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#1 2011-04-27 21:16:23
Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
Art will be by:
lilacfuzz101
and/or
danielhime
and/or
Jaiku
Idea Art:
Voices will be:
Scratchy - williambl (link to rough draft try out voice) (link to voice 2)
Other - Jaiku
Other - Maygenr
Scratch, The Movie Screen-Script - I need help making a movie on Scratch! It will be fictional. Or shall I say, based on a true thing that happened on Scratch. (Think about the only exiting thing that happened on Scratch which would be worth writing about.) After done with the Screen script I will call in actors from Scratch, some I will most likely want: sparks, coolstuff, Paddle2See, possibly Alternatives, Swifty and Dave (swifty2), lightnin, mres, ProgrammingFreak, others.
Here it is:
Scene 1: Saying Hello
Scratchy: Hello! My name is Scratchy, yes the Scratch cat! That’s my name, but most people call me 'The Scratch Cat'.
Scratchy's mom: The Scratch Cat, did you finish cleaning your room?
Scratchy: Mom not right now, I am doing an interview, for uhh, err, School.
Scratchey's little brother: Red herring! That has nothing to do with it! You didn't answer her question!
Scratchy: Well, it's true, and, mom?
Mom: Yes?
Scratchy: I uh... (whispers)
Mom: WHAT! YOU DIDN'T CLEAN YOUR ROOM! THEN YOU WILL HAVE TO STAY IN IT UNTIL YOU CLEAN IT!
Scratchy (moaning): This is so embarrassing.
Scratchy: uh... just a sec.
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]
Scene 2: Out of the room
Scratchy: There, all clean. Now I will show you some of my favorite shows...
Scratchy: (Walks over to old bunny ear TV)... (Switches to channel 52)
Scratchy: There is my favorite show, cooking with mres!... (Switches to channel 12) Another one of my favorites is This Old Canoe - with Paddle2See! By the way, I really just wanted to watch TV, I didn't care too much about you watching, but decided to show you... (watches TV for a while)
[suddenly: BEEP BEEP BEEP!]
Announcer (I think ProgrammingFreak (get it PROGRAMMINGFreak, inturupting the PROGRAM)): This is not a test.
[BEEP BEEP BEEP...]
Announcer: We interrupt this program for an important announcement. There is a hacker in our midst!
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]
Scene 3: Kaj Returns
[In blackness you see red eyes appear.]
Kaj: Bwa Mwa Ha HAAAAA!
[Screen goes black]
[On still black screen white words appear: "Much Later..."]
[Shows end of part 3 of swifty2's Target series]
[Zooms out and see MakiTak sitting on a couch watching TV (the swifty episode)]
[Zooms out more to see a whole town (Scratch Town I suppose)]
[Shows multiple clips of projects with Kaj in them just flashing through a couple of seconds each]
[Screen goes black again]
[Screen shows Scratchy riding bike or scooter home from school]
Scratchy: (hum hum humm humm hummmmm)...
[car passes and/or butterfly flies in front of screen]
[ When butterfly gets in front of screen, the screen changes to Scratchy sitting at a table eating dinner (whatever is easiest to draw for the drawer)]
Scratchy: (gulps up his food quickly, walks over to the TV) (may take 2 room pictures)
Scratchy: (sits on couch turns on TV to see Cool Gadgets with coolstuf)
[suddenly: BEEP BEEP BEEP!]
Announcer: This is not a test.
[BEEP BEEP BEEP...]
Announcer: We interrupt this program for an important announcement. Kaj has returned!
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]
Scene 4: SWAT Team Finds Kaj
[Screen fades in to see a SWAT team (Scratch Weapons Assault Team) AKA moderators (okay, so moderators may not physically attack you, but I had to make it SWAT, my other idea was super heroes, see what I mean)]
[Hear sirens in background, SWAT team backs against wall]
[Screen changes to see a shadow walking towards the corner which SWAT team is on]
[Screen changes back to SWAT team, guy at the end of the wall turns to see the other wall (but the screen doesn't see the corner) for a second and then quickly turns back]
SWAT guy at corner (whisper): He's coming our way, I think we've got him.
SWAT guy: (turns to see over corner, but doesn't turn back)
[Screen changes to see the shadow gone]
[Screen changes to see SWAT guy at corner now from a different view, looking from the corner of the shadow with the side of the SWAT guy]
SWAT guy (softly): What the...
*CLICK*
Guy behind gun: Now put down your weapons and give me that communicator
[Screen zooms out to see SWAT Team all tied up around some trees, and a SWAT guy with gun to the head which is being held by another member of the SWAT team]
[Screen Fades To Black And Scene Ends]
Scene 5: MakiTak Gets Hacked!
[fades in from black, see makitak watching swifty2's beach episode (the TV can be a screenshot taken from it)]
makitak: HO HA HA! (laughing at a part of the video)
makitak: (throws piece of popcorn in air)
[screen zooms in to makitak's shoulders & up]
makitak: (closes eye's opens mouth wide & waits for the popcorn to fall)
makitak: (waits a second, then opens eyes and closes mouth) HUH?!?
makitak: (turns around and looks in the shadows of the hallway behind the family room.)
[screen changes to show the shadows of the hall]
makitak: hmm...
[screen zooms in to makitak's shoulders & up again]
makitak: (turns to TV and shrugs)
[screen zooms in to TV screen, watching the near to end of swifty beach last episode]
[just before the show ends the TV turns off]
makitak: (looks down next to him on the couch. TV remote isn't there!) How the...
makitak: (stops suddenly, looks like falls asleep) ouhhhh... (sounds like a moan. eyes close)
makitak: (sits up straight, eyes open and are glowing red, smiles a sinister smile)
Thats all I have so far, if you want to help with making the project, art, or being one of the voices, please do! If you have any suggestions please tell me! Tell me what you think of it!
~Pecola1
Last edited by Pecola1 (2011-05-19 09:23:47)
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#2 2011-04-28 13:07:50
Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
WELL! ANYONE? IS NO ONE GOING TO LOOK AT THIS?!?
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#3 2011-04-28 13:28:36
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
I looked at it. I like it! 
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#5 2011-04-28 17:36:34
- bananaman114
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
Maybe.
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#6 2011-04-28 17:45:36
- lilacfuzz101
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Luv it! i could attempt art i guess 
(i only read as far as kaj coming- but it seems like a great idea )
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#7 2011-04-28 21:50:34
- scratcher7_13
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
Pecola1 wrote:
Scratch, The Movie Screen-Script - I need help making a movie on Scratch! It will be fictional. Or shall I say, based on a true thing that happened on Scratch. (Think about the only exiting thing that happened on Scratch which would be worth writing about.) After done with the Screen script I will call in actors from Scratch, some I will most likely want: sparks, coolstuff, Paddly2See, possibly Alternatives, Swifty and Dave (swifty2), lightnin, mres, cheddargirl or ProgrammingFreak, others.
Was this purposeful?
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#8 2011-04-28 21:51:57
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I could help!
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#9 2011-04-29 22:43:24
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Wow! It took 2 days then all of a sudden people look at it! I am posting a project with some horrible art just to show the idea!
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#10 2011-04-29 22:44:24
Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
scratcher7_13 wrote:
Pecola1 wrote:
Scratch, The Movie Screen-Script - I need help making a movie on Scratch! It will be fictional. Or shall I say, based on a true thing that happened on Scratch. (Think about the only exiting thing that happened on Scratch which would be worth writing about.) After done with the Screen script I will call in actors from Scratch, some I will most likely want: sparks, coolstuff, Paddly2See, possibly Alternatives, Swifty and Dave (swifty2), lightnin, mres, cheddargirl or ProgrammingFreak, others.
Was this purposeful?
Wa'da y'a mean?
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#11 2011-04-29 22:50:45
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I got the idea art put up.
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#12 2011-04-29 22:52:53
Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
scratcher7_13 wrote:
Pecola1 wrote:
Scratch, The Movie Screen-Script - I need help making a movie on Scratch! It will be fictional. Or shall I say, based on a true thing that happened on Scratch. (Think about the only exiting thing that happened on Scratch which would be worth writing about.) After done with the Screen script I will call in actors from Scratch, some I will most likely want: sparks, coolstuff, Paddly2See, possibly Alternatives, Swifty and Dave (swifty2), lightnin, mres, cheddargirl or ProgrammingFreak, others.
Was this purposeful?
If you mean does he really need to be in it, now that i think of it no, my old idea with super heroes (which was very cheesy) had him in it. But now I don't know, I was thinking of making the SWAT not moderators, and instead have an A-Team like team with them in it.
If you are reading this, please read to the end, because if you don't you won't know what's at the end. Don't just skip to the end though otherwise you won't be able to read the middle, which is most important. Now you must be wondering why you just read all that, the reason is you may have not noticed something, read it again and see if you notice it this time
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#13 2011-04-29 22:59:48
Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
ProgrammingFreak wrote:
I looked at it. I like it!
Would you want to be the announcer? Do you have a Mic? Ch*dd*rG*rl said she couldn't. 
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Last edited by Pecola1 (2011-04-30 11:46:32)
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#14 2011-04-29 23:02:15
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scratcher7_13 wrote:
I could help!
What do you want? I just am the writer you could in the end be the person who puts it together into a project
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#15 2011-05-01 14:37:12
- lilacfuzz101
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
whoa.. i might be able to help ok? depends on if i have time so see if others can help too ok?
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#17 2011-05-01 17:52:15
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lilacfuzz101 wrote:
whoa.. i might be able to help ok? depends on if i have time so see if others can help too ok?
Okay. (or is it o.k.?)
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#18 2011-05-01 17:54:37
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williambl wrote:
I could do voices!
Great! Like who? Could you make a quick project for a tryout for the people. Not that i'd reject you, just I wan't to hear your voice to see if you would have a great voice for someone else, I mainly wanted people who were the actors (cartoon characters) to do their own voice, but it could be best to have them different.
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#19 2011-05-03 20:18:28
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Anyone?
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#20 2011-05-04 12:58:55
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Don't talk so much guys. ;D (insert sarcasm symbol here)
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#22 2011-05-06 11:43:25
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williambl wrote:
Ah! Got them up! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/williambl/1765156
You're hired!
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#23 2011-05-06 12:53:11
Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
Pecola1 wrote:
scratcher7_13 wrote:
Pecola1 wrote:
Scratch, The Movie Screen-Script - I need help making a movie on Scratch! It will be fictional. Or shall I say, based on a true thing that happened on Scratch. (Think about the only exiting thing that happened on Scratch which would be worth writing about.) After done with the Screen script I will call in actors from Scratch, some I will most likely want: sparks, coolstuff, Paddly2See, possibly Alternatives, Swifty and Dave (swifty2), lightnin, mres, cheddargirl or ProgrammingFreak, others.
Was this purposeful?
If you mean does he really need to be in it, now that i think of it no, my old idea with super heroes (which was very cheesy) had him in it. But now I don't know, I was thinking of making the SWAT not moderators, and instead have an A-Team like team with them in it.
What he meant was did you intentionally put 'y' instead of 'e' in his name. The story seems cool but I don't really want to help- sorry.
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#24 2011-05-06 13:12:40
- militarydudes
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Re: Scratch - The Movie! (Screen Script)
You do know Kaj was a real user? Weather or not he ever hacked anyone is debatable.
That said, I think it would be wise to change Kaj's name to something else.
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#25 2011-05-06 15:26:03
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werdna123 wrote:
Pecola1 wrote:
scratcher7_13 wrote:
Was this purposeful?If you mean does he really need to be in it, now that i think of it no, my old idea with super heroes (which was very cheesy) had him in it. But now I don't know, I was thinking of making the SWAT not moderators, and instead have an A-Team like team with them in it.
What he meant was did you intentionally put 'y' instead of 'e' in his name. The story seems cool but I don't really want to help- sorry.
Oh... LOL! No I didn't!
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