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Hello people. Guess what I've done? I finished part one of Teleport Terrors! Well, actually I finished it ages ago, but I've just decided to show you now. Anyway, where it is:


Goldie looked around him. He couldn’t see anything. It was pitch black. He was feeling a little bit weak from using a lot of his electricity on the bombs, but the material he was made from would create more after a while. Suddenly, a spot light turned on, pointing at Goldie. He shielded his eyes from the bright light.

Another spot light pointing at Goldie turned on. Several more turned on, forming a circle of spot lights around him. He could hardly see a thing, only a fairly large area of the ground around his feet.

The spot lights tilted up to the ceiling, which was made out of very reflective material, and lit up the whole room. Goldie saw that the area of the ground around his feet was the only ground there was! He was standing on top of a very large pillar. The room it was in was massive, and it was like the inside of a cone.

Goldie looked down to try and see the floor. He couldn’t. It was too far down. Goldie examined the pillar he was standing on. He put his eye to it, and realised that it was hollow. He stood up again, and punched a hole in the ground. His fist went right through. He pulled it out and dropped head first through the hole.

He flipped back over so he was falling feet first. Goldie wondered what was at the bottom. The inside of the pillar was almost pitch black, with only the faint light from the room above. Suddenly, after a very quick jolt of pain, Goldie found himself flying towards a wall at very high speed inside a small room. He smashed into the wall, and slid to the floor.

Goldie looked around, and realised that he was in a completely different place than he was a few seconds ago. He could hear the noise of a vacuum cleaner nearby. He saw it behind him, lying on the floor. Suddenly, he was being sucked towards the vacuum cleaner! He was squeezed into it and realised that he was flying back up the inside of the pillar. He looked up and through the hole at the top of the pillar, he saw space! Stars and all!

Goldie could feel the air rush past him as he continued to be sucked upwards. He shot out of the pillar, and above him he saw that the ceiling had gone. He could see stars, and lots of dust. He suddenly realised that he was covered dust, and there were loads of it flying up too.

After a few seconds, he reached the top of the cone shaped room and shot out the top, into space! He was still travelling upwards uncontrollably, but when he looked down and around him he managed to get a glimpse of what looked like a desert, before he was suddenly transported to another room!

It was a massively large room, with nothing in it. There weren’t even windows. Suddenly, a giant metal square appeared in front of him! Goldie walked up to it and poked it. A ripple appeared around the area where Goldie poked it. A robotic voice came from the metal box.

“Recording pressure data,” it said. “Pressure data recorded. 2 points out of 100 points of pressure measured.”

Goldie was puzzled, as one would be if they were falling through a large, dark pillar one moment, in a normal house room the next, then being sucked up the large black pillar again and flying into space and ending up in a large room where huge metal boxes magically appear.

He decided it would be a fun idea to see if he could get top points, so he punched the metal box as hard as he could. A huge ripple went through the metal box, and it was thrown back into the wall. It smashed through the wall, creating a way out. Goldie heard the noise of something being destroyed behind him. He turned around to see what it was, and saw the metal box smashed half way through the wall. He turned back to where the box was before and he saw that it was still there! He looked behind him again, to make sure he wasn’t imagining it.

It was definitely there, behind him, and it was in front of him at the same time! Goldie turned back around and walked towards the one in front of him. He pushed it forward slowly, and looked behind him. He could see the other one was moving as well. He continued pushing it until it was all the way through the wall.

It disappeared. Goldie looked behind him again, and saw that the other box was still there. In front of him, through the hole in the wall the metal box had made, all he could see was darkness. There was absolutely nothing through the hole. Nothing he could see, at least.

He stretched out his hand towards the darkness. The tip of his hand disappeared! He pulled it out of the darkness, and his hand was normal again. Goldie then stretched out his hand again, but further this time. More of his hand disappeared. He then leant forward and pocked his head into the darkness.

Goldie found himself looking straight at the metal box. He looked behind him, and saw that the rest of his body wasn’t there! He could still feel the rest of his body, he just could see it. He walked forward, still looking at where the rest of his body should be.

After a few steps forward, the rest of his body appeared! He could see that he’d stepped out of the hole in the wall the box had created. He turned around and looked at the metal box only a foot in front of him. Goldie then jumped back through the hole in the wall. He saw the same large metal box in front of him, but it was at the other side of the room!

Goldie jumped back and forth through the hole a few times to make sure he wasn’t imagining it. He walked over to another part of the wall that wasn’t broken and punched a wall through it. He looked behind him and saw his fist poking out through the wall behind him.

Goldie had had a nightmare like this once. He thought back to it, trying to remember how he escaped. He remembered that he didn’t escape, and instead an army of bunnies dug their way up into the room and attacked him. That gave him an idea.

He punched the floor next to the wall as hard as he could. He repeated this again and again, gradually making a tunnel going into the ground. Once he was a few feet under the ground, he began digging forward to get past the wall of the room. Once he’d gone another few feet, he began tunnelling upwards.

When he arrived at the surface, he saw that he was in another room. This was a much smaller room, with lots of metal tables. There were many complicated looking devices on the tables. Goldie climbed out of the hole in the floor and examined one of the devices.

It looked a lot like Sir Alan Salt’s remote control he used to fire his employees, except this one had a big blue button on it, not a red one. It also had the words “Byson Gravity Reverser” on the back. Goldie put it down and walked over to another table which had things on it that looked very similar, but they had the words “Byson EMP Blaster” written on them.

There were numerous other devices on the other tables, but Goldie didn’t have time to look through them all. He had to find a way out. He around the room, but he couldn’t see any door. He heard something from behind him, and spun round. He could feel the ground shaking ever so slightly. Suddenly, the huge metal box from the other room jumped out of the ground in front of him! It once again spoke.

“Intelligence measured. Strength measured. Results doubled and activated.”

Suddenly, it began to melt! After a few seconds, Goldie realised that only some of it was melting. The outside of it melted away to reveal a figure inside. It was a dog! A very large metal dog. It looked directly at Goldie and said:

“Target located. Target will be destroyed in 3, 2, 1…”

What is the evil large metal robot dog going to do to Goldie?! Find out next time!