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agscratcher wrote:

MrMokey wrote:

Im finally done, but I dont think it looks very good.

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss28 … uegota.gif

I guess that's the statue it possessed. That would be a better Kamigao in my opinion, due to the angel like features.

Yeah, I guess it would be better like that. You can choose which you want it to be, because you created the idea. I bet you cant guess what pokemon parts I put in 

MrMokey wrote:

eh? (whoa that sounded canadian) What do you mean blazerv?

Looks like a cobras head to me. Whatever, nice job.

Expanded story:

As always, you start out in your room in a small town. This town is named Everset Town, and it's on the coastline of the region known as Belumn. After recieving the latest technology, the PokéPhone, your mother tells you to go to the Pokémart. A letter has been sent addressed to you. The letter was sent by the Prof. Beech, wanting to meet you on Route 1. Leave the Pokémart to recieve your Running Shoes. At Route 1 (above Everset Town) the Professer will be waiting for you along with another trainer, who will become your rival. The professer is holding a briefcase. Inside are three Pokéballs, and one will be your starter Pokémon. You decide that you should get the eight Belumn gym badges, in order to challenge the Belumn Pokémon League. Along the way, you face the dastardly/diabolical/devious/etc. Team Hydra. Their goal is to avenge the deaths of Pokémon, and to that end plan to use the Limbo Pokémon (Sadakata and Kamigao) to further their ends. As you beat gyms and fight off Team Hydra, your rival fights you at various points. Halfway through, Team Hydra has constructed a device to summon on of the two (In Crimson, they try to summon Kamigao, while in Chrome, they try to summon Sadakata). To stop them, you forcibly absorb the Pokémon into your body. This destroys the device, but it leads you vulnerable to corruption. To prevent corruption, you visit a medium who suppresses the Pokémon. After the 8th gym, you see that Team Hydra has reconstructed the Balance Stone, an ancient artifact that is connected to the two Pokémon. One of the two brothers who rules Team Hydra (Crimsona Bloodstone in Crimson, Chroma Bloodstone in Chrome) takes the balance stone to Death Cave/Mt. Pierce (depending on the version) to revive the other Pokémon. After you catch up to him, he reveals that Sadakata was an amalgamation of hatred and bloodshed over the centuries, and a sect of monks made Kamigao to stop him. The battle caused a huge natural disaster that sealed the two away. (Sadakata fell into a crevice of an earthquake that lead to Death Cave, while a storm lead Kamigao to the summit of Mt. Pierce) He plans to use the two to stop the death of Pokémon. As he summons Sadakata/Kamigao, the one you absorbed reawakens, and manages to hold off the summoning. Enraged, Crimsona/Chroma battles you. (And I personally think that his battle theme should be this) Afterwards, however, Sadakata/Kamigao fights off the other and finishes summoning. You can then battle it and either knock it out or capture it. Afterwards, you go on to beat the Elite Four and the Champion. However, after beating the champion, your rival walks up, revealing that he was the son of Crimsona/Chroma. He then battles you to "avenge" his father. When you win, Crimsona and Chroma come in and tell him that what they did was wrong, and that he didn't have to avenge them. Afterwards, you name gets recorded in the Hall of Fame, and you win.

This isn't final, so changes can be added. 

Last edited by agscratcher (2011-04-12 12:39:26)

MrMokey wrote:

Are you creating the story?

I just thought I might add on to it. It's really just an idea. However, I AM good at creating story and plot for various things.

MrMokey wrote:

Im not 

BTW, when I was typing "I AM good at making story and plot", I typed "I AM god at making story and plot"

blazerv82 wrote:

agscratcher wrote:

MrMokey wrote:

Are you creating the story?

I just thought I might add on to it. It's really just an idea. However, I AM good at creating story and plot for various things.

I would say you are good at plot.

I really enjoyed it, and you may want to expand on the corruption part. Maybe a flashback or something at some point, revealing more of the past of whoever got absorbed into "you".

I don't know how that would work, but things like that are always interesting.

Why not? This was more of an outline, like those "Plot" sections in Wikipedia articles.

MrMokey wrote:

agscratcher wrote:

MrMokey wrote:

Im not 

BTW, when I was typing "I AM good at making story and plot", I typed "I AM god at making story and plot"

tsk tsk tsk

Waaasp-ump

Cool, but for some reason it just doesn't seem like a real Pokemon.

The form is good, but I think it just has too much color. 

Last edited by TheGameMaster1231 (2011-04-12 15:56:57)

Yeah, more Pokemon ideas! 

Name: Still working on it.

Type(s): Normal, Poison

Appearance: A brown, hairy spider (which of course has 8 legs). On the bottom of the spider's legs are blades, that look exactly like leaves. The blades can inject poison into the foe.

Name: Satellmite

Type(s): Electric

Appearance: It looks like this:



Except instead of that big circle blob thing in the middle, there is a bug that looks like a worm (or maybe a caterpillar).

Example pics coming soon. 

WHOA JUST REALIZED THIS WAS MY 1000TH POST! WOOT!

Last edited by TheGameMaster1231 (2011-04-12 17:42:49)

I think you should stick with fire,water,grass

MrMokey wrote:

I think you should stick with fire,water,grass

Eh, ok. I'll think of something. I mean, we already have legendaries who evolve from other Pokémon. Not to mention Dark-->Fighting-->Psychic works. Anyway, if you want the standard starters, I'm not arguing.

Lots of posts...

Note-I believe the legendaries should be dragons-one is a wurm dragon, and the other is a wyvern. Also, I have ALOT of the game plot to add on from where I ended the writing.

I have designed Silmite's line and now I need to sprite it.