Scratch

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[EDIT]:

Re-opened.

To my understanding, this thread was intended to share a story, not act like some kind of spam thread. Treat it like any other story thread - you can give ideas on how to improve it, but if you don't like the topic genre, well, go try reading something else you would enjoy instead of putting your frustration into a mean non-constructive comment.

Last edited by cheddargirl (2011-05-15 14:16:12)

It's actually quite the interesting concept:
I couldn't see past the fact that it had something to do with Lavender Town.
Sorry.. 

somelia wrote:

bananaman114 wrote:

It's actually quite the interesting concept:
I couldn't see past the fact that it had something to do with Lavender Town.
Sorry.. 

Should I continue it?

I don't know.
To me it seems like you won't be able to run much farther with this concept, but if you feel you can then by all means go ahead.

cheddargirl wrote:

somelia wrote:

bananaman114 wrote:

It's actually quite the interesting concept:
I couldn't see past the fact that it had something to do with Lavender Town.
Sorry.. 

Should I continue it?

Maybe you could add some more description in the original story first before continuing. You can probably elaborate on the death scene part since that is usually the most dramatic part of the story. Here's some questions to think about that might help with the description process: how and when were you found dead? Did your friend find you? What time was it? When did your friend decide to look up the Scratch projects?

That sounded really wierd.
I mean, if I was asked that in reality.. 

somelia wrote:

bananaman114 wrote:

cheddargirl wrote:

Maybe you could add some more description in the original story first before continuing. You can probably elaborate on the death scene part since that is usually the most dramatic part of the story. Here's some questions to think about that might help with the description process: how and when were you found dead? Did your friend find you? What time was it? When did your friend decide to look up the Scratch projects?

That sounded really wierd.
I mean, if I was asked that in reality.. 

Yeah, asking someone when they were found dead. xDDDD

You know, it also sounds really weird asking that kind of stuff in reality. Imagine asking some random person on the street those kinds of questions. XD

But, in terms of just the story context, though, they should help in making the story more descriptive. 

VERSION 2


Hello, past Scratchers. I am turtleeggonstick from the future on my dear friend Somelia's account.

News has it that she died. Of Lavender Town Syndrome. *sigh* We used to joke a lot about this, in 2011.

"Hey Somelia!" I would say.

"Yeah?"

"I'm dead."

"Of Lavender Town Syndrome."

Both of us would then scream, and then laugh.

But she apparently had the real Syndrome and was found dead in her room, her Nintendo DS on. Her mom walked into her room, which was a hallway, and announced that it was time for dinner. She got no response from Somelia, and gasped, kneeling down by her bed. She was dead. with a lifeless grasp on her DSi.

I was given her computer after her death (she wrote her own will some time before this, and I got the computer), so I opened it up and found a Scratch project called "Sad." That was it. Just called "Sad." I opened it up, and it had three songs from Pokemon video games. One was N's Farewell from Pokemon Black and White, one was I Don't Want to Say Goodbye from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 2, and the last one was the Pokemon Tower theme.

There was a comment attached to the script that made them play, saying "Sounds have been edited. This should be the last step to the experiment."

I have shared this project to her account, and have been too scared to listen to it ever since...

...but I am feeling an overwhelming temptation, so I have shared it to somelia's account. Tell me in the comments if you feel any...side effects after listening to it.

soupoftomato wrote:

I couldn't get past the fact it had something to do with Pokemon.

. . .

I'm obsessed. OK?

somelia wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

I couldn't get past the fact it had something to do with Pokemon.

. . .

I'm obsessed. OK?

. . .

It's for little kids. OK?

-iNetMaster- wrote:

I consider 10 or 11 little

Preteens are almost not kids, let alone little ones.

I'm going by Kid, Preteen, Teen (where you're no longer a kid.)

And then...

TURTLEEGONSTICK SAW THE GOAT!

agscratcher wrote:

And then...

TURTLEEGONSTICK SAW THE GOAT!

Oh lol. xD

You joke about death a lot o_O