011-05-22 17:00:51

echs wrote:
12three wrote:
waveOSBeta wrote:
I live in mi**le*e* county. a MA resident would know.
did it seriously just bleep out middle east?
No, he bleeped out middlesex county

ah

echs · 2011-05-22 17:01:46

Earthboundjeff wrote:
No.
Its a county in MA.
I live in N*rfo*k

Norfolk is in VA too

Sunrise-Moon · 2011-05-22 17:01:58

12three wrote:
waveOSBeta wrote:
I live in mi**le*e* county. a MA resident would know.
did it seriously just bleep out middle east?

It might be offensive to some people.

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 17:02:42

That, and I don't want to give away my location that easy... lol

echs · 2011-05-22 17:03:49

waveOSBeta wrote:
That, and I don't want to give away my location that easy... lol

Luckily I used to live in Reading and so I know it's middlesex county...(:D)

12three · 2011-05-22 17:05:20

Sunrise-Moon wrote:
12three wrote:
waveOSBeta wrote:
I live in mi**le*e* county. a MA resident would know.
did it seriously just bleep out middle east?
It might be offensive to some people.

middle eastern??

I'm tired of people being so paranoid about terrorists; they exist but its like Americas new scapegoat

echs · 2011-05-22 17:06:44

12three wrote:
Sunrise-Moon wrote:
12three wrote:

did it seriously just bleep out middle east?
It might be offensive to some people.
middle eastern??

I'm tired of people being so paranoid about terrorists; they exist but its like Americas new scapegoat

Finally something I can agree on with you

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 17:09:05

Okay, no more derailment. Look at the story!

waveOSBeta · 2011-05-22 17:16:54

feedback on the story..?

12three · 2011-05-22 17:17:46

echs wrote:
12three wrote:
Sunrise-Moon wrote:

It might be offensive to some people.
middle eastern??

I'm tired of people being so paranoid about terrorists; they exist but its like Americas new scapegoat
Finally something I can agree on with you

I think that we agree on other things sir

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